This is my first real-world Star Wars fan fiction. I haven't seen many ideas like this so I thought I should give myself a chance. I am asking readers for ratings, even one sentence will help me improve my skills and publish better works in the future! Thanks for each opinion.
My name is John and I just turned 19 years old. My life is not very interesting; I am actually an average teenager attending a vocational school in the center of Poland - Warsaw. It is not a very beautiful city and inviting to stay, and certainly not a city with too good opportunities for people from the world. I work 4 days a week and one day spent learning remotely from the COVID-19 pandemic level. I am fairly fast blue eyed blonde with a height of about 175 cm. I was not too much for others, but I was muscled thanks to my occasional workouts in the gym and exhausting work in the carpentry shop. I even saw the outline of a six pack on my stomach which made me really happy.
But my story begins when I started my first meditation after reading some research on brain activity and feeling better overall through meditation. I do not know whether I did it out of curiosity or because I was not busy. Before I started meditating, I had some concerns about whether I would be able to properly calm down and relax during meditation, but as it turned out later, I had no problems with that.
I closed my eyes, relaxed my body and focused on my breath and then something strange happened because I felt some vortex of energy that I was focusing on, that's when I stopped having any sense of time. I simply call this vortex of energy force because by focusing on that energy, it gains unnatural abilities. At that moment, I felt as if my senses had expanded. It's like opening my eyes for the first time. I felt like I was using 1000% of my brain's potential. As I focused on force, I was given the opportunity to feel EVERY living thing in the area. It was an amazing feeling. When I calmed down a bit after this experience, I thought about my friend William with whom I went to the same class and work. William lived at the end of my street so I decided to find him, and it worked! The Force responded immediately, and I could feel him exactly where I expected him - in his house. And it was at this point that this wonderful experience was interrupted for me.
A courier called with a package. I got up and went to the door to pick up my order. After receiving the package, I closed the door from the house and then returned to the room that was not too large, it was actually a rectangle in which somehow a bed, a desk and a few pieces of furniture could fit, so it was not too huge. In addition to my room, I had a kitchen, a corridor and a toilet with a shower, but I could not complain, although the apartment was not first-class, it was cozy and free from faults and, above all, I lived alone, which means that finally I had peace of mind and my parents could not interfere in my life.
I figured I needed to explore my new abilities, so I quickly got into a meditation position, let my body relax, and then touched the familiar stream of energy again. After a moment of losing myself in the pleasure of this stream, I focused again on the area, seeing not only the locations of the creatures but also their emotions. It was amazing. Additionally, I was able to sense the exact plane of the ground, I felt the shapes, and I could see every hole in the wall and every pebble in the road. I literally saw everything. I turned my attention to my friend because he was shining really bright in the force - I felt his emotions. I had a feeling of anger .. Loss and even anger, he was probably just despairing. It's probably because his mother recently passed away. Hell, I'll have to console him somehow, we've known each other for so many years. That's not all, because in his house I sensed a different being, but I was convinced that it was not a human. I don't remember having a pet, but he probably had to take care of it after his mother died.
After so many experiences I was already very tired and when I stopped meditating I saw that it was the middle of the night and in a few hours I had to get up to work so it would be a good idea to go to bed to regenerate. I was also afraid that I would lose my new abilities because my force grip was weaker than at the beginning, so for the sake of safety I preferred to go to sleep so as not to risk losing my abilities.
The first chapter ends here, in the next chapter Jan will discover new skills that will be useful for him at work and will surprise other employees.