This is my first story I've ever written. Please review and leave any helpful comments. I would love to hear if anybody has any suggestions on better ways to able to tell whose talking and ways to tell their thoughts and actions Thanks for reading! Rated M for later chapters, and words in italics are their thoughts.
Arizona's POV:
beep beep beep ughhh it's 1a.m.maybe I can just ignore it beep beep beep ugh I guess not it says VIP. looks at Callie, god she's so beautiful and looks so peaceful when she's sleeping. Shakes Cal awake. "Cal baby I have to go it's a VIP." "Mmkay love you" "I love you too baby sleep good"
gets to the hospital
"Robbins where you been I've been waiting?!"
"Richard it's 1 in the morning I was sleeping with my very comfy wife"
"Well this is important I need them in and out and no one can know they're here. Can you do that?"
"Yea sure who is it?"
"Before I tell you, you have to treat them like everybody else got it?"
"Yea of course sir"
"She wanted the best for her son, that's why you're here"
"Omg Richard just tell me who it is?!"
Webber pulls back the curtain
So what do you guys think? Continue? Any suggestions? Thanks again for reading!