Hey folks!

I just want to say that I am thankful for your understanding on what's been going on in my personal life. I have some good news, my mom is going to be well enough to be able to return home, but she'll still be on a hospital bed, from what I heard she is on clear liquids now as well, after being fed through an IV.

Anyway, besides all that, I'm happy to read your guys reviews.

Terminatus: Thank you! And I am happy to have returned to writing this, and I am happy that despite the 3 months of procrastination and some hammering out some of the more problematic stuff, I still kept the quality as is. And don't worry, I will never rush out a chapter to meet demands.

Speaking of rushing out chapters, I want to make it clear to everyone once again, as I said in a AN I made and probably deleted after posting the Q&A, I will never do that. I've been reading fanfics, for a long time, since 2006 or so. I've seen how rushed out chapters, or stories can be, I will never do that because I don't want it to read like what my old fanfics read like back in 8th grade middle school and my freshman year in high school. even throughout high school my writing sucked. And before you ask, I deleted my old accounts.

It was only until recently I went back to college in 2017 - 2018, to try and get my high school diploma despite me having the equivalence of one and had finished high school in 2011. I know places of work aren't suppose to discriminate against my schooling, but I know they'll pass me over someone who doesn't have one. I took an English language course to get the credits and holy crap did that improve my writing immensely. Sadly I dropped out due to high amounts of stress and my depression making it extremely hard for me to continue.

Also I want to just say, that I have a strict personal standards when it comes to my writing, I want to work on this fic, and those that I might or are writing in the future and now. This is why I like to encourage constructive reviews, they help me find things I've missed, and help me keep those standers I made for myself going strong for you guys. Plus if I ever have kids and they find this, I want them to like it like you all have as well. And I also want to read this in the future as well, even though I will already know what happens, but I'll still enjoy it like the rest you guys.

Sunlitoverdrive:

Thank you for pointing out the spacing issue of mine, that helped me a lot. I might've not realized since I do drink and write so I do tend to forget to space things at times. Either that or I was dead tired since I tend to stay up till 3 am my time.

Also as I said in my reply to you, I might consider to have Raven and her tribe, either in the future or in a flashback. But if they do show up, I will not have Yelena pull any punches with her, she'll be swift, brutal and be like Vlad Teppich and impale them with ice poles through their anus, and out their mouths while their still alive. And she'll give Raven either major frostbite on her fingers, or make her lose an eye or maybe a kidney or maybe maybe weaken one of her organs so she can't fight for too long in the future.

When it comes to Raven and what she has done to other villages she had raided and the aftermath that followed, I would've just killed her right on the spot, but for plot she'll remain alive.

Also in my own opinion, why draw out a fight especially when I suck at writing fight scenes, when you can end it with brutal efficiency. That includes flash freezing the person solid to kill them, or doing multiple other things with said element.

Notoki:

Thank you for both of those things. I think I made a comment in a authors note that I deleted or was in the Q&A I made, but I did say I would be keeping my old chapters as is in their state so I can learn from the mistakes I made in them, so I can improve to what I have now in the 3rd chapter. Which I did :)

Anyway, I just wanted say thank you for your kind reviews, I'll make sure to work on chapter 3 part 2 when I finish the 2nd chapter to the 2nd fic I've been writing.

If you didn't already know I did write another fanfic, it's called 'flight from chernobog' its in both journal, and 3rd person format. As the name suggests, the person in the story will be trying to escape Chernobog.

And it is a what if story, which you can read in the beginning of the fic. Anyway, I'm not one to advertise my other fics, and I like to keep to myself, and I do mean a lot. I don't really like to talk about my personal life unless I really have to. Anyway, I written the fic mainly to help me keep my mind fresh, and I thought branching out a little would help me. And I feel like I can get away with more serious adult situations and topics that are slightly if not more graphic then this fic.

Don't get me wrong, I'll still graphic when it comes to death scenes, and the like in 'The requiem of frost's innocence and anger' but this is RWBY, so it would still have not as much adult content as the latter. But I'll still to make this fic, and the other fic keep their M rating for good reasons!

Thundercharger123 heading to bed, goodnight ya'll. God damn I need to stop writing late at night.