Chapter 784.
"Return of the former Carson's."
- In collaboration with Vasmasdas1.

(January 27. Somewhere far from Ketcham Park.)

We see the family Station Wagon of the Carson Family and following behind is a red car, and within the station wagon are Benjamin and Loretta Carson, and also with them are Angel Carson and her boyfriend Mark Warren, and the one in the red car following them is Jessica Carson.

The plans they have is to spend some time at the Park, then Benjamin asks. "So, you're parents aren't coming along for this?"

Mark shakes his head in denial. "At this moment, they both have some meetings to attend, but they always make up for it by spending time with me at an awesome place, I'm chill with the whole thing. Though, there is something I am concerned about."

Loretta then asks. "What might that be, Mark?"

Mark then tells them. "A rival hotel company and I don't mean the Pertland's, But some small hotel company that is starting up, and word is that they want to take over the land that is near my mom's hotel, and no way are we gonna let someone try and take what we own."

Angel is surprised. "Well, surely this new hotel company doesn't know what they're doing. Are they hostile or trying to be persuading? Also, did any research on them?"

Mark is about to explain that part, but then a cloud of smoke blocks the vision of the two vehicles and they try to make a stop and they manage to halt and look around. "What the heck is this?" asked Benjamin. "I don't think there was any news about a fog coming into town."

Loretta is confused. "There can't be a fog, we would've seen it in the news and there is nothing about it. We need to try and see what the heck is going on here."

They all come out of the vehicles and then Jessica looks to her family. "Hey, you guys alright?"

Angel nods. "We are, does anyone know what this fog is all about?"

Mark smells the air. "This is not fog smoke, guys... This is, smoke from... A smoke bomb, a really big smoke bomb. Something isn't right here, guys."

Benjamin is about to tell the others to go back into the cars, but then someone in a black ski mask takes the father of the family and then knocks him out. Then Loretta is taken down and this surprises the others, and then Jessica grabs her taser. "Kids, run!"

Mark and Angel try to run, but then Angel turns around and see her sister taken down by several other boys, and then Mark sees someone. "Look out!" Mark pushes Angel, and he takes the hit from the baseball bat and he's knocked out. This angers Angel and she punches the kid who attacked her boyfriend.

"We're getting out of here!" Angel then carries her boyfriend out of there. The other boys arrive and help Edison and they look around and realize, they lose Mark and Angel.

The man in the ski mask goes to the others. "Leave them be, we can take them down next time. We got the three others who have been a thorn on my side for so long. Let's get the heck outta here." Derrick then starts the RV and they load the unconscious Jessica, Benjamin and Loretta and they drive off.

(At an old Saw mill Warehouse.)

Jessica Carson soon awakens and she feels her dizzy head regaining herself and then she looks around and she sees her unconscious parents are tied up on chairs, and she is tied up as well, and then she sees some folks she knows and hates. Her former brothers: Roderick, Chester, Jerry and Edison and with them is their uncle, Derrick.

Jessica is angered by this. "What the hell are you all doing here?!"

Derrick snickers. "Why, we're here for some revenge. After what you and those spineless bastards did, I wanna watch as you all suffer for kicking us out of the curb like that and not being loyal to the family, and I am the one who chooses who becomes a Carson and who doesn't!"

Jessica scoffs. "Well, too bad stranger. You were locked up and paid the price for it, and also you are the youngest and don't mean anything to us! You are not a Carson and never will be!"

Then Benjamin speaks, he woke up after hearing them talk. "You started this, Derrick. You're the reason why this is going on, you asshole." Benjamin looks to Derrick sternly. "You were always perverted and messed up, and you always thought you could get away with everything, but you couldn't."

"You're rude and horrible ways is what caused those boys to become your damned evil clones, and it all began further when my mom and dad spoiled you, while I was the responsible one and did my choices to make a living, and then came the day you made so much trouble they sent you to military school."

"And yet it didn't work and that is the reason why you were sent back here after you disobeyed your commanding officer and killed those innocent folks and then your own men. You are the reason why all of this is happening, you did all of this you fucking bastard!"

Jessica then speaks again. "I don't see you as my brothers anymore! Because Lincoln Loud is a far better brother figure, and heck he's a good big brother figure towards Angel, and the Louds are also our family, we owe them for making sure you bastards rot in jail!"

Derrick and the others are enraged by those words. "You're all gonna get what is coming to ya, and I'm gonna make sure that Carson last name is our again and... What in the hell is that sound?"

Then something breaks through the walls and they all take cover and a large Tank drives by, an Apocalypse Tank and then jumping off from it are: Lincoln, Jordan, Luna, Sam, Angel and Mark and they do not look happy after what went down.

Lincoln then speaks. "How did we find you? Well, apparently you didn't take Jessica's phone away from her, and we tracked her location."

They all look to Chester. "What? You didn't tell me to do that!"

Edison scoffs. "Dude, look at your left hand pal!"

Chester does so and he sees the written message so he wouldn't forget and apparently he did. "Oh, I guess I was left to take their phones away."

What was written on his hand? "Chester, get their phones. Do not forget that."

Derrick then grabs a crowbar. "You're all dead to me for coming here!" He then charges at them but then Luna throws a wooden pole and the man is knocked away, and then Sam and Luna fend of Chester and Jerry.

Mark and Angel race off to free Jessica, Benjamin and Loretta, while Lincoln and Jordan are fighting off at Edison, and Roderick. Lincoln then dodges the punches from Edison and he kicks him away. "Seriously, you guys need to stay locked up somewhere else."

Then Jordan punches him away, then Roderick comes to attack, but then she ducks and she makes Roderick trip and Lincoln kicks him into a trunk, and he is stuck. Edison then sees Angel and Mark have freed their parents. "Oh no you don't!"

But then Mark punches Edison in the face. "That was for trying to hit Angel!" He then kicks Edison on the knee and then Mark karate chops the head of Edison and he is knocked out, and then Edison is picked up by Angel and she throws him onto Roderick who was about to get back up but he falls back into the trunk.

Meanwhile, Luna and Sam are both dodging and fighting off Chester and Jerry and then Chester looks at Luna. "Girl, what the hell did you do to yourself? Where the heck is the rocker babe?"

Luna cracks her knuckles. "Not here!" She then kicks Chester at the crotch and then she slaps his face, and then she grabs him by the hair and she sends him to the wall, and then she gives this guy a wedgie and then throws him towards Sam and she ducks and Chester hits Jerry.

Sam then kicks Jerry in the face, and then she grabs both boys. "You two are so annoying." She then tosses them onto some empty trowels and then she pulls the rope and tons of saw dust falls onto them. "Glad this is a saw mill."

Meanwhile, Roderick is getting back up and he attacks Angel and Mark, but then Jessica intervenes and she punches him in the face. "The day you were turned against us, you were an annoying asshole!" She then punches him again. "You were a nuisance and you always ruined everything!"

Jessica then hits him again. "You messed with my friends and ruined the way things were!" Jessica then kicks Roderick in the knee. "You then turned the others into what Derrick wanted!" Jessica then grabs Roderick by the hair and punches his face. "I never wanted you as my brother, ever!"

Roderick then has a knife, but then Jessica punches him in the chest and then pushes him away, she then grabs the chair and she hits him with it. Roderick tries to go for his knife, but Jessica steps on his hand and then she stomps on his head, and he is knocked out. "You bastard."

They then see Lincoln and Jordan, and the duo are dodging the attacks from Derrick. Lincoln ducks down and he punches Derrick on the back and then Jordan performs a Chris Jericho Code Breaker and this stuns Derrick and he stumbles, but then Lincoln from behind does a Dolph Ziggler Zig-Zag.

Derrick is knocked over to the ground, but then he gets back up and looks towards Lincoln and Jordan in anger. "Not gonna beat me!" Derrick pulls out a gun and he points it at them. "I am done getting beaten by you kids!"

But the man doesn't notice Jessica coming from behind. Lincoln and Jordan see this and they don't seem afraid of the gun and Derrick is confused. "What the hell is wrong with you two? Haven't you been threatened at gun point before?!"

"Hey!" the man turns around and then Derrick is punched in the stomach and he has a struggle and fight for the gun as Jessica overpowers him.

Lincoln and Jordan try to help, but then they see where Jessica and Derrick are fighting, there is a large hole leading to the basement of the saw mill. Then as they fight for it, the gun is held close to Derrick and Jessica tries to fight for it, but then a shot is heard.

Jessica backs away and is holding the gun and she has no blood on her, but then she sees that Derrick is bleeding and then he spits out some blood, the shot was fired by Jessica and his through his chest. The man stumbles, but then he loses his footing and he falls into the hole.

The other go over and look down and see that Derrick has landed onto the saw that fell down there, and thus his body has been split in half. They all look away from that sight. "Jeez, looks like something outta Texas Chainsaw Massacre" replied Sam.

They then go over and tie up the unconscious boys till the cops show up, and the Tank comes back with Peter Harris inside and he sees what went down, the reason why he kept driving was because something fell and blocked his sight outside the tank, but he stopped and backed up.

Angel and Mark go over and they embrace Jessica, Loretta and Benjamin. They almost got killed, but at least they are alive and that Derrick will never be around, ever again.

To be continued on January 29.

A/N: They came, they tried and they got beaten. Not that easy for such foes who thought they could get revenge, and this time they are going to stay locked up and gone for good. Thank you again "Vasmasdas1" for the idea and concept, thanks dude. I hope that some of you enjoyed reading this new chapter guys.

Date made: 11/23/21.