This is my first story. Sorry if its bad. Also English is not my first language so, sorry again for the grammer mistakes.
So i asked for suggestions and i am starting to form a story in my head. As for the reviews:
Jkdarksid – Thank you for your suggestion! I actually like your idea but the problem is, i think Ben is already overpowered. So i don't want him to summon a servant for this story. Maybe i can write another story using your idea in the future.
Sunwolf27 – Also thank you for your suggestion! Your ideas are interesting.
A) Like i said i don't want Ben to summon a servant.
B) A lot more original then the first suggestion but again, i don't want him summoning someone.
C) I am actually going with this one. Well, kinda. I like the part where Gwen goes to Fuyuki as a punishment but i don't want her to summon a servant either. So Gwen goes to Fuyuki with Ben as her companion.
Arsur3215Loki – It would be very complicated have Gwen as a servant. And i want to make something different. So having Gwen as caster means Ben would participate in the Holy Grail. But i want him to protect the Grail, instead of fighting for it. Still thank you very much for your idea!
Omnisaurus – That obvious, huh? Well, i don't know how to get an editor. Maybe you would like to be the editor for this story? If so, let me know. Now, moving on to your review, there is only one thing i can say. Facts! I mean relationships in fanfics be like, " I just met you but, you are beautiful, will you marry me?". I mean, it's stupid. And don't worry, i will try to make this story as original as my imagination lets me. Also thanks for sharing your opinion with me!
Raider550 – Thank you for your idea! But i want this story to be more original, different.
So, this isn't really a chapter of the story. I just need to start from somewhere.
Chapter 1: The Ultimate Battle
"Here we are again. Me, on the cusp of total victory. You, the last man standing. The only slim hope left in this world, this universe. Who will it be? Swampfire? Diamondhead? One of your tiresome ultimate aliens? Perhaps you have yet another new transformation to spring on me?" Says Vilgax.
He is a humanoid creature with a face that of an octopus. He has tentacles dangling in front of his face. His skin is a blueish green and his eyes are red. He is 15 feet tall. He has a godly aura around him.
"No transformations, not this time. But I do have one last surprise." Says Ben, while taking out a sword.
Ben has short brown hair, green eyes and pale skin. He is quite skinny for his age, though he sports an athletic, slightly muscular build. He wears a black shirt, jeans and a green jacket with white stripes and number 10 on it.
"Azmuth's sword?" says Vilgax, sounding suprised.
"Goes nice with the watch, don't you think?" Ben says with a smirk.
"I'm going to miss these little get togethers." Says Vilgax ripping some kind of computer. (A/N: Or whatever that thing is.) and throws it at Ben.
Ben closes his eyes and uses the sword to shield himself. He opens his eyes to see the sword cutting through the piece of technology like it was nothing.
"This is a good sword."
"I am not afraid of you." Says Vilgax. Glaring at him.
"You should be. I just figured out how to use this thing." Exclaims Ben. The sword starts to glow and an armor covers him. "As my old friend George used to say, have at thee!"
Vilgax sends three fireballs at Ben who blocks two of them. And sends the last one right back at Vilgax, catching him by surprise. The fireball hits him and sends him flying. Vilgax gets up and they run towards each other.
"Somebody should've done this a long time ago." Ben says. And stabs Vilgax. Suddenly a light appears, blinding everyone. When it passes Vilgax lays in the ground, defeated.
"You stabbed me!"
"Don't be such a baby. I just took Dagon's power from you." Responds Ben.
"Kinda had us worried there for a second." Says someone from behind. Ben turned to see Kevin and Gwen looking at him.
"I wasn't worried" Gwen smiled at him.
"Then you are a fool! You have the Ultimatrix, the sword of Azmuth, and the power of Dagon at your fingertips." Vilgax growled.
"Yeah, so?"
"You claim to be a hero. What will you do with all this power?"
"Turn everybody on earth back to human for starters."
Vilgax smiled at him. "You think too small. We are alike, you and I. We take the universe on our hands and bend it to our will. With little more than just a thought you can wipe out all the evil."
"I really could."
"Ben!" Gwen shouts at him.
Ben turned to her. "I can bring peace to the universe." He remembered all their adventures. He raised his sword and it started to glow. The energy covered the world. "But that doesn't mean that I should." He smiled. The armor around him disappeared.
"Now, what to do with you?" he says while looking at the sword.
Like I said this wasn't a chapter. Just a recall of what happened right before the story. I removed the 'Julie' parts. And I think I'll let Ben have Ascalon. Should I? And should I give Ben the new Omnitrix or stick with Ultimatrix? Please review and share your thoughts with me. I'll try to respond to them.
