Inside the Jeep, "So where we dropping you off?" Duncan says. Wade says "can you drop me off where you were supposed to meet the Don." Duncan drives down the road, they approach the highway. "So how does an outfit from the Carolinas find themselves in Florida?" Kevin asks. Wade says "I don't know, I know the Don had purchased a few political favors in a few southern states." In Miami at the La Normande resort. Kevin and Duncan walk into the hotel as Wade walks toward the parking garage and says "I'll see you fellas later." Duncan and Kevin walk into the hotel and towards the elevators.
In the elevator. Duncan says "I got a bad feeling about this." "You know the deal, if we get separated…" "We blast till we find each other." The elevator reaches the rooftop bar. "I love this place." Kevin says. "They aren't really my crowd but a drink is a drink." Duncan says as he rocks back and forth while standing in the elevator. The doors to the elevator open and the two men walk out it and approach the bar. The Don sitting on a bar stool turns around and says "Mr Creedon, I take it the jobs done?" "It went off without a hitch." "So why doesn't your associate wait here while you and I go to where I have the money." The Don gets off the bar stole and the two men head to the elevator.
On the twenty-third floor Kevin and Don Paramaribo walk into room two thirty seven. Kevin follows the Don into the room." Can you shut the door behind you?" Kevin follows the request of the man and walks into the room. Don Paramaribo opens a brief case and pulls out a 1911, runs and shoots Kevin in the waist. "You ducked up good on this on kid. Basecallini, he's in my fucking pocket. And you let your eyes get too fucking big. Those that will betray you, those my friend, those are the ones who will bury you. Unfortunately for you it's too late. The Don takes aim at Kevin's head as Tony Montana shoots through the door with a Remington 870. He cocks the shotgun and walks through the door. He shoots the Don. "Kev we gotta get chu outta here." "Tony, I'm not going to make it." Tony walks closer to Kevin and drops the shotgun. He throws Kevin over his shoulder. Shoots can be heard on the roof. "It's a fucking war zone upstairs." "Tony, drop me, help Duncan up there." "I ain't doin chit." "FUCKING DO IT!" Tony puts Kevin down by the stair case and starts to run up. Duncan runs down the stairs and picks up Kevin. "Tony, take this." Duncan says as he passes an m16 to Tony. Duncan pulls up his shirt and grabs the Glock that is tucked in his waistband.
In the parking garage. Duncan runs to his jeep. He opens the rear hatch and applies pressure to the wounds Tony gets into the driver seat. The jeep spreads out of the parking garage. "Duncan, watch after Ava and the baby. I'm not going to make it." "Kevin, don't talk like that you're going to watch that child walk into your arms." "I'm not going to make it… tell Mike to give the New Mexico money to Ava. He'll know what I mean." Tony slams the brakes on and says "Chu can tell mike chur self." Mike runs over from his BMW, rips open the door and says "Tony, take my car. Miami general, meet us there, you can't keep up." As soon as Tony get out of the way, mike slams on the gas. Kevin says "I'm not going to make it. Take my New Mexico money and give it to Ava." "Save your breath Kev, you're going to make it." Mike speeds off. He reaches the exit and slides the Jeep. The Jeep pulls off the on ramp and speeds to the hospital. Mike speeds into the emergency lane. He throws the car into park and pulls the door open, he jumps out and pops the tailgate and lifts Kevin out of the car. Duncan an Mike run into the emergency room lobby. Duncan "I GOT A FUCKING GUN SHOT VICTIM HERE!" Two men run out with a stretcher. Mike loads Kevin onto the stretcher. Ava bursts through the emergency room doors and runs up to Kevin and grabs his hand. The two men roll Kevin away. The receptionist walks over to Ava and says "Mrs. Creedon, I need you to fill out some paper work."
Mike, Ava and Duncan sit in the waiting room.
A few hours later a doctor walks out and says "Mrs. Creedon, can we speak privately." Ava and the doctor walk away. Duncan looks over at Mike and says "We got to keep Ava close…" Mike says "Don't fuckin talk like that." Ava walks down the hallway crying. Mike and Duncan jump out of their chairs and Hug her. "He's gone." She says, her voice shaking.
Yeah, that's how this ends. I know it's a bit of a weak ending. My problem with this story is that it's gone on a little to long and I let the story go. This isn't the end for my writing. I am planning to do a prequel for Duncan. Search for "The Real Duncan Malone." In his story I will explain how he started in the criminal underworld and how he started working for Kevin.