SNAKES EXPLODED INTO CAMP

"OHHHH WTF" BLOSSOMFLOWER YELLED WALKING OUT OF THE MED DEN "GET EM GLITTERDREAM"

"WAT" GLITERDREAM REALIZZED IMEDIATRLY THAT ALL OF THE CAMP WAS LOCKING AT HER EXPECTINTLY "OK"

SHE JUMPED AT THE SNAKES AND STARTED TEARING THEM 2 BITS EASY

TWISTEDSTAT FLU OUT OF THE SHADOES "OK SERIUSLY COME ON" SHE FLEW AWAY

glitterdream sat on a,mountain of dead snakes "wow."

blossomflower leaned aganst a rock "i think she was tryin 2 catch us by failed badly"

morningstar walkrd up 2 glitterkits side "twisyedstar is a coward. u did well glitterdram"

glitterdream smiled "th-"

"LOOK OUT MORNINHSTAR" GLASSCLAW YELLED AND JUMPED AT MORNGINGSTAR PUSHING HIM AWAY FROM AN ATTAKING SNAKE

"WHAT" MORNISTAR SAID

THE SNAKE BIT GLASSCLAW!1!

GLITTERDREAM SLICED THE SNAKES HEAD OFF

"OGM NO!1!11!" GREENGLOE SCREACHED AND CRIED

BLOSSOMFLOWER RAN OVER 2 HELP HIM BUT "NO... IM SORRY GRREENGLOW HES ALREADY DED"

EVIL LAUGHTER WAS HEARD FRUM THE DARKNESS "HOWS THAT GLITTERPAW?" IT WAS... ELECTROPAW!1! "TWISTEDSTAR TAUGHT ME 2 CONTROL PREDATORS"

"O MY STARCLAN ELECTROPAW U KILED HIM" GLITTERDREAM CRIED SCREAMINGLY "I CANT B LEAF I EVR LUVED U!1!1!1!1!12'

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-" ELECTROPAW WAS LAUGHING EVIL BUT WAs interupted

"what. the. hell." swingpaw steped into view. "i cant beleve this is seriusly hapening.''

"ohhhhhh SISTER good 2 see u" elevtropaw meowed fake nicely

swengpaw dug her claws in2 the dirt "elecktropaw. u ditch us 4 the evil guys. over losing a girlfriend. u swear vengeance on ur whole clan. over losing a girlfrend. u attak ur own sister. over lozing a girlfriend. u kill our deputy & th mate of my mentor, 1 of th only positiv cats left in my life. OVER LOSING YOUR PERFECT DREAM GIRLFRIEND WHO WUS NEVER EVEN DATING U."

ELECTROOAW HISSED "WELL I DESERVED GLITERPAW MORE THAN THAT FILTHEE THEIF LAVENDE-"

SWINGPAW DIDNT LET HIM FINISH B4 JUMPING AT HIM AND SLICING ATBHIS NECK

ELECTROPAW STUMBLEED BACKWADS CAUGHING AND CHOKING YP BLOOD "GHH I-" HE UNFURLED HIS WINGS AND TRIED 2 FLY AWAY

BUT SWINFPAW JUMOED AT HIM AND HOOKED HER CLAWS IN2 HIS WINGS SHREDDING THEM "u no. u where always kind of a foxhart." SHE HISSED

ELECTROPAW CRASHD 2 THE GROHND AND GOT UP BACKIGN AWAY BLOOD STILL FLOWING FROM HIS NECK

swingpaw stepped away her blu eyes like ICE "i kno bcuz ur a vampire ull b able 2 survive that." she turned away "walk home, like the rest of us do. dont come back 2 thunderclan, or else."

trembling and unable 2 speek, eectropaw ran away

glitterdreams mouth hung open "swingpaw..."

swingpaw looked at gliterdream "wat. r u going 2 say i was 2 harsh on him?'

"...no" glitdream sad. she thot about nightmarepaw "wat... wat was it like, hurting ur brother like that"

swingoaw looked at the ground "i dont no. i just feel... empty rite now. im... im going 2,the med den 4 now"

gliterdreem was about 2 say 'but ur not hurt' but she realized mayb that wasnt true. she rembered morningstars words "...not evry1 can b saved..." she wispered 2 herself with a shudder

blossomflower was tending 2 greenglow who was still in shock, and other warriors were walking around camp ad making sure no snaykes were left.

glitterdrem stared at morningstar heding 2 the leades den and 1dered who the new deputy would b.

(REAL AUTHOR'S NOTE: ...and that's all i wrote.)