Okay, so this is a re-start of my story, Burning Blue. I've gotten comments on how Bluestar and Fireheart ages were to far apart and yada yada. So in this new verson, i'm going to make it better and make more sense!
Changes?
Bluestar is now Bluefur at the time. Pinestar is still in lead, and this is set before Bluefur ever had her kits. The thing between her and Oakheart never happened, and Whitekit hasn't been born yet. So Snowfur is still alive, also Pinestar never left and Tigerkit (star) isn't born yet.
There's other changes, like since Bluefur and Oakheart never get together, Mistyfoot, Stonefur and Mosskit aren't in this universe. (I know they play important roles later on, but I'll have that covered.) And if y'all have any questions than please ask and i'll answer. Also all of the newer warriors are all the same ages (well, between the age gaps of three-four moons.)
Once again, Bluestar isn't leader in this book, she is a just-made young warrior. And Fireheart is also a younger tom, but still old enough for Bluestar (since he'll be about 20 moons old, or a year and eight moons.)
Thank you!
ThunderClan
LEADER: Pinestar- red brown tom with green eyes.
DEPUTY: Sunfall- bright orange tom with yellow eyes.
MEDICINE CAT: Goosefeather- speckled gray tom with blue eyes.
Apprentice, Featherwhisker
WARRIORS
Stormtail- blue-gray tom with blue eyes.
Adderfang- mottled brown tabby tom with yellow eyes
Tawnyspots- light gray tabby tom with amber eyes
Sparrowpelt- big, dark brown tabby tom with yellow eyes
Smallear- gray tom with very small ears and amber eyes
Windflight- gray tabby tom with pale green eyes
Poppydawn- long haired, dark red she-cat with a bushy tail and amber eyes
Swiftbreeze- tabby-and-white she-cat with yellow eyes
White-eye- pale gray she-cat, blind in one eye
Dappletail- tortoiseshell she-cat with beautiful dapple coat
Bluefur- blue-gray she-cat with blue eyes
Snowfur- white she-cat, gray tipped ears and blue eyes
Rosetail- gray she-cat with a thick, bushy ginger tail
Thistleclaw- gray-and-white tabby tom with spiky fur and amber eyes
Patchpelt- black and white tom with amber eyes
Leopardfoot- black she-cat with green eyes
APPRENTICES
Featherwhisker- pale silver gray tom with bright amber eyes, long whiskers, sweeping plumpy tail.
ELDERS
Stonepelt- gray tom, front shoulder injured badly to where he can barely walk.
Weedwhisker- pale orange tom with yellow eyes
Larksong- tortoiseshell she-cat with with pale green eyes
Mumblefoot- brown tom, slightly clumsy, with amber eyes
Prologue
Bluepaw stepped forward. Her blue-gray pelt shining in the starlight as she looked around. Her blue gaze narrowed as a star-pelted cat stood in front of her. The young she-cat blinked. She had never seen this cat before. A tall ginger tom with a white chest and paws, green eyes staring back down at her.
"You made it." He meowed, green eyes illuminating. "Good, now listen closely little one. This is critical for you to know, for the life of ThunderClan is held to these words." The StarClan tom paused. "Only fire and water can save the Clan."
Bluepaw frowned, jaw opening as she began to speak. But before a word was uttered, the sound of water rushed into her ears. Giving a muffled scream. The blue-gray apprentice was picked off her paws. Being thrown into a strong-current river as bubbles escaped from her maw.
Eyes rolling, she found herself being dragged along. Her paws failing to carry her up to the top of the murky water. Instead, she floated down, the whites of her eyes showing as she drifted into darkness.
….
Rusty was walking in the woods as the sound of crackling reached his ears. Green gaze searching for the cause of this noise, and he found himself facing a tall ginger tom. The cat had ginger fur, almost like himself, but he also had white dotted on his chest and paws. Rust noticed something else too, lights, like that of stars, twinkled in his pelt.
"Ho-?" As he spoke, the stranger silenced him.
"Only fire and water can save the Clan!" The taller tom hissed, voice echoing as the crackling noise grew louder.
Rusty stepped back, eyes wide as he felt something hot flicker at his paws. Looking down, he saw a small flame start. Before it grew, devouring the young tom as he screeched. Paws thrumming on the forest floor as he tried to escape the burning tongue of the fire.
So here's the first chapter of the re-make! Hopefully this one will please those whom had troubles with the age difference. But to be noted, the timeline is changes and so has some of the cats. (Mostly just their ages and which cats haven't been born/killed yet)
10-30-19 11:47 PM