DISCLAIMER! I DO NOT ORIGINALLY OWN THIS STORY! THE ORIGINAL STORY IS MADE BY TLT-Hawk, YOU CAN CHECK OUT HIS VERSION ON HIS PROFILE.
Personally, I saw this story and saw there was much to be fixed and the story seemed a bit flawed, and a few parts well... I didn't like, but I won't specify. I hope you like this new version (new to making stories, sorry if it isn't in chapters... I did my best to separate them.) I changed some of the characters, some of the arc, some of the dialogue, and fixed grammar errors and sentence structure errors. I also added one character for a certain part. I hope you enjoy the edited version of the story, and am open to criticism. I did the very best I could to make it at least acceptable. I kept most of the parts from the original story though, since it wasn't all bad or whatnot, ha! Without further ado, enjoy!
Note to TLT-Hawk: I hope you don't mind buddy, if you want to reference from this one to build up yours or whatnot, feel free to! I hope you like this edit of your story, and know I love what you did for your work! It's writers like you whom inspire me!
I do not own Pokemon, GAMEFREAK, a yacht, a gold 7k flat screen tv, or a mansion
NOTE: CHAPTER ORGANIZATION IS WONKEY, SORRY!
