Good day, good day! I'm so sorry from the bottom of my heart for leaving this story for over a year. I burnt myself out and completely left and forgot about it. However, now it's back and I have a new idea for the harem! I decided that as the story progresses I'll have each girl that is in Naruto's harem confess throughout the story and those girls will be decided by everyone who comments.
There will be a total of 6 confessions throughout the story. This way it techno isn't a harem as in the end Naruto will only be with one girl but yeah just so every character has their moment. Every confession till the last one will be turned down by Naruto.
I'll pick the six most common names nominated and over time the less I see that name I'll have them confess. If you want a say in how this progresses make a comment about who you want for Naruto's relationship and see how it ends up.
The first confession will be in three months (or three chapters because now I'm going to try my best to upload a chapter every month, maybe two if I have high motivation.
Now for Tatsumi, I'm going to keep it the same. He'll have one girl and that's all no changes most likely unless it's heavily requested. Complete clean slate with him in a sense as well.
As for the tailed beasts, something unique is planned for his reunion with them. Let's just say it's so unique there's a whole area and even a chapter or two for it.
And finally, for the story, I'm still going to make it mainly based on the Akame ga Kill universe but except for some Naruto instances such as the Akatsuki but not the way you think they didn't just magically appear don't worry.
Godlike Naruto/ Smart Naruto/ Slightly Mature Naruto
Naruto's Confessions (TBD)
Tatsumi's girl: (TBD)
Review Answers (Old)
Jomyrulez: Seriously, don't ask me why I didn't separate them. I genuinely have no idea either. I might have just been lazy. I won't do that though this time.
Bloddymoon: Lo más probable es que ahora lo haga.
RedBurningDragon: Whilst that is true I think that I'll keep her the way she is because Naruto, for now, is keeping a low profile plus it'll be easier with it as is so it can be more related to the original. But maybe the deeper I go I could do that.
fraxures: Thanks it's here thankfully…
1740: Well we'll just have to see
Dimax CR: Yeah I understand that and I'm also pretty sure that she'll be with Naruto.
Azrael237: Yup I hear you and I'm pretty sure that's how it's gonna go down.
NaruRias: Thank you for what you think about this so far! To be honest that storyline was mainly what I had planned for this whole thing so that does work out. Don't worry as well because I'll be sure to use Naruto's good points as best as I can in this story and I'll slow it down as well I've never done well with harems especially one that's based on a story, to begin with, and I'll try my absolute hardest to not abandon this again. (Not exactly a harem now but yeah :p.)
Naruto Uchiha: Well you're definitely in luck.
Review Answers: (New)
Dasgun: Hehe…
Guest: (Comment: Update this story) The time has come in a sense.
GorillaMan616: Just in the nick of time.
' ' = Thinking
" " = Talking
Note: Some characters will be OOC occasionally such as Tatsumi, Mine, and Naruto. As well as for now Naruto has no connections to the tailed beasts as he has been weakened after falling through the portal however in this chapter we'll start to see more of that.
Naruto: Hey guys! I honestly wish this guy would shut up and stop being so formal but for now, let's get to that capital y'know! 'And also maybe check on his story and maybe even try updating it?'
God, I hate this dude sometimes but whatever let's begin after so fucking long.
Disclaimer: Refer to Chapter 1. (Also some of this chapter was written a few days after I made the update chapter. I'll look it over and make some edits and say where I continued. It's not much.)
To Naruto and Yukari who were taking a break from walking and were sitting in the grass
"Hey, Naruto?" Yukari looked over at him obviously planning to ask a question.
"Yes, Yukari?" Said the blonde semi-curious about what she was going to ask.
"What do you think the capital will be like?" Questioned the black-haired girl hoping to get her answer.
Naruto in response shrugged at the question and in response said, "Frankly I don't have the slightest idea I'm just as curious as you about the capital. Hopefully, we will know about that soon."
Yukari was somewhat dissatisfied with the answer but still accepted it. She then responded with, "All right Naruto you're right." And with that went and looked up at the sky to view the clouds.
After a few minutes of resting one of Naruto's clones came up to Naruto.
"We've found the capital." Said the clone much to the blonde's happiness. Naruto in response thanked his clone and then retracted all of his clones.
After this Naruto went up to Yukari and said "Hey Yukari guess what?" She then looked up at him curious about what he was going to say.
When her eyes met his she said "What is it Naruto?" Naruto then grinned at her and then exclaimed, "I just figured out where the capital is!" This brought the black-haired girl to mountains of enjoyment.
After she was done celebrating Naruto gave her a motion to hop on his back so they could get there faster.
When they arrived
"Wow, it's huge!" Yukari said eager to check it out.
Naruto in response chuckled slightly and said: "Yeah it is and remember why we're here alright?"
"All right, all right." She said in response.
"All right then let's start looking for them." The blonde said to the girl.
To that, she replied, "Right!" Eager to find those people as well as explore the capital.
(Continued here)
Naruto was strolling while keeping a close watch of Yukari. As for his surroundings, It was seemingly a worn down place and had uneven classes but that's about it. Eventually, however, the blonde heard a peculiar conversation happening near him.
"Hey did you hear, there's a weird sacred gear out in…"
"What are you talking about no one has ever made a new sacred gear it's impossible you dumb prick."
"No, I swear there were even sightings of it. It left a strange aura, something similar to a beast and no weak one either."
"Really who told you this?"
The conversation faded out.
Naruto's eyebrows skyrocketed. If he knew anything about the basic psychology of humans it was that they liked to talk about things. A lot. Along with that, the talk about a beast made him immediately connect it to the tailed beasts.
They even said something about a sacred gear and none have been made. If any conclusion could be made it could be that the sacred gear could be his pass to Kurama and the others.
Quietly Naruto made a shadow clone and quickly transformed. He had to know about this sacred gear, and quickly.
To his shadow clone, Naruto simply looked over at Yukari. The clone got the message and Naruto made his search for the people who started the conversation.
The search didn't take long unironically. It was at a bar and one of them was drunk so it was easy to depict who it was.
They seemed deep in conversation but Naruto didn't have the time to care about that. He tapped the sober man. He jumped a little at the sight although only the blonde picked it up. When the man turned his shoulder he had a small sweat drop but he had all the reason to.
He was looking at what seemed to be Itachi Uchiha although with more muscle and a very different hairdo. One that meant he was ready to fuck something up.
The man silently gulped and nervously asked, "W-What can I do for you?" He was petrified and Naruto even cringed at the sight a bit
Calmly, Naruto said, "My name is Itai Uchlon, you said something about a sacred gear. Can I ask where you found it?"
He tried to stay as unsuspecting as possible if only he picked a less conspicuous transformation. It didn't last long either.
The drunk man at the eyed him up and down and asked him, "What business does it involve you dickhead? I don't give two shits about how you look. I'll whoop your ass for eavesdropping asshole!"
Anyone could tell he had sunken down a few drinks and not just a few because the drunk man was completely out of it. No posture, hunched over with a drink in his right hand which he had a poor grip over, just overall a horrible look.
Naruto didn't want to get in a fight but just in case he prepared himself. In response to the asshole, he simply said "I'm just curious. I never stated that I wanted any foul intentions. I'm just curious as to where you found this sacred gear."
Eventually, the sober man was about to say but the other beat him to it. "Why the fuck should we tell you? I don't give a flying fuck who the hell you are I'll stick a windpipe so far up your ass you'll puke down the other side!"
Although slightly disgusted Naruto kept a poker face and quickly punched the man. He tried to hold back as well but it was unsuccessful. The man was passed out by the wall which had begun to lose its form.
'Fuck.' Now he'd done it. Not only was that a huge scene he scared his intel shitless. Nervously he looked over at the sober man. Silently he was dying but he kept it to himself.
"Now I'll ask again. Where is it located? I won't do anything to you as long as you don't say anything and tell me where I can find that sacred gear."
Naruto tried to sound tough to cover it up. Even though it was a horrible attempt the man was too scared to even notice.
Sucking up all his courage the man finally responded "To the west of the capital there's a singular mountain. It just randomly appeared one day and once when some people were traveling it they came across it. It looked like a sword. They said it had fangs for sharpness and on each fang was a tail of some sort each looking different. It was a long sword but still, it sounds weird."
After that, he silently breathed a sigh of relief and picked up his footing. Naruto in return simply thanked him and left. Still with this he was not at ease but thankful he knew where to look. Soon after he made his way back to Yukari, not losing any momentum.
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Chapter Note: Well the train's back and moving again isn't it? I never did say it was discontinued but I still feel like shit for at least not saying anything reminder it has been over a year since the last chapter so things are bound to change. The next chapter will finally be where we start with Tatsumi and Night Raid and even the tailed beasts. I cannot promise any demotivation because it's bound to happen again but hopefully, it will be the first and only time.
There is now no inspiration at all besides from the original show Akame ga Kill. Everything will now be my twist on it with Naruto. Thank you for waiting and my chapter length will still be within the 2-3k range or one major event per chapter and special events will get two. Once again, thank you for reading, and thank you for giving me the motivation to continue this. It does not mean that I will have enough motivation to finish it but that is the ultimate goal it will probably take at least 100k words so yeah; till the next chapter!
