The Hazy Kinship
A photo frame kept on the desk of The ACP PRADYUMAN's study room securing a photograph of a young lad when got picked up by a girl: Sir yeh kiski photo hai ?
The Head of the CID Mumbai looked in the direction and got shocked ( pov ): Yeh photo kal raat yahi reh gayi kya shayyy mujhe yaad nahi raha yaha laane se pehele chupana...
Salunkhe sadly: Jab itna yaad karte ho toh bula kyu nahi lete ?
ACP stiffly: Meine kahi nahi bejha tha use apne mann se gaya tha samjha tu aur mein ab bulaunga bhi nahi...
Salunkhe ( pov ): Bass bhagwan se yehi dua hai ki voh kisi galat raaste pe na bhatak gaya ho aakhir pichle che saalo me usne kisi se baat nahi ki aur firr hai to bachcha hi voh bhi alag desh me...
Two people standing at some distance facing each other with a group of people on each of their's sides. One was an old person whose eyes were spitting fire while another one a brat carrying the mock and fire in them...
ACP in disgust-anger: Tumhe apna beta sochte hue bhi apne aap se nafrat ho rahi hai...( hatred ) mujhse zyada badnaseeb koi nahi hai jo mera khoon tum jaise haiwan me hai...
The Other Person laughed loudly in sarcasm: Chaliye ek soch to mili humari ( sharp-hatred tone ) kyuki mujhe bhi lagta hai ki mere se zyada badnaseeb koi nahi hai jo mujhme aapka khoon hai...
ACP boiling in anger: Tumhe iss duniya me mein leke aaya hu na ( pointing his gun at him ) to tumhe iss duniya se bhej ke iss galti ko sudharunga bhi mein hi...
A sharp-sound of a gunshot occurred and a splash of blood fell on the ground!
A Long-Stretching white corridor dipped in deadly silence with a room at the end. THE COLD TEMPERATURE of the room was getting HIGH by some angry yelling and unstoppable warm tears...
ACP in extreme anger yelled: Kya bakwas kar rahe hai aap haan? Mere bete ko kuch nahi ho sakta...
A Figure initiated painfully: Pradyuman yeh sach accept karna hi hoga voh hume chodd ke hamesha ke liye chala gaya hai isliye tum uska antim..
He couldn't complete as
THE STRONG ACP PRADYUMAN FELL DOWN AS A HOUSE OF CARDS CLUTCHING HIS CHEST!
The DAD and the CHAMP lay flat in the CITY HOSPITAL with a HIT OVER THEIR HEARTS!
So Should I write it or not?
I know guys that my stories are incomplete but the targets remain incomplete too ;) I really wanted to write this story and couldn't hold my excitement to share the teaser and check your responses.
I decided to complete it first with myself but then felt that if you people don't like then my efforts would go waste and therefore decide to directly ask you but it would be after the completion of London Return.
Please share your views, and do review LR as well, the number of reviewers couldn't stand in front of the number of visitors there. So please do a review as I am missing many of my friends over there.
Well, I don't know how to write the teaser, but I hope you might get a glimpse of the plot. Do tell me your views!
BYE & Take Care!
Sanjana Gupta