Okay, bad news and good news.
Bad: I'm not continuing New Guy as it is right now.
Good: I'm rewriting New Guy, using my planned outline. Featuring plot-hole fixes, more confidence in my writing, and an actual plan.
I'd post my rewrite now... but it's 11:07 PM as of writing this, so I'll do it in the morning. Rest assured that it isn't too much different from my original writing.
If you noticed any plot-holes or inconsistencies in my story, please comment them in the review section. This includes me getting plot/lore details wrong from Mozart's Fantasy and DeltaV's respective stories.
If you know what states they take place in, that would also be nice to know. Because I don't feel like digging through them to find out.