Hi Guys so I am a new to fan fiction but I love reading fifty shades of grey fan fiction, I have an idea for a story. Please take it easy on me I will try my best to proof read and everything.

so a lil back story go my idea for a story back when Christian is still living with his birth mom i decided to add another character and pretend that christian has a biological older brother named Noah.

so here it goes:

The crack whores apartment

Noah 4 years old P.O.V

Mommy is laying on the dirty mattress moaning and panting, she said that she is having a baby. All of a sudden mommy screams real loud and then there is quieter cry and there in mommy's hands is a tiny baby covered in blood and white stuff, so gross.

"Noah come here and meet your new baby brother Christian" as I walk over to mommy and kneel down beside her I look at the baby at that moment the baby opens his eyes and seems to look straight at me, and i fall in love.

" Hi christian, I am your brother Noah and I will protect you forever" I say and then softly kiss him on his forehead. I don't know what happened but at that moment I promised Christian that as long as I was around I would always protect him.

4 years later

Christian P.O.V

Mommy is passed out on the green couch again and my tummy hurts, I am so hungry but I am too scared to get out of my hiding spot. i am scared the mean man will hurt me again. I don't know where Noah is, he always protects me from the bad man but he's been gone for 4 days already.

flashback to 4 days ago

"get up you fucking bitch and do your god damm job", the bad man screams at mommy and kicks her in the stomach. All mommy does is moan and pass out again. All of a sudden his boots appear by the table and he leans down and "Found you! if your mommy cant do her job then i guess you will have to do it" he says and grabs Noahs foot and starts pulling him out from under the table. "No let him go, don't hurt him i scream. "shut up you bastard" he says and kicks me in the stomach so hard i fall back and hit my head against the wall. Pain blooming all around my body and the last thing i hear before i black out is Noah screaming "no" and screaming for him to stop hurting him.

When I woke up Noah and the mean man were gone, and since then mommy hasn't moved from the green couch and her body is cold I covered her with my blankie. Then i hear the door opening and the sounds of boots walking across the floor can be heard. I quickly hide underneath the table when I hear strangers talking

" the downstairs neighbour called in and said that there was a horrible smell coming from this apartment, i am going to check the rooms and see if there is anyone in here"

"Rick quickly in here" the strange man walks over to mommy and bends down and touches her neck. "shes gone and has been for a long by the looks of it, I will call the coroner and have them pick her up. Did the neighbour say that there was anyone else living here with here?

"Apparently she had 2 little boys, though this place has no signs that there children living here. i will check the others rooms. Then that man rick i think he's called bends down and looks under the table and see me, I freeze in fright.

"Frank theres a little boy here he seems to be needing medical attention call the hospital and have then send Grace Grey here right away."

"hi son., my names Rick I wont hurt you i just want to help you" he says to me and reaches out to touch me. That when i start screaming no one is allowed to touch me but Noah his touch doesn't hurt. then I hear more foot steps and there knelling down beside frank is a angel smiling down at me. " I wont touch you but can you come out so that I can see you better ?" i do as she says her voice is so soft and kind. "there you go thats much better she says and smiles at me "my name is Grace and I will make all the hurt go away if you come with me" she says holding her hand out got me. putting my dirty small hand in hers I feel safer already and follow her out of the dirty apartment.