Hi everyone!

I'm Soph, 13, and this is the first chapter of my very first fanfiction. I really hope that you will like it and please leave comments to inform me of where I can improve. It would be a very big help. Thanks!

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James Potter jumped onto his bed, grinning.

And I bet that's where you guys know that he has solemnly swear that he's up to no good.

Out he pulls from his inside pocket- a pure golden time-turner.

It isn't even a grin anymore, More of like a smile, just that it's kind of sly.

The front door of the house opens, there's laughter downstairs, then the slammimg of the door.

'Ginny! Harry! Lily! Oh my god, you're so tall now!'

'Hermione, dear, how can one grow so much in one night you can just figure out by one glimpse of the naked eye?'

'It's something aunts do that we do not understand, Ron.'

'Well, then, Harry, mate, it sure is-'

'Bloody hell.'

'Gosh, you two are turning into Fred and George.'

No, your whole conversation is bloody hell- thought James. He stood up and was about to close his door when Rose Granger-Weasley's freckled-full face popped in.

'I'm mad at you, you know' said Rose.

'And why is that?'

'WhY DiD yoU RuiN mY DreSs?!'

'Because he's a Malfoy, Rose, have some common sense-'

'ArE You KidDinG mE, James Sirius Potter- and don't you dare-'

'But I'm always serious.'

(Dear readers, please be ready because-)

'Aaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggggggg! James Potter, I'm going to tell on you!'

'Well, at least your tone is now normal and without all those crackings from those hell of ups and downs.'

Rose's anger was about to burst when she sighed and turned to close the door instead.

It all happened in a few seconds.

1) The Johnson-Weasleys arrived and Roxanne and Fred the 2nd came thundering upstairs.

2) Fred nicked one of Ginny's fresh lemon cream pies and slapped it onto his twin's face.

3) Roxanne screamed.

4) Albus and Hugo decided to come out for pie.

5) James dropped the turner in surprise of Roxanne's ear-piercing scream only ladies can do.

6) The time-turner broke.

7) James, Rose, Albus, Hugo, Fred and Roxanne all disappeared in the middle of a huge tornado-like swirl of gold, shimmering, magical mist.

'Roxanne? Darling? Is there anything wrong? What the-'

Meanwhile, in 1995,

DUNdunDUNdunDUNdun dundundundundun… (beautiful piano music- Canon in D)-

'I'm gonna' rock this place off because I don't ccaaaarrreeeee-'-

'Sirius sssttttooooppppp—'

Thump!

'Sirius!'

'That wasn't me!'

Molly Weasley was furious. Real furious. But confused. Sirius was causing whack on the top floor and Remus was practising the piano on the first floor, but the thump seemed to be coming from way behind the house.

Remus seemed to have the same idea. Tip-toeing downstairs with his wand out, he motioned Molly to go get the kids- Harry, Ron, Hermione and the twins, who were home for summer- that didn't need to be told.

Even Sirius, who rushed downstairs, shared something that were thinking-

Dementors!

Invaders!

They have been found.

'James Sirius Potter! You. Are. So. Dead.'

Or were they?

P.S. I said that I would add Teddy in this story but I haven't so far, at least in this first chapter. But I WILL. I promise. I am a Lupin fan and Teddy has always been a favourite.

What's your favourite?