Okay. So through the feedback I have already received, I will be rewriting RWBY. And for this, I need to lay down some foundation rules.

1) NO Salem

2) Ozpin is NOT an immortal wizard.

3) Will keep volumes 1 to 3 mostly intact with minor changes.

4) Try to respect Monty Oum as much as possible. If disrespect the Oum, try to keep the disrespect to a minimum.

5) Realism. If someone does something, there will be equal actions and reactions.

For now, these are the only rules I can think of. If you think of any other rules that you think me and my story should abide by, go ahead and review the story telling me what your new rules are. If I find them to be reasonable and I like them, I will add them to the rules I have already established for this rewrite.