Hi everyone.
This story was written in 2015 and published here with the title Big secret. But... it was 2015. I was 14 years old and my English level was disaster 'cause I am not from a country where people speak English and I was not a good student in that time and also it is almost impossible to be great in English in that age if you aren't from Eglish speaking country... Anyway, I am 17 now and I have bett er English level. I found this story and was petrified. Such a shame! So many errors! So I rewrote it. And made a new story link, because it was easier than repplace all of these chapters. Not everything is changed but most of it. And maybe... maybe... maybeeeeeee I will finish the story this time. That's the reason why I will now publish the last chapter with a short description of what I was plannig to do with my story immediately, because I am not sure if I will finish it. But if I will not get it up, I will delete it soon and post chapters instead.
I hope you will enjoy your reading! And let here your review, I love them!
This story is about dark plan of Milori. He wants to be the only ruler of all the land. And he has one perfect ally. Everyone is in a great danger. Especially his wife and those who aren't afraid of him. There is some Milarion... but the couple is Redleaf and his beloved (and lost) Snowflake. But as you see - lost - so not that much romance.