Greetings and bienveneue I am 61394 but you probably knew that already so without further delay the rewritten first chapter of Sanshouo no Naruto
Chapter 1 Salamander
On the battlefield of the fourth Shinobi world war, six ninja faced each other. Three of them were Naruto Namikaze, Sasuke Uchiha and Sakura Haruno; they faced the last three members of the Akatsuki. Behind them two armies clashed one costing of the first through fifth divisions of the Continental Alliance, the other consisted of the white Zetsu clones made from the cell of Hashirama Senju and famous deceased ninja who had been resurrected by Kabuto, Orochimaru's former subordinate.
A little farther away the four of the nine jinchuriki had been ressuserected and were now being fought by shinobi of Uzuushiogakure led by the yondaime Arashikage along with Yui Naruto's Fiancé who was currently engaged in life or death combat with her former sensei Han jinchuriki of the Gobi no Irukuma.
while this was happening Homika Uchiha in her sage mode along with Mikoto Uchiha Kushina Namikaze and Killer B were trying to destroy the Gedo Mezou statue
The six Shinobi faced each other in complete silence, until the one in a hooded black cloak that flowed around him Aogetsu spoke up. "Well I can't say this is a pleasant surprise, you have managed to put a decent hole in our plans."
"Indeed they did." Tobi spoke up. "You even brought Uzuushio with you very impressive…Naruto." Tobi looked down at the smaller man. with his mangeykyo sharingan easily seen through his mask
The young man smirked underneath his mask that covered the lower part of his face much like the famous copycat ninja, his close cropped blonde hair stuck to his forehead due to the heavy rain. His unusuall eyes, consisting of black sclera and silver pupils, gave the masked man a hard look.
"It is over Tobi you have lost." Naruto said, unsealing his Kusarigama from the seal on his left sleeve Naruto was wearing a dark purple jacket with black shoulders black pants and sandals on his right shoulder was the symbol of the Uzumaki clan
"We have lost? My dear children we are not even started yet." Tobi said his voice dripping with venom.
Sasuke who stood left of Naruto snorted loudly. "Kids? We are hardly children anymore as we are fighting in a war are we?" The head of the Uchiha-clan wore a black leather jacket emblazoned with his clan symbol over a dark blue shirt black pants and sandals around his neck was a leather cord hanging from it was a silver ring with a single emerald.
"During my youth it was the norm for children to fight during wars." The last member of the enemies spoke up. He had long black hair and wore the red Shinobi battle armor. This was Madara Uchiha the former head of the Uchiha-clan and one of the most powerful Shinobi to have ever lived. alive now that he was once again flesh and blood
"Your time has long since come and gone Madara." Sakura Haruno spoke up, her pink hair was clearly visible on the field, and unlike her two best friends she wore a dark red shirt with flowing sleeves with a black flak jacket black pants and blue sandals over it all she wore a red cape clasped to her left shoulder with a gold medallion inscribed with the crest of the Kaguya clan
"no woman besides Mito Uzumaki has ever talked back to me" The revived Uchiha retorted his sharingan blazed "I'll have to teach you why are meant to be seen and not heard" his KI focused on Sakura causing Sakura to take a few steps back. Naruto put his hand on her shoulder. "Don't worry Sakura Kimimaro made me promise to protect you so don't worry." Sakura nodded gladly. "thanks but I can take care of myself now"
"I know"
"So how do we do this?" Sasuke questioned his friends, he held the ring around his neck in his hand "as much as I would love to be on the other battle field I guess I have to leave 'Highfather' in the hands of Yota and Sora"
"you know revenge won't bring her back" asked Naruto "yeah I know" said Sasuke gripping onto the handle of his sword sparks flew from his hands "but it would make me feel better"
"If you two don't mind I'll take Tobi, I will make him pay for all the deaths he's caused." Naruto said quietly his voice filled with anger.
Sasuke nodded. "I thought so; in that case I think it will be the battle between the former and current head of the Uchiha." He said as he glared at Madara with his eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.
The legendary Uchiha looked surprised. "You have the same eyes as me…you could be a better dance partner then the Gokage."
Aogetsu turned towards Sakura. drawing a katanna with a serrated cutting side "Well Haruno I guess that leaves you and me Kuzuri is a sword that hasn't seen battle since the Shodaime Mizukage too bad I got it after I had my fun with your boyfriend how is he by the way" Sakura grit her teeth her pupils dilated to the point they nearly vanished Aogetsu took a step back she reminded him of her Grandfather Kakuzu
Suddenly Sakura was in front of him, she punched him against the side of his head, black threads stuck out of her skin wrapped woven tightly around her knuckles giving her punch even more devastating power, that sent Aogetsu flying away. "You are never going to touch Kimimaro again!" Sakura shouted, "I swear it as Hibiki of Otogakure" she jumped after Aogetsu.
Madara looked at Sasuke. "Follow me we will take our fight elsewhere." Sasuke nodded and followed the legendary ninja. but stopped "oi Naruto don't die afterall you need to be my best man" before catching up to Madara
"I'm happy he finds someone else really I am" Naruto shudders "but why her"
"Are you done with your babbling boy" Naruto nodded
Tobi shook his masked head. "Naruto why don't you join forces with me? You have lost much too, I could fix that…join me and you will never have to endure such pains again."
Naruto raised his eyebrow do you seriously think that that would work now? After everything you put us through?"
"This world is full of things that don't go as you wish. The longer you live the more you realise reality is just made of pain, suffering, and emptiness... Listen… In this world, whenever there is light, there are also shadows. As long as the concept of winners exist, there must also be losers. The selfish desire of wanting to maintain peace causes wars and hatred is born to protect love. even if you were to stop me or the order new darkness will just rise up and take our place this world will never know peace"
"Your wrong Tobi by banding together fighting the Akatsuki and Ryu No Junjo we began to truly understand each other our wills are driven towards a higher purpose then petty squabbles and when you are gone true peace will reign you just can't see it"
"I guess not….Naruto from now one we no longer talk with words but throughout the actions in our fight!" Tobi jumped in the sky and used his Kamui to shoot several very large Shuriken at Naruto who dodged them.
"Agreed." Naruto said, as he ran towards Tobi who had landed on the ground again. Naruto activated the first stage of his cursed beast seal
From sire to son, from son to sire,
The will to endure even when things look dire,
When trouble looms above them like a threatening spire,
Their will to fight, it will never tire,
To protect their home it is their desire,
Those possessed of the will of fire! Shinji Senju, during his genin orientation
October 10 1264
I have acquired a new test subject, or as he will now be referred to, subject 67. Because of the Uzumaki blood that runs through his veins I have high hopes for him and what I will be able to accomplish with him as a test subject. With the Uzumaki gift of healing and long life I am sure he will respond positively to the treatment, and add the blood from his father with it I am sure he will end up as a very impressive Shinobi and subject in the end.
File:
Name: Naruto Namikaze/Subject 67
Gender: male
Special threats: Son of Minato Namikaze, the fourth Hokage, and Kushina Uzumaki, former host of the Kyuubi.
October 30
So far has subject 67 reacted positively to any experiments I have done so far, Kabuto had given me the splendid idea to make the boy immune to poison in the case we ever had to face Tsunade and her assistant. Also recently I have developed an interest in a foe I have faced before Hanzo the Salamander; I have heard that he has been killed recently. Tsk Kabuto calls me obsessed with it.
December 15
I have decided to use subject 67 as a test to create a newer and better Hanzo, using all the information I have gathered on him I sent Manda to obtain a mature black-Salamander for me. The snake demanded twenty sacrifices for it, sadly he couldn't bring me Ibuse but this one will do as well. I have taken several organs from it and Kabuto is preparing Subject 67 for the operation, I hope everything will go as planned I will hate to lose such a valuable subject.
December 19
The implantation is complete and so far there have been no signs of rejection, I am able to confirm the successful implantation of the organs into subject 67. His body has completely integrated the replacement and additional organs into his system; it is as if he was born with it.
December 23
I discovered why exactly Hanzo always wore that mask of his to protect others from his breath. While subject 67 has better control with it, he is still very young and can accidently kill someone when he breaths in their direction. I am currently devolving a new mask that will him allow to breath freely without harm to me or others until he has learned to control it.
June 2 1268
Subject nine has developed in an amazing rate these three years. His implanted and replaced organs are like a second nature to him. He is able to stay underwater for almost three hours straight. His eyes have changed, his sclera has become black and his irises have turned silver, as a side effect of this his eyesight has become very poor. But to make up to this I have given him a "Literal Line system" just like the real kind of animal does, this is a sensory system made special sensory cells implanted in his skin different from the normal version by the Salamanders I have made the system so that it runs with his chakra systems, probably making him extra sensitive to Chakra. A funny thing also happened today, apparently one of the other subjects had seemingly annoyed the younger Subject 67 so he spit some sort of milky like substances that smelled a little like pepper at the other subjects eyes, the "poor" boys eyes have been ruined do the substance.
June 24 1268
I have begun to train Subject 67 in his Kusarigama training…the boy has gotten a real talent for it. Also Subject 67 has made friends with Subject 5 the terrible criminal from the Sorakami clan I wasn't paying attention. Subject 5 and 67 have formed an alliance protecting each other from other larger subjects that brings me to a last annoying point…Due that Subject 5 and 67 are much more civil than the other subjects I have allowed to let them eat with me and Kabuto. A few weeks ago Kabuto got us Ramen from some stand called Ichiraku Ramen… I don't know why but Subject 67 has developed an unhealthy taste to them…though I have heard that his mother has an almost similar addiction to ramen… I need to make an end to this… Subject 67 is eating quickly throughout the funds I still receive from the village for my research….
September 13 1269
Young 67 has made friendly contact with some other Subjects: The twin subjects 33/34, the rather large subject 45, the multi armed subject 56, and the red haired Shiin Subject 69. Four other subjects on who I intrigued me Together with my newest addition a boy from the Kaguya-Clan, who wields it unique Kekkei Genkai, called Kimimaro and of course Subject 5 and 67 I will become unstoppable.
September 13 1271
I have a big problem I fear the Hokage may be on to me, he would never appreciate the work I have done here so I am forced to leave. I have ordered Kabuto to collect all of our important stuff and bring it to my new hidden base in the land of rice I will be forced to leave the subjects that are not already in moved to the new base will be left behind, it is a pity to lose Subject 67 and 5 but I am Orochimaru I will not die for the sake of two children
Minato Namikaze, the fourth Hokage of Konohagakure and in many ways probably the greatest Kage in history, had been through a lot of things in his lifetime. He had fought and killed an entire army – including their most powerful Shinobi – with a single jutsu. The blonde man had faced down and sealed the mightiest beast in all of the elemental nations, the Kyuubi no Kitsune. With the assistance of the elders had sealed the yin chakra in himself and the yang in his eldest Homika
Tonight however he had to make a big decision. A decision concerning a cornerstone of his village's strength. This person, one of the people who kept Konoha as the greatest of the five largest hidden-villages could be a traitor. Worst of all, according to his spy his own kidnapped son who had disappeared seven years ago might be one of experiments of the said traitor.
Minato took a quick glance at his wife Kushina was pacing like mad not only had he dispatched Kakashi and Tenzo to infiltrate the base but he also had sent Homika along with Itachi with a dozen shinobi to track down the snake
It had been seven years since their first born son, Naruto, went missing from his crib in the hospital. Kushina had been so tired after the labor that and had fallen asleep, she didn't even notice someone come in and take her baby. After long search Minato and Kushina had been forced to give up the search.
to Minato it was another of his failures along with the Kyubi attack twelve years ago
The great power of the village, the one that had nearly managed to kill a thousand men twelve years before, had been unable to stop an old man from taking his wife and unleashing the kyubi on the village because of him many shinobi lost their lives including Minato's teammate Izuna Morino who had sacrificed himself holding off the beast until the elders and he had arrived to seal the biju Minato was broken out of his thoughts when two of his Anbu raced in
"Kakashi!" Minato jumped up from his chair and looked at his former student.
"S-S-Sensei your spy was correct we have found a boy who looks remarkable like you. He was found in Orochimaru's lab together with another boy, the lab was seemingly abandoned. We have brought them to the hospital…but there is something you should know before you go…"
Minato had grabbed Kushina and had used his Flying Thunder God Technique transport them to the hospital before Kakashi could finish his sentence.
-two hours ago, Orochimaru's lab several miles out of Konoha.-
The smell of decay was thick in the air as Kakashi stepped into yet another of snake-traitors labs. It was just like all the others, dark, damp and filled with equipment that he didn't understand the purpose for and wasn't sure he wanted to.
This one was set up more like a corridor then a room through, with what must have been hundreds of large tubes filled with a strange green liquid that bubbled as they passed. Floating in each tube was a small shriveled thing that at some point might have been a human baby, attached to a cord implanted into their stomachs that connected them to a tank set above into the roof. Three of the ANBU that had come with him had hurled up when they saw the bodies of children some of which could had been their own.
Along with a group of ten ANBU Kakashi had stormed the labs, only to find Orochimaru was already gone and most of his research gone with him. After that they started to look around the facility, trying to find survivors of the sick experiments.
So far they had found 7, but were forced to kill 6 of them. The things that had been done to them too much for them to handle, they had begged for death, to be released from their pain, the copycat-ninja had given it to them. It was the least he could do.
The only one that didn't beg for death was a boy who was about seven years old. He had short red hair with green eyes and an almost completely blank expression on his face. They didn't know why he was there or what had been done to him but from what they could see he was the most normal living thing they had come across in these godforsaken tunnels. After a few words Kakashi had sent him up with one of the ANBU to the surface for medical attention just to be sure. In one of the rooms they had passed he found notes about something named Subject 67, which had gotten his attention when it mentioned Uzumaki blood. He read through the notes and by the end he could feel a deep sense of dread in the pit of his stomach, but pushed it down because they had work to do.
A yell from one of his ANBU made Kakashi look up. The man stood in front of a large door that stood slightly open. The ANBU looked at his hand that was slowly turning purple, he quickly tore a piece of his clothes and bound of his arm. He grabbed his sword and cut of his arm. Another member quickly healed his arm and closed the wound. Kakashi took a look at the arm of the ANBU it had turned dark purple and the blood, on the palm of his hand was a small gash. "What happened?"
"I don't really know, when I opened the door something cut my hand, and next my arm began dying off." The ANBU member said not showing any sigh of pain, but Kakashi new that the man's carrier was now over.
From behind them came a yell. The boy that they had found earlier came running towards them followed by an ANBU member who stood behind on the surface. "You can't go in that room! Not without knocking first! Otherwise gecko will attack you."
"Gecko" asked Tenzo "Orochimaru Sama always called him 67"
Kakashi looked at the boy. "Is 67 aggressive?"
The boy shook his head. "Nah when you get to know him he's a big softie but he won't let you in his room unless he knows you or me or Tayuya says your ok"
Kakashi nodded. "can you get this tayuya person" the boy shook his head "uh uh she's gone along with everyone else but I'll tell gecko your ok"
Subject 5 nodded and knocked on the door in a very complex combination. "5 is that you?" the voice of a young child sounded. "who else would it be gecko there are some people here with me who are rescuing us. Could you let them enter your room?"
67 was silent for a moment. "They can come in." Kakashi gave some signals to the ANBU members before he followed 5 into the room.
The room was small there was just enough room for a bed and desk to fit in, the walls where gray and there was no sign of any decoration. Kakashi widen his eyes behind his mask when he saw the small boy sitting on the bed. "Sensei! That must be Sensei's kid…Naruto!"
"Who are you?" The boy looked afraid between Subject 5 and Kakashi who had taken of his mask.
"I am Kakashi Hatake, can you walk?" The boy looked sadly at the Shinobi.
"There would no point…Orochimaru-Sama would take me back here again and this time he would punish 5 if I attempted to escape one more time." The blonde boy said with fear.
Kakashi moved towards the boy slowly. "Don't worry Orochimaru is gone, I am here to take you to Konoha."
5 walked to 67 and pulled him gently into the light so that Kakashi could see his face clearly. The silver-haired Shinobi's eyes widen in shock when he saw 67's face. The young boy's face was covered in scars two from the corners of his mouth to midway of his cheeks, two vertical scars over his eyes and several others dotted on his face. "What has he done to you?"
"Hanzo the Salamander." Was the only thing 67 said.
Minato stormed into the hospital closely followed by Kushina who carried Homika. Inside they quickly found out that Tsunade was currently looking at Naruto. The pair impatiently waited in front of the room, while they waited Kakashi brought over Yota
"Who is this?" Minato asked. "This is Yota, a friend of your son sensei he wanted to know how Naruto was doing."
Subject 5 looked confused at Kakashi. "Who is Naruto? And who is he?"
Minato smiled at 5 "I am Minato Namikaze the fourth Hokage and father of Naruto who you know as 67. Orochimaru stole him from us after his birth." Minato bowed in front of Subject 5. "Kakashi said that you have been keeping my son safe from other experiments and I want to thank you for that…"
"Geckos name means fishcake" Yota asked before he started laughing
Kushina whispered something in Minato's ear. "Yota how would you like it if you can could life with Kushina, Naruto, and Homika Naruto's older sister and me in our home?"
Yota looked at Minato and Kushina in amazement. "Really?"
Kushina smiled warmly at the boy. "Of course you have helped Naruto in such situation and are his friend…You can stay with us."
Yota nodded eagerly.
"Well then let's go see Naruto." Kushina almost ran into the room followed by Minato. Inside a blonde haired girl Naruto's age was talking to Naruto who sat on the bed. The small boy looked at the direction where the sound came from and suddenly he was hugged by Kushina, he was stunned in shock.
"My little boy you are finally home…You are finally back." Kushina sobbed silently. Minato warped his arms around his wife and son. They stood like this several minutes before Minato let go of Kushina and Naruto who were now talking to each other, or more Kushina talking to Naruto who was very confused who this woman was. The fourth Hokage looked at the girl who mentioned that he should come with her.
"Well Tsunade"
"Minato I don't really know what to say…What Orochimaru has done to him is almost too horrible to describe." the girl said said revealing herself to be a WAY WAY WAY WAY younger Tsunade
The female Sannin shove the papers about Naruto that Kakashi had collected towards Minato.
"Orochimaru has replaced and added several organs of a black-salamander into Naruto, transforming him to almost a Human-Salamander, I won't go into details but easily said it is a wonder that Naruto can control his poison breath and doesn't kill us all. According to these files he is well adept in Taijutsu and Kusarigamajutsu. Orochimaru has made a list of techniques he stole from the Salamander summons that Naruto will be able to learn in the future; he named it Dokuton –poison release-"
"WHERE IS HE" a voice yelled out Minato and Tsunade rushed out of the office to find two twelve year olds holding back a red haired girl "Homika we're in a hospital calm down" the boy said
"what he said" a girl with brown hair and fang marks said
"Homika did you find anything" the girl who looked a lot like Kushina calmed down "no we we're delayed by his lackey Kabuto he took out twelve of us and one of Hana's dogs in twelve minutes we retreated" said Homika "is he ok"
"Yes Naruto is fine you can go see him" Homika nodded and ran off "thank you for everything Itachi Hana you can go home now"
"Yes Hokage sama" they said before leaving
Minato grabbed his signature Kunai and ran to Kushina prepared for the worst. But when he stormed into the room he saw that Homika and Naruto were staring at each other suddenly Homika hugged him to her chest crying in his hair
"I'm so sorry Naruto I should have protected you I'm sorry"
Naruto just put one of his small arms around her back Minato wrapped his arm around Kushina as they looked at the sight in front of them. Tsunade quickly took some pictures while Shizune held Ton-Ton.
"And suddenly the Future seems much brighter." Minato thought.