This is my first fanfic so grade me like my GT teacher does!

I do not own maximum ride

JP DOES

BUT i may add some other people in

Max- 18

Fang- 20

Iggy-20

Nudge- 16

Angel-3

Gazzy- 17

Prologue

"Stop splashing me!" I told my little sister, Angel as I tried to wash the grime out of her hair from a hard day's work. "No." She told me as I heard someone knock on the door. "There's someone at the door." She says. "Okay. I'll be right back." I say standing up from the small tub I was bathing her in. "as I try to leave she says "but you can't just leave me here." "Yes I can and you better stay."

I walk out of my mother's bedroom and walk to the front door to see a solider standing outside maybe in his mid 20's. That's when I start to take shallow breaths. "Oh my god". Do they know that my mother died two years ago? The only person I ever told was Fang and he would never tell—would he.

WELL HERE GOES NOTHING...