hiya! you've probably never read any of my previous story's, if you have, i feel sorry for you- this is my genuine attempt at a good story. constructive criticism is welcome. plain insults will be discarded. without fudther delay, let's begin!
it was a beautiful day outside, birds were singing, flowers were blooming, on dayz lole these, kids like me... should be battling!
"Vaporeon! use water gun!" Vaporeon obeyed, firing a blast of water at the Vulpix, knocking it back. "follow up by tackle!" my Vaporeon ran and tackled the vulpix, knocking it onto it's side"now finish it with hydro pump!"my Vaporeon looked at me with a questioning glance"did i stutter?!" the Vaporeon whimpered and did as it was told, blasting the Vulpix agenst a tree. i walked over and tapped it with a pokeball, but it didn't work"what?" i tried a few times but eventually gave up"what a waste..."i was about to walk away when a ninetails jumped out from a bush in front of me, it's eyes glowed a deep red. i felt extreme pain all over my body,this was the worst pain I've ever felt. i passed out soon After
so, what'd ya think? it's not that good, well in reality it's shit, but it's something I've been wanting to write for a while. the next chapter will be out in a while