Dear Readers who have gotten this far-
I have decided to re-write chapter 1 of this story. Chapter 18 will be delayed for a little bit until it is done. My reason for doing this is because since I've started this fanfiction my storytelling skills have drastically improved. But chapter one seems to be a good turn-off for about 95% of the people that read this story. Therefore this is my solution to the problem. I greatly want this story to succeed so if you think of anything that would benefit my ability to write one then I do please ask for the advice.
-Extinctionteam75