HEY!, This is a rewrite for Origin Devil. I've been thinking this past few months, and i thought of how this story would go. Also, this is a test story, somewhat of a practice for me. I also think that the story will diverge from the plot and all. Hopefully, this goes well. If it doesn't, you'll just see this story dead or something.
WARNING: WRONG GRAMMAR, NOT THAT PERFECT OF A WRITING, I TRIED MY BEST. NOT REALLY. BUT THIS IS STILL NOT EDITED
- changed the name of the OC by the way.
A lot has been changed, I also won't reveal any pairings or if this will be harem because most of the time my decision. changes easily.
Chapter I: Exordium
" Once upon a time, there was a onyx-haired goddess that walked the earth. She was fierce and powerful, kind and loyal, brave and noble. She wasn't all-knowing and all-powerful. She wasn't an immortal goddess like Athena or Artemis. She bleeds and death could come for her at any moment. Faced with battles and war, she stands brave with determination in her eyes, even though her knees shake in fear and her stomach aches in pain. She stands with bravery and elegance. As her onyx coloured hair flows with beauty..."
" AMAZING!! " An eight year old girl with medium sized and black coloured hair with violet eyes exclaimed, gazing at the woman holding her with a grin on her mouth.
The woman holding the girl that was sitting on her lap giggled as she petted the girl's head. The woman had bright yellow hair with blue eyes and a gentle smile on her lips.
" Hahaha, you're so cute, ko-chan~ "
" Read it again!! Read it again!! Please Rika-nee~ "
" Nope, you have to go to sleep, young girl. It's way past your curfew. " Rika said carrying the girl to her bed. Placing her on the bed, as she tucked the girl in.
Smiling softly at the girl as she kissed her on the forehead.
" Have a good sleep, my heart. I will be here when you wake up. "
" Good night, Rika-nee "
Rika stared at the shining full moon with her head filled with thoughts of the young girl that she had just tucked in. Rika was one of the workers of the Shinzo Orphanage. A place located in the mountains where rarely people come by. A population of 101 children, 10 workers, 1 head manager.
The early years of the orphanage composed of 100 children yet eight years ago, on one lonesome night, in where she was left alone with the kids. A knock was heard at the door, wondering who could be knocking at the door at midnight. She went and opened it.
Gasping at what her eyes see, a baby wrapped in a brown blanket placed outside the orphanage with no person there but the baby, accompanied by the soft breeze.
Picking up the baby, she whispered, " I wonder how you got here, young one but do not worry, you are not alone, you will never be alone. "
Her eyes observed the baby, looking for anything. Seeing a green crystal necklace wrapped around the baby and small letters knitted around the brown blanket.
' Tsukihana, this must be your last name. To think that your parents or guardian left you here without even naming you yet. ' Rika thought, looking at the baby with pity.
After 3 years, Rika concluded that the kid was one of messiest kids that they have ever took care of. They still didn't know where the kid came from and no one had come to the orphanage that was interested with the kid or knew of the kid.
One of the things that they could also say about the kid was that she was an emotional kid. At the age of three, she cries when one of her siblings cry. She gets angry when one of the workers get angry. Well, she was still three, so it would be just because whatever she sees with those young eyes of hers, would be what she learns.
" Ri-Ri...Ri-ka" Hearing her name, she looked at the small onyx haired bundle holding her robe, she smiles.
" What is it, Ko-chan? "
" H-Hungry "
" Then, let's go eat with your siblings "
The onyx haired girl grinned hugging Rika. Holding her hand, Rika took her to the dining room in where the other kids were.
" Ko!!!! COME HERE! " A boy at the age of five exclaimed. He was one of the oldest of the children. He had an average black hair and black eyes.
" Ryota, no shouting. " Rika said to the boy. Rika and the young girl went to the table and sat at a chair with the girl on Rika's lap.
" Let's eat! "
And now eight years has passed since she found the girl on their doorsteps. At first she felt pity for the girl due to her being abandoned as a baby. Yet as years passed by, the baby grew on her to the point that it was like she was her own daughter or sister. The girl became one of the most important people in her life. She was also the one who named the girl, so it felt like the girl became her responsibility, someone that Rika couldn't just let go. It hurts knowing that one day, the girl might leave this place, leave her.
Staring at the bright moon, mind filled with thoughts of the young girl that she had just tucked in. A feeling rose in her chest. She didn't know if it was a bad or good feeling. All she knew that it was about that eight year old girl sleeping on the bed the room that she had just come out from.
" Kokoro..."
AN. So this is the beginning of the chapter. Reviews are kindly appreciated but no flaming please. We are still in the pre-storyline to set the story of the main character or just basically set the story. As you can see, I have changed the character's name from Yona to Kokoro. I deeply apologize for the wrong grammar and some messy writing style. This is just a Test Story to help me with improving. I hope this goes well. Drop some reviews or suggestions kindly. I'll take it into consideration.
- Hope you like the new version of Origin Devil, now Fight For My Way.