Using the mobile fanfiction to write my stories... I could easily return to fanfiction doing this.
A disclaimer. Forgive spelling and grammer errors and things that may seem rushed. This is my first try using mobile and ill try to get better as time goes on. I will also come back and fix errors once I have time on my laptop. Dont comment with complaints for spelling and grammer because trust me that will be fixed. I want critisicm and love for the story~ This is also not fully centered on Sonic, but an OC. It's tone is also much darker, so be prepared. There will be plenty of sonic characters, but the main focus will be on Max, whose point of view we will be following. This will be the last authors note hopefully.~
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Hello?
Is anyone there?
Anyone?..
...
I can't see anything... But i can?
I can feel my surroundings. like it's apart of me.
It's so scary... this place feels so foreign now...
The last thing I remember is my home... going down in flames... and the soldiers and... and...
... I remember... i remember... the monsters... i know... i know and i need to warn you... all of you...
I'm probably talking to myself. But if anyone can hear... or will hear me... Please... listelisten... My name is...
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I gently rubbed my eyes and walked outside, a small smile on my face.Yesterday had been one amazing storm. knocked out power all across town. Luckily all we have is the television inside that used it. The little fridge had a lot of ice inside so it kept our food cold. And on an even brighter note, there were hundreds of puddles in the alleyway, making the rocky looking walkway sparkle. I giggled and grabbed my puffy green tail, quickly hopping around and splashing about in the puddles.
It was pretty early here in the underbelly of Rout 99. while there were probably people already out and about high above us in the upper city areas, it was quiet and peaceful down here. in fact you could mistake this place for an old town in the country if it werent for the big towering buildings around us. I'll never really understand how people live so high up like they do. i never see anyone leave the bottom buildings anyway.
I smiled, splashing in all the water and soaking my blue little shoes, the thoughts of the buildings slowly leaving me. I couldnt really care that much. They keep the place down here safe for kids like me so they must be doing good up there too. I look down in the biggest puddle i splashed in, tilting my head. I could see myself in the water, like a mirror in the earth.
Big puffy ears with messy patches of fur on them, esoecially at the tips. Those were everyones favorites. I had big soft blue eyes too, which I heard was really really rare! My muzzle came out with a bunch of white fur, big and small tuffs all sticking out at the sides like a few other fox's would have. It went weird with my shamrock green fur though, but people say its fine. the only other notible thing was how big my tail was. I could hit so many people on accident just by turning. I basically had a big boy tail for my age. I smiled brightly and nuzzled my tail, feeling special out of the other kids.
"Hey Max!!" I heard a whisper from a small voice. I turned towards my home and saw a bright neon green hedgehog with a big red coat which was way to big for him to wear. i dont know why he always wears it but he wont tell me.
"Hi Daniel! Why are you up so early?" I asked, stepping out of the puddle and kicking water off of my shoes.
"Sonic and Tails are on TV remember!! They're talking about Project Energy!!" Daniel went on, causing my eyes to widen. I quickly run over to the door and peering it. Im pretty amazed to see every kid in the orphanage to be up and staring at the little TV high in the corner.
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"Project Energy will help every zone, city, and continent by providing mass generators that collects energy off of working mobiuns!" Tails exclaimed, his tails swaying in excitement. Sonic stood next to him, rubbing his nose in disenterest, but I knew he was happy to be there. "Since most mobiuns have special energies in them, we figured to harness the energy while they use it. For instance, Sonic's speed is a legendary power!" Sonic smirked and grabbed a small canister from the table behind him. I then watched in amazement as he blasted off at high speeds, too fast for our TV to render. "As Sonic runs around, his energy burns around him. Our generators purpose to collect the excess energy given off by the abilities use. This would also work brilliantly if a mobium had an electric energy to them." Sonic quickly ran back on screen, holding a now glowing canister, briming full of energy. Tails took the canister and raised it high. "With energy like this, we can save on power or even boost other things. This also means we can have a better defense around our devices as people like Eggman will be forced to find other power sources to bum off of us, like he has been doing." Sonic chuckled, holding a power cable with a little Eggman logo on the tag, causing the audiance to laugh.
I so am amazed. Tails is so brilliant that i couldnt help but want to be like him. hes my idol! Always helping Sonic wreck robots and hacking things and just... So much wow! Daniel was more interested in action, as well and kept running around the orphanage like Sonic. I turned to see him doing just that, running around the dark wooded floor, zooming past our old toybox and our Nani Fey, in her rocking chair. She's an old old old cat with purple fur and white hair that was made into a bun. She was really stern and wrinkly and everything youd expect. She'd put a ruller to us when she saw fit but she cared for us! I just wish she could be awake for most of the trouble caused by us like Daniels doing, crashing into things and yelling out cheesy lines.
"Come on Daniel, if you keep running around so fast you'll trash the house!" I said in a fancy smart pose. I was right too. Our orphanage is a small building with only a bathroom and this room, which is a playroom kitchen bedroom hybrid thingy.
"You're too slowwww!" The hedgehog yelled, swinging his arms in the air.
"Well well well... If it isnt the Sonic and Tails wanna be duo." A voice said behind me. My ears twitched as my fur stood up. I huffed, gritting my teeth as i turned around. There werent many of us here. Me and Daniel, the first one here, then the other five... and right now the big bad one was talking to me. I turned around, grinning as i saw the red lemur, covered in a thick dark red sweater and his tail under his nose.
"Well well well... If it isnt Egglemur... What's your plan this time." I said, watching as Will the Lemur lifted up a tiny blue kitten, her bright ocean eyes staring down at me.
"Im gonna use this mecha baby... to destroy your generatorssss!!!" Will started stomping and carefully waving the baby, causing her to giggle. I smirked and lightly threw my tail tiwards his stomach. He made a weak grunt as he lowered the baby onto my tail, falling over.
"Defeated!!" A voice in the distance spoke. I smiled and held the baby close, seeing 'Winter' on her dress. I'm not good at knitting but I made it look really good.. in my opinion.
"That's a Fatality." A simil ar voice spoke out. I turned my attention to the corner, seeing the twin mice watching us. They were Jinx and Trixie, grey field mice with Jinx wearing a black vest and his black shirts and Trixie wearing her white skirt and t-shirt. Above them was a brown bat, standstanding on the cieling with a grin, using his wings to keep him up. That would be Arlo.
"And are you three his henchmen!?" I said with a stern voice, causing the mice to ahake their heads and arlo to point at the two mice and nod. They quickly too notice and grabbed his hands with their tails, tossing him at me. I yelped as he collided into me, causing Winter to go flying out my hands. She covered her face with her big ears, sailing through the air majestically. Everyones eyes widened as Daniel and Will jumped to catch her, only to fail. I watched in horror as she fell... right into Nani Fey's lap. Winter s. We all let out a collect sigh, then a bunch of little laughs. Yep...
This was my family.
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It was late now. We caught Nani Fey up on Project Energy, later learning that G.U.N. would be finding Mobuins to test the generators out. I'd love to be one of the subjects and help, but I didnt exactly have a power.
"I bet Shadow is gonna help. With all that chaos energy, hed power up every single one of them in seconds." Will muttered, pulling out a sleeping pad and laying on it. It looked like two pillows stitches titched together, which is so funny to me. I sleot on my tail instead, it being much softer.
"I bet they'd put Sonic on a treadmill and have Knuckles lifting weights." Daniel remarked. We all chuckled, gaining a hush from Nani Fey. She was slowly rocking winter to sleep, which we were interupting. Everyone laid down as we seot for the night. Except for me and Daniel of course. Daniel scooted close to me, putting his hands behind his head as he laid back.
"Dude... Think we'll ever be like them?" Daniel asked, yawniyawning softly as he gently kicked his feet in the air. "Sonic and Tails?.."
"Well we got the species down." I joked, causing us both to snicker. "Were all like below eight years old... And We have no powers... I wonder how we'd be heroes..."
"Well... We kick booty" I rolled my eyes at Daniel's remark. He was a brawler. But i expected no less. We were best friends after all. We both joined the irohanage at the same time, we both broke into a robot factory, only to be saved by Omega himself. We even nearly had an airstrike come down on the orphanage due to a prank call! I took the blame for Daniel and he swore then and there wed be friends forever.
I suddenly felt something crawl on my tail. and i clance down. Winter laid there in her little pjs, snuggled up on my Tail. I'd giggle and pull her close to me, snuggling the baby.
"Softest tail, great for a baby bed." Daniel laughed, then yawned once more as he rolled away. "Alright... Imma sleep... Were gonna go to the bridge and try to car surf tomorrow." Daniel muttered, causing me to roll my eyes. I then sighed, closing my eyes.
"Night Winter.." I muttered, sighing quietly.
"N..ni.. Ma..." I heard. I open one eye, looking at her resting form. I smiled, wondering what her first true word will ever be.
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Rough pounding at the door. Thats what i woke up too. All the kids were a jumpy and Nani Fey walked to the door, opening it up. I sat up, holding Winter close as i looked in awe. They looked like two human soldiers from G.U.N., but i didnt see the logo anywhere.
"Ma'am, were under the impression that this is an orphanage." One asked, the kids growing ever so curious. Are soldiers comming to adopt one of us?
"Yes... What would two gentlemen like?" Nani Fey asked, her voice calm and quiet.
"Under private orders..." One of the soldiers said, showing Nani Fey an odd paper. "We are required to have the kids escorted to a facility where they will be cared for and studied for for potential powers." I couldht believe it. They could figure out if we had powers or not!? I'd love to go! But... I didn't want to leave my family...
"Well sirs, the eldest child here is nine. They are way to young to be off gettijg tested for god knows what. Secondly, that seal Isnt any government I've ever seen." Nani Fey said sternly, laying down the law. The two soldiers began to grow uncomfortable as she spoke. "Unless you bring a presidental seal and contracts garenteeing saftey, I refuse to let you take these ki-"
It was so loud... It was so loud... Everyone went dead silent as a thud was heard. I stared in horror as Nani Fey laid on the floor, still as could be. Both soldiers stumbled backwards as a gruff looking man in an odd suit came in, holding a gun in his hand. He was covered in military armor, except for his eyes. His cold, dark eyes.
"I don't have time for this... Round up the brats." He said, kicking Nani Fey to the side. What followed next was screaming as the first soldier walked foreward, grabbing Will by the tail. He screamed and hollard, but was quickly smacked in the baxk of the head with the back of the soldiers pistol, knocking him out. I just sat there in shock, watching him carry will's unconcious body to what seemed like a van outside.
What was happening. I couldn't understand. I didn't want to understand. My heart was beating so fast i couldnt concentrate. i soon felt my tail tigged though, snapping me back into reality. Winter cried into my chest as i was sliding across the floor towards tge door. As i did, I passed Nani Fey, her lifeless eyes staring back at me.
... No.
I gripped Winter tightly to me with one hand, my body shaking hard.
No.
I felt something in me as i stood up, yanking my tail back. I turned, growling as i was at the door frame, looking at the soldier in the odd gear.
No!
This was my family. I don't care what they want. This was my family. They can't do this! THEY WONT!
"No!!!" I screamed, lunging foreward. I shoved my hand into his face, causing him to scream out in pain. I then jumped off and clawed and clawed and clawed and clawed and clawed and clawed...
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The soldiers were dead... I don't know what happened. But i was immediately pulled out of it when the suited soldier punched me in the head. He gripped my head, his palm over my left eye as he gave me a big grin, weird holes and marks in his right eye.
"Fancy trick there, fox... You'll be very valuable.." I noticed a weird red glow coming from his hand. "But first.. You just took my eye... so lets even things out.
The next thing I know, my head was on fire. I screamed and kicked, holding the crying baby under my tail as i tried to protect her. i then thrown into the bavk of the van with everyone else. I trembled weakly as i openeopened my one good eye, seeing his blurry evil smile through his torn mask.
"Let's go home..." He chuckled. I didn't know what to do. Whatever i did, I failed. We were in the back of a van, ready to be forgotten to time. No one would remember a little orphanage like ours.
My gaze then slowly looked down at Winter, crying loudlh in my arms, then up to Daniel, staring at me with horror from behind the soldier.
Wait... What?
Daniel hasnt been caught yet? I nedd to think fast or hes in trouble. But I cant think with Winter crying so much. Theb it hit me. We live here. They dont. Daniel can run and escape easy with...
I set winter in my tail and with a good swing, launched her passed the soldier and into Daniels arms.
"Run!! Get out of here!!! Now!!!!" I screamed. The soldier raised his gun and fired, shooting past Daniels head. He yelped and ran down the rocky path and into an alley.
"I'll get help!! I promise!!" Daniel cried out. The soldier ran to the alley and raised his gun. I felt my stomach drop as he fired a few more shots. I didn't hear Winter or her cries anymore, nor Daniel. The soldier then stomped over and slamming his gun into the back of my head, knocking me out cold.