April Showers Bring May Flowers

by StarBlood666

April O'Neil and Casey Jones' daughter, May Rose Jones, is nothing like how her parents want her to be. She's gotten in trouble with the law many times, has three restraining orders against her, and an upcoming hearing. Somehow, May befriends Raphael, an old friend of her parents. Will the unlikely friendship turn sour when Raphael learns more about all the things May has done?

19. Chapter 19?

Hey temporary break. I'll replace this with a chapter soon but I need feedback.

So, twenty chapters seems pretty long for a fanfiction to me, so i'm considering whether I want to

A) just bite the bullet and condense the rest of the story into the next few chapters,

B) just keep going the way I am and to hell with the amount of chapters because I have an idea where to go and how to end this that ties up May's character arc nicely or

C) Write two more chapters and end chapter 20 with a cliffhanger or an "ending" and write a sequel to conclude how I wanted to end the story intially

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There are some chapters at the beginning that are kinda filler and I didn't have a clear picture in mind when I wrote them, but I want to keep them because in a way they feel important to May's character arc. You can probably tell the parts where I really didn't want to write that scene but I wanted to get it over with so I could move on and actually publish a chapter for you guys.

So anyways give me your feedback. I'm gonna get chapter 19 started, but lemme know what y'all think. Even if I get only one response, I'll assume its what the masses want and go with it.

Anyway, see you guys in the next chapter, wear your seatbelts, drink your waters and squirt lemon juice in your enemies eyes.