Hi,
this is the first story I've ever written so take it with a pinch of salt, if I make any constant spelling mistakes feel free to let me know English is not my native language so yeah.
And yes there will be mild use of language, aka swearing.
Notable things of my writing:
World event.
Narrator: Speech.
Narrator: toughts.
POV: Me (just to show that we're somewhere else now, at the same time, y'know kinda usefull to have don't you think?)
The following content is rewritten, the original is available on the site.
Prologue: All you needed to know
Charlie and Nathan have been friends for a long time.
They even live together, they're not gay though.
Charlie is supposed to be smart, and Nathan the opposite.
In this world; purposely not given a name, they are here to fight the evil they're probably pretty good at it, to be fair due to the fact that villains like to have speeches they usualy just take them out before they can do anything major.
But not today, no today was different, today was Wednesday wich isn't important but still.
As you might've guessed I'm rather bored and sarcastic, which is good meaning I don't usualy daze off when something happens, unless it's not something of intrest, but I guess we all have that.
Anyway I'm getting off topic.
I'm sure you've heard of Pokémon, if you haven't then why are you even here.
I myself quite like Pokémon, I've played the games, watched the anime, sung the songs, attempted to draw the art...
But my friend he doesn't really like it, now hate is a strong word, he rather dislikes it then hate, I think, he hates Ash the protagonist don't know why, maybe because he doesn't age?
But that's a problem as this is a PMD story, and not liking Pokémon doesn't really scream like it's going to be useful, or helpful at all.
Okay so now that you know a bit of who we are and what we're like let's get into the prologue.
POV: Nathan
Nathan was walking back home coming from the mall.
Nathan: Ugh, why does all this stuff have to be so heavy?
He was nearly back home when he saw an alley he didn't remember being there.
Nathan: Hm?
He walked into it.
Nathan: The heck is this?
?: Are you lost kid?
Nathan: What do you want.
?: Way to make a first impression.
Nathan: Real funny, so wanna make clear what your purpose is before I bash your face in?
?: Relax, I'm here to make an offer.
Nathan: What kind?
?: One you cannot refuse.
Nathan: Why do I have a bad feeling about this.
Nathan: I doubt that, go on.
?: Well you see ther is this world in need and-
Nathan: Thats not an offer thats a favor. stupid
Nathan: And i'm not in the mood for a favor right now.
?: But-
Nathan: Not intrested.
?: You need to listen g-
Nathan: Um what part of no do you not understand?
Nathan walked away.
?: He's not getting away so easily.
Nathan got back home and opened the door.
Charlie: What took you so long.
Nathan: Wow you're really picky about five minutes.
Charlie: More like you texted me twelve minutes ago that you were finished.
Nathan: There was this weird man.
Nathan put the bags on the table.
Charlie: What do you mean?
Nathan: That.
Charlie: Yeah yeah I mean what made him weird.
Nathan: Oh he said he had an offer.
Charlie: What offer?
Nathan: More like a favor; he said that there was a world in need.
Charlie: Oh really, that happens all the time, nothing special.
Nathan: Sure.
In the evening.
POV: Charlie
Charlie was prepairing to get ready for bed, brushing his teeth and such.
Charlie: I realy wonder what he saw, but he is near impossible to get information out of, I guess that might be a good thing.
Nathan shouted from downstairs; still awake.
Nathan: Hey! How old is this cheese!?
Charlie: How would I know, it wouldn't be there if it were to be expired!
Nathan Okay!
Charlie: Where was I? Oh it doesn't matter I just want to sleep.
Charlie went to bed.
End of prologue.
Please don't judge a book by it's prologue :)
Please keep critisism constructive thanks in advance.
~Le loempia
