I finished my own Original Story, it is entirely free and on Wattpad. Check it out, Destiny Rebellions- A Queen's Champion... if you love A Mortal's Might you'll love it. It was inspired heavily by that story and this one. Please check it out and tell me if you love it. I will be publishing it one day, so check it out before I pull it off of Wattpad.


dingo-822 inspired this entire chapter, and helped me refocus myself and my efforts.


"Wind Style- Wind Armor!" Naruto state, his power rippling across the waters of his mindscape as a powerful wind gathered around his body. Cutting down resistance to bolster his speed and protect him with potent sharp wind, it was a powerful enchanter and was once the reason his mother could fight his father at his full speed and win at least half the time. Taking more control than a medical jutsu, it barely could manage it as he surged forward, slashing at his mother with Zabuza's blade.

Twisting around the blade, she kicked out shattering the blade and sending him flying, She was a master of the Wind armor, she knew it's weaknesses, especially in the hands of an amateur like him. Even without chakra bolstering her body, she was terrifyingly fast and strong, nearly as half as strong as Tsunade and far faster giving her punches far more weight and potency.

Twirling his broken blade, Naruto sent a slash of wind chakra at mother, then punched out at her with both fists, his wind armor warping sending potent blasts of wind chakra that would have hurt even Gaara with his armor. She just danced around them, effortlessly, graceful, mocking him with her smile.

She blurred out of existence for a moment, appearing under him kicking his feet out before planting a foot on his chest. " I win."

"That makes five hundred to one... you are the winner, again." He groaned, and she helped him to stand.

"Don't be whiny, it's not attractive. You did exceptionally well, you are easily stronger than the Lee boy was with his Gate's activated or that Gaara boy was. If you had to fight Sasuke with his Curse marked activated, you'd crush him without any of Kyuubi's powers. With them, he'd be dead in minutes. Your speed in the last five months I've been training you has monumentally increased, without your weights you are twice as fast as Lee was without his weights. Your strength is just as great. Your taijutsu is flawless, a perfect mixture of mine and your father's, which makes me glad I remembered his combat style and his training methods... or at least the basics. We will correct that when we sneak into the Leaf, your father's more advanced katas require more specific training. Thankfully his speed circuit training is something we discussed when making your training scrolls, your agility had massively increased in time with your speed.

Your ninjutsu is flawless, you know twelve wind jutsu, six water jutsu and can do them at a high level due to your control exercise. You can channel wind and water chakra into your blade, which you are also a master of using. Then there are your seals, which are just beautiful, I would put you at a level three out of five already, though yes that is thanks to your clone training. Your Rasengan is stunning, you can do one in each hand and increase their size at will! Your wind armor surpasses mine at seventeen and you can use it so fluidly, you're borderline Low Kage level in wind chakra manipulation and High Jonin with Water manipulation!

You have a mastery of things like politics, history, and procedure! Your stealth is beyond the most masterful ANBU thanks to a mix of my training and your experience as a prankster. You broke past the whole issue you had with reading and writing you had, hell you even love to read now! Kid, you are amazing, do not ever doubt yourself... "

Naruto flushed, his mother never failed to make him feel great about himself. He was sure that he appreciated that over all other things, even his power ups and training. No one had ever made him feel that good, not the Old man, not Jiraiya, not Kakashi,.. no one. It was a gift straight from the gods, if they existed.

"Thanks mom..."

She smiled, then sighed. "We do have to talk seriously about something though... two something, well two and a half. The first is Sasuke, I know you have been asking me about fighting Uchiha and I obliged, showing you how to detect and break Genjutsu, no matter how you struggle with it. I showed you how to fight them, how to fight by focusing on other parts of the body and avoiding the eyes. Kurama taught you how to use his chakra to break genjutsu, since he too is vulnerable to stronger genjutsu. However, there is a real issue that needs discussing... Sasuke himself. Do you still plan on getting him back. I know I told you about traitors, I know we talked about your abusers and that Sasuke never showed you love, or kindness or decency. You owe him or Sakura nothing. He made his choice and Sakura had no right to force that sort of promise out of you!"

Naruto sighed, sitting down. "I know... I know you are right, I... I do not need to honor that promise, and to be honest I am not sure I want to honor it. You are right, Sasuke was trash to me, and Sakura was far worse... but I did promise... and to be honest mostly I want to beat his ass for snapping my neck, for putting a Chidori thorough my shoulder. I want to prove that he is weak, that I am stronger, that I am not the loser he thinks I am... and I want to kill Orochimaru for... well, I may hate the village but no one deserves what he did to it. Not everyone hates me, there are probably people that at least are middle ground with me and I want to avenge them, the kids that died, the people that were good. Does that make sense?"

She kneeled down. "You are a far too good heart,... yes it does make sense. Now what about Sakura, you still like her?"

"No, not really. You showed me what I deserve so no."

"Good... any girls then? What are you looking for in one?"

Naruto thought about it. "An equal, someone I do not have to worry too much about protecting. Someone smart, but not mocking. Not a bully or an abuser, someone that is respectful towards others and can make me laugh. So no one in the Leaf really."

"Good boy... now... done with that mildly awkward situation, let's start on strategy. We need to get you to infiltrate the Leaf by tomorrow. I am not sure how much longer my presence will be sustained in this body, I can feel my form fading slightly. We need to get you first kill, you need to restore Kurama to his full form and we need to get Minato's scrolls from the Leaf. We also need to get you some game plans for when I go, all vitally important for your future."

""'

Naruto easily slipped past the Leaf's barrier, with his mother's help he used an ANBU special jutsu needed to pass the barrier secretly. He had no real trouble with this at all, the chakra control exercises his mom taught him had given him control comparable to Tsunade after five months of clone based training. He could probably do medical jutsu at this point, which he was considering since it was so useful, that and Genjutsu since that too was in his realm of possibility now.

Speaking of Genjutsu and Medical jutsu, Naruto quickly summoned thirteen clones and sent them outwards. Two the hospital to collect scrolls on the body and medical jutsu, two went to the Uchiha clan compound to try and break into their library, four Leaf's overall library to raid and make as many copies as they could on as many subjects as they could, four split up to keep an eye on any and everything in case of detection all in the forms of random civilians and the last clone went to the hospital as well to find Mizuki for a surprise.

The Real Naruto went to the Uzumaki Shrine, where he felt a magnetic pull on his seal that led him inwards. He quickly found a room filled with masks and immediately knew which was the right one. He grabbed it, feeling it's power resonating with the seal on his body. "This is it..."

A moment later, the clone with Mizuki appeared smirking. "The seal was a success." Naruto's clone said, the seal in question was a puppet seal the Uzumaki's made for sacrificial jutsu, which was one of the many reasons they had been so feared. Mizuki was moving rigidly, his eyes wide with fear. He could not speak, the seal restricted that much so he could not cast jutsu.

With a lot of hate, Naruto put the mask on the man and watched as the spirit of the Shinigami appeared, radiating terrifying chakra. The seal took effect and Mizuku slit his belly open, just as the Shinigami did and from it's belly came several flames, spirits of the past Kage sealed into it's belly.

Naruto ran through his own handsigns as Mizuki died, offering his own blood for the jutsu. " Soul severing jutsu!" His father's soul shimmered with Naruto's potent chakra, boiling until Kyuubi's own soul tore from it and flew into Naruto's body, like drawing like. To Naruto's shock, Minato's soul, after a moment, flew into his body as well and everything went dark... but only for a moment, in which Naruto appeared back in his mindscape next to both Kushina and Minato, with Minato gaping at them.

"Naruto... you... you hate the village now?"

Naruto rolled his eyes. "No, dad, I just don't care much for it. I was hated, hurt and mistreated for my entire life. Why love it? I want to be Hokage still, but only to make sure people do not go through what I did. I want to save the Branch Hyuugas for Neji, who was driven to madness from village approved slavery. I want to make sure no more Jinchuuriki are made anywhere, be it in the Leaf or in any other village. I want to make the world better than when I came into it. I want to make a difference nad being Hokage is a start. Now go, I have no use for you, you who made the choice to leave me with no one. You who could have raised me but chose to kill yourself when you could have easily lived and saved me a lifetime of hate and pain!"

Naruto's chakra, infinitely more powerful than his father's, surged and Minato was banished, leaving Naruto's body and fleeing to the pure world where he belonged.

Tears burned in Naruto's eyes, Kushina moved to him. "I am sorry I said nothing, but to be honest I was too stunned to say anything... I never planned on what I would say to Minato after so many years. I love him, always have and will but... his actions had consequences I cannot forgive..."

Naruto nodded. "It's okay, mom... it's okay... I don't hate him, he was a good soldier and a fantastic Hokage, I admire him but I cannot do what he did. It is hard to admire those in power when I was the being they sacrificed for the safety of others."

Sighing, she pulled him into a hug. "Naruto... as sweet as this is, we need to hurry. We cannot tarry long..."

"I know, I know..." Escaping his mindscape, Naruto grabbed the mask from Mizuki's bleeding out body and hurried away to his parent's old house sealed off and restricted with powerful seals. This was his last stop in the Leaf... he could not believe he was here, where he should have been raised and loved... it was a painful feeling, a reminder of the failures of the village...

Of so many people...

He would get his own one day, and this was the start of that.

"Naruto!" Naruto froze, turning and gaping at the sight of Hinata freaking Hyuuga somehow having snuck up on him. The girl, beautiful as ever, looked at him in awe. "What... what are you doing here?"

Cursing, Naruto realized he had no choice but to answer. "Hinata... please, forgive me for this..." He blurred away, striking her neck and knocking her out. Grabbing her, he pulled her into his family's home. He would decide what to do with her when he was inside, when he could actually think about it for more than a moment... and figure out how the hell she found him?


Chapter end, tell me what you think in the reviews.

No Hinata Naruto dating, but I do think she needs a boost... I have some ideas for this, I think you will like it. Again, no relationship.

Love, your Ninja Overlord,

Mika.