Disclaimer: First Chapter
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Story Start!
I feel the need to clear a few things up that people keep assuming, or not understanding about Naruto's Sacred Gear.
-How does Servo Evocazione work-
Naruto's Sacred Gear works by summoning, based on Class and characteristics, the servant that would be best suited to serving him and once a servant has been summoned you can not exchange them. Once your Saber is decided, you can't trade them in for a different Saber.
Naruto has 10 Servants in Total, but 2 of them require special conditions in order to summon and can not be summoned unless those conditions are met.
Naruto's Sacred Gear has 2 Balance Breakers.
1. Servo Evocazione Alter
Sub-Species: Servo Evozione Lily
2. Serco Evoczione Install
Note: If you understand what these mean, good for you, but I'm not explaining it here.
-When a Servant is Summoned, they start out at a Base Strength-
Servants can NOT train to get stronger, no amount of physical or spiritual training will make their body or magic any stronger than what they were summoned with.
Servants can only gain strength through the following methods.
1. Naruto supplying them with their limit on energy.
2. Special conditions related to their natural abilities.
3. Naruto and the Servant's Bond growing stronger.
4. Physical intimacy (AKA Sexual Intercourse).
Note: This is a reference to the original Fate Visual Novel game, not something of my own design.
-Servants being killed-
Servants are highly resistant to death, and when they die Naruto can summon them again after a certain amount of time passes depending on the level of injuries that the Servant took that resulted in their death.
-Why do Servants actually serve the person who summoned them-
Other than the fact they are compelled to follow orders (though they can ignore orders if they truly want to).
1. A Retry
For the Servants who gain a strong enough bond with their Summoner, when their summoner dies their minds get sent back in time to the day of their death and they can change history and experience a new timeline.
No servant can be summoned more than once, and when the same Servant is summoned, it is required to be a different version of the servant.
Example: Naruto will summon Lancer Artoria, who after Kushina dying had her Saber memories sent back in time and returned Excalibur to the Lady of the Lake on her own. She avoided her own death, and lived out an entirely different life.
Naruto summoned the "Same" Artoria, but from a different timeline, thus not the Same Artoria his mother summoned.
2. A Proper Afterlife
For Servants who wish for a better afterlife, they can follow their Master to the afterlife when they die, so that they can continue to be with them even after their death. For Servants who hated their lives when they were alive, this is the preferred choice.
Example: Abraham Lincoln knew that, while he could avoid his death by going back with his memories, he was satisfied with the life he had led so he choice to go into the afterlife with Mito instead when she died.
Abraham Lincoln can never be summoned again, because he has linked his soul to Mito's soul for eternity.
-Sacred Gear Weaknesses-
I gave this Sacred Gear several weaknesses that Naruto will have to train or work to overcome, some of which are simply limits on the Sacred Gear.
1. Strain - The more Servants that get summoned at one time, the greater the strain on the Master's body. For each Servant summoned, the strain gets progressively worse.
2. Pain Sharing - While Servants get their power boosted by a stronger bond, Naruto will experience more of the pain of the Servants when they get injured.
3. A Servant being killed causes Naruto extreme pain, even if the Servant was killed in a painless fashion, and his body takes actual damage depending on how many Servants were defeated.
4. For a Servant to fight at their best, Naruto must consciously focus his power into them to keep their body working at top condition.
5. Naruto's mental state can strengthen or weaken his Servants.
-Sacred Gear Strengths-
1. Naruto's Servants can act on their own, independent of him and think for themselves, making them highly versatile in combat and out of combat.
2. They can summon themselves when he is in danger or stressed, meaning Naruto is always being protected.
(Note: They can't summon themselves when Naruto is awake, until he learns of their existence)
3. Naruto's usual Servants possess 8 different battle styles and abilities, making this a hard Sacred Gear for others to fight against properly.
4. Naruto's Sacred Gear comes with 2 Balance Breakers and a Sub-Species Balance Breaker.
5. Naruto's Servants can work together with each other, allowing for a high amount of combo potential to birth new attacks and abilities.
6. {Secret Strengths}
Hope you liked the explanation on what some of the things that Naruto's Sacred Gear can do, and how much thought went into thinking this thing up.
-Bonus-
How is Artoria Naruto's "Father"?
Kushina's Caster helped out with that, Merlin (AKA the Dickwizard).
Dude gave Kushina's female servants dicks so that Kushina could enjoy them, and it just so happened that Artoria was the one who so happened to knock her up.
Thankfully, Kushina liked Artoria the most so she was happy with the result, and she trusted Artoria would be a good "Father", better than the other Servants would be.
Note: Merlin gave Artoria a dick in Canon/Fate in order for her to produce an heir, so this does work.
Let me tell you, THIS will be an awkward conversation for Naruto.
-Pairing-
I haven't decided the pairing itself as of yet, and while suggestions are welcome, I don't want my comment section spammed with people just listening DOZENS of names with no reasons.
You want to suggest somebody, give some good reasons for it.
I HAVE decided who ISN'T an option for the pairing though.
Characters like Grayfia, Venelana, and other MARRIED characters will not be considered at all, do not suggest them, those suggestions will be ignored completely.
Well, I do have one character I have decided already.
I'll keep that to myself though.
Also, I don't care what people think is "overdone" considering the fact that I pride myself in being able take something that is done a lot, and make it something new and fun to read.
Expanation End!
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