I finished my own Original Story, it is entirely free and on Wattpad. Check it out, Destiny Rebellions- A Queen's Champion... if you love A Mortal's Might you'll love it. It was inspired heavily by that story and this one. Please check it out and tell me if you love it. I will be publishing it one day, so check it out before I pull it off of Wattpad.
Yes, this is a rewrite of A Mother's Love, It was in real need of repair.
This is going to be a half op Naruto.
Unlike the old story, I know where this will go. I am not just winging it... I am really pumped for the new idea and I cannot wait to show you what will happen.
"Okay, brat, work on your rasengan. The ladies are calling me!" Jiraiya bounced after only five seconds of talking to Naruto, who scowled after the man.
His mother did more than scowl. "That fucker... To think we named him your Godfather!"
"Wait what?"
"Yup, he was your godfather. He will be punished for it, trust me on that. Now, I need you to make a hundred and twenty clones." Naruto did as she said, without question. "Set twenty clones on the rasengan, start with the first stage so you can really master the rasengan. It is your best ninjutsu so it would be best if you can really master it, you will not always have a chance to create a clone. Also the rasengan is basically one giant chakra control exercise, so that will help in that regard as well. Set twenty working in the leaf focusing exercise, I know it's boring but it will really help with focus and chakra control. Have twenty work on the leaf concentration exercise only this time upside hanging from a tree while holding a transformation. That should also increase your focus and control, especially with your massive reserves.
On the physical side, I want you to do some work too. Have twenty work on the Red Death katas I show you last night but have them do it on the water, that will help your chakra control and give you a taijtusu style that is actually some kind of focus. Set twenty to work on the kenjutsu kata's I showed you, use your kunai as a sword in this case since you really need a back up weapon and that is where I shined. Lastly, I want you to use twenty clones to work on your calligraphy, so you can actually master sealing when it comes down to it.
For your body, I want you to run fifty laps over that lake, then I want you to spar with a hundred clones, two at a time. In an hour, you will disperse your clones, digest the knowledge and repeat the process. Prepare for a massive headache and exhaustion, your father and I used this method to learn to seal, it's how your father got so good so fast. He would never have mastered Sealing during the war if he lacked that jutsu. Oh speaking of, create one more clone. That clone will be learning sealing from me personally."
Nodding, Naruto did as she said.
He was super excited to get real training but oh boy did he know this was going to hurt...
... and he was right, an hour later when he collapsed, holding his head in agony when he dispersed all of his clones. His head screamed at him, his body and soul had not a trace of energy...
"Naruto, I need you to start to meditate, just focus and work on your breathing it will help you to regulate what you experienced and help you to deal with it all." Naruto did as she said, and without twenty minutes he felt almost okay. After about half an hour he felt entirely fine and was able to get right back to it. "Naruto, I want you to use the Katas you learned as a clone to fight the clones this time. You have twenty hours of training with them, if you use your hundred clones to spar with you while using those katas, you will actually accumulate far, far more hours of training with them. In a month, if you only count the twenty clones, you will have almost two years of training with them. It will give you a technical training higher than that amazing boy Lee... speaking off, tonight you will be using your clones to make weight sealed, which are actually really easy to make. With a good diet and healing, you will be faster than Lee in like three months. By the time you return to the Leaf, you will be Faster than Guy."
Naruto was beaming. "What else will we be training in?"
"In the next month... well, I would like you to figure out how to sense, suppress your chakra and learn the basis of your element. I am guessing it will be wind, since both Minato and I were wind types. Combined with a sword, or even just a kunai, and all of your training... you will easily be Chunin level and thus far less in danger of dying if you get caught. I also want you to start working on mastering the replacement, the shushin and the transformation since all of those are utterly vital for you since you already know them. In fact, make sixty clones and have twenty clones work on each of those. I will teach you the shushin... and we should work with twenty clones on handsigns, since yours are sloppy... yeah... that would work. I am making this up a little as I go."
"Yes Ma'am!"
And so Naruto did as he was told, unable to wait for the month to end and for him to see ow powerful he would be by it's end!
Chapter end, tell me what you think in the reviews.
This is awesome.
Love, your Ninja Overlord,
Mika.
