Disclaimer: I am not a great author but I will try my best to make this story as high quality and as enjoyable as I can. There are a lot of different stuff but I'll try my best to make the story feel like One Piece. This is my own OC character that I thought of myself, and he's almost the exact opposite of Luffy, though he possesses some of his traits as you may see while reading the story.
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-Village Raid Arc: Chapters 1
Sitting by himself in a bar was a tall, attractive looking young man with a single sword strapped to his side. He had smooth, light brown skin with shoulder chin length dreadlocks.
He had a small X shaped scar on the left side of his cheek and a straw hat tied to his neck. He was also wearing a long sleeve red colored sweater and regular black pants with cheap brown sandals. This young man in question was Sanborn D. Burton. He was currently eating at unrealistic speeds with a huge stack of plates to the left of him.
"Give me more meat, and fetch me a bottle of sake too. Sanborn said to the owner of the place.
The owner was standing there in shock as he watched the kid in front of him scarf down 50 plates in just a few minutes. This was the hardest he and his employees have in forever.
"A-aren't you a little too young to be drinking Sake, kid?" The bald bartender then said.
Sanborn looked at the bartender with a glare, "Just get me the bottle of Sake, now!"
Sanborn said, hardening his glare. "Y-yes sir!" The man said as he hurried to get the bottle of sake for the 17 year old. "Thanks, I'll take that and the meat to go," Sanborn said as he got up and dropped a few bills and some coins on the counter.
Walking through the large forest on Mystery Haven Island, Sanborn found himself at his village. His home that had been raided by those pirates 12 years ago. The bodies had all been cleaned up after news of the village raid spread throughout the island. The five year old Sanborn was found passed out and bloody, but the only one alive amongst the villagers. For 2 years Sanborn bounced from orphanage to orphanage, being kicked out of each one due to being too rowdy and being rough with the other kids his age, some even older than him. Sanborn was an aggressive kid and that led to him having to learn how to hunt for food and feed himself at the young age of 7. In truth, Sanborn was glad he had to learn how to hunt and fight against animals bigger and stronger than himself at such a young age. It led to him being the man he is today and he's proud of himself for it.
Making his way deeper into the village, Sanborn found himself in front of a small hut. More specifically, his hut. The one he's been sleeping in since he was 7. He'd done a sloppy job back then but fixed it up as he got older. Sanborn made his way inside of the small hut and inside of it was a bounty poster. Looking at the bounty poster made Sanborn well up in anger, having to resist the temptation to pull out his sword, knowing that wont do anything. On the bounty poster was a man with long, dark blonde hair with a thick brown beard. The man's name was 'Whistey Baker and he was holding a 350,000 Beli bounty. After a bit of investigating, and by a bit i mean 7 years worth of investigating, Sanborn found out this was one of the men who were apart of the village raid 12 years ago.
'If his bounty is that huge, then he must be strong!' Sanborn thought with a feral grin slowly creeping across his face. Noticing it was getting dark, Sanborn decides he'd get some sleep.
After all, tomorrow was the day he would start his journey to get his revenge. He'd find Whister Baker and his crew, and he'd make sure to kill them all. One by one
Somewhere In the Grandline…
6:40 AM, Sunrise
"Oi, Captain! Your bounty's gone up again!" A man said while holding up a bounty poster. He was on a huge ship that looked to be able to fit a lot of people. The ship was swaying around in the waves, with not a single other ship or island in sight.
The Captain chuckled. "How much is it this time?" The captain said with a cocky grin. The Captain was a 42 year old muscular man who stood at 7'8 (A/N: Y'all know One Piece heights are unrealistic, so try your hardest to picture a muscular 7'8 man sitting on a Pirate ship.)
The man had short wavy hair with tan skin. He also had a long scar that sat across his left eye.
The man holding the bounty poster slowly read out the number to him. "W-well, your new bounty has increased from 550,000 beli to 630,000."
"ZEHAHA! Let's drink to this!" The man laughed as he whipped out a huge Sake bottle from seemingly out of no where. His crew cheered with him as they also pulled bottles of Sake from out of no where.
"Captain Derrin, there's no one as strong as you in the entire world!"
The rest of the huge crew yelled and cheered in agreement.
"Damn right! ZEHAHAHAHA!" The tall man said.
Back on Mystery Haven Island
8:00 AM
On the small dock of Mystery Haven Island, there was Sanborn. He was getting ready to board his Dinghy. He had a light blue backpack filled with as much meat that he could stuff into it, while also holding 2 Sake bottles in his hand. Getting on the boat, he turned around to look at his home island. "I'm gonna miss this place.." He said to himself. His eyes suddenly hardened. "But I will get my revenge. For my family… for my village. Just wait, Baker. I'm coming for you, and your crew." He said In a tone that would've sent shivers down even the toughest men's spines.
And with that...Sanborn set off on his adventure for revenge. He made a vow that he would get revenge for his village and his family, and NOTHING would stop him.
END.
Sorry for the uneventful chapter and sorry this took so long to get out. Let me know If you guys think I should fix anything or if you guys notice any mistakes I made.
