I don't know why Ffn is messing up the reviews. Its making me mad to but I CAN SEE THEM IN MY EMAIL LUCKILY. Sensw so many wanna see what others have said, idk if Ffn will start working after or before i post this but here are the reviews posted after kiki721.
Chapter 126.
Laika:I commited a sin, I must admit I read the chap long before I should've cause I couldn't contain my excitement in knowing how the party continues hahahaha! Definitely these last couple of chaps were amazing and brough my entire attention and excitememnt back. I said this a lot but I love the way S and C confront each other. Maybe it's a bit early to say this but L seems a lot more faithful to S, as if he's deeply in love and he has no eyes for any other woman than her, no to mention the fact S is wearing that extremelly sexy gown that turns him on. But as I said, perhaps I'm rushing up and L may actually still being attracted by C and he's trying to hide it and get a hold of himself. How funny Bobby is! I still can't believe he's gonna be a dad hahaha Anyway, let's see what's happening, is C going to keep trying to have 'her' Mr. McQueen back? Are L and S spending the night together? I doubt so but I guess C isn't giving up that easily and S must bring the b* out of her to
protect her man. I'm sooo hyped!
Chap 127
Legend95: aaahhh I think I made a mistake! I already posted the chap, so read it first before reading this! cause I'm not deleting and editing and reposting guys.. sorry.
But I think I forgot to have L remove the stupid blind fold! UUUGHHHHHH! Just imagine it in the end there! like.. After she collapsed down! Ha idk ! SO SORRY!
Laika:Yay! They ARE GETTING MARRIED! I have a winner! This is definitely my fav chap! Thanks so much for writing such an incredible hot moment. Oh gosh! That was so erotic, I never thought McQueen was going that far, where did he learned that? He did it before or what? I wanna know! I'm glad he didn't go a, I hate it and find it way too much and disgusting so thanks for not going any further by that, I didn't want that to ruin the chap. Oh my! I loved the way he propose to her, he was so teasing and sexy, it wasn't exactly romantic but it's what makes it more exotic. WOW! I'm impressed! What Cruz is gonna say? Her plans didn't stop L from f* S after all. Yay! So excited to know how this will continue! Thanks a lot!
DestinyMe:
Sorry but WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON WITH THE REVIEWS?! Why FFN always has this problem? you see the number of reviews increasing but the reviews are not showing up! I want to read what people think too but anyway WHAT A CHAPTER! OMG! Thanks so so much for the 2 updates today! Gosh, I can't explain how I felt while reading every part of this chapter, I MELT! Idk! Light is so damn sexy and Sal is so delicious that I can't find the words to describe it. What a smart or tricky way to have him asking her to marry him! LOVED IT. He was so mean when he said it, knowing exactly what her answer would be, he just caught her on time she couldn't give him a no for an answer, how could you deny to marry such a hottie and sweet man?! Sal go for it! I'm sure he's falling at your feet! He won't make you suffer again lol And damn! I want him to give S an explanation where he learned to do such dirty things to women. THANK YOU! ENJOYED FROM BEGINNING TO END, I'm sweating right now! lol
Carsfan:YESSS! That's what I'm talking about! I got to say my hopes weren't too high of them ending the party night with sex since I was afraid C screw it up and made them fight but DAMN! That was one of the most passionate nights they ever had! S did pay for that kiss, huh? And she obeyed everything to please him for the first time! She used to be rebel instead of being submissive but now she learned how to play the game. Such a subtle way to ask her marriage XD but it worked! They are getting married again or well if C doesn't get in the middle, she's determined to fight for him after all. So I'm analyzing the whole party (these last 3 chaps) C was constantly searching a way to make them fight, she tried playing nice but S wasn't buying it and got the same response from her: both acting like 2 jealous b* XD L doesn't like that and scolded C,hurting her then S, who thought he was defending C, more jealousy to add on her. C got mad realizing on a stupid game with young students
S was still attractive to men and sees she has competence. L, on the other hand, made clear he's in love with S and showed himself indifferent to C's seductive skills... So? This could mean C is willing to do anything to have him back, she might even spread that rumor sheL are still hooking up... This is a very interesting story! It's getting better and better! Can't wait for more!
Guest7:HOLY COW!
Lightning was evil and dominant but in the most sexy and pleasurable way Sally loves.
Sally did good holding herself together and enjoying the pleasure of the moment.
A funny way to propose but their marriage was coming either way.
Lightning devoting to Sally, their kids and leaving Cruz out convinced Sally enough to say yes.
Cruz isn't gonna take it well. Sally knows better to be more mature than bragging though
Aa:I loved this chapter! Yeah honestly, I think L should have waited and actually proposed to her like he was going to but.. He has been very impatient lately. I wonder if hes moving this fast to keep himself away from Cruz. But then again, he obviously is in total love with S! THE way he has been with her lately shows a lot of dedication that he was lacking before. Go Sally! PUT CRUZ IN HER PLACE! Lol. Cant wait for Cruz to find out that L and S are getting married but then again, means someone is gonna get hurt.. I really thought we might see a threesome soon but this chapter makes me doubt that.
Laika:Am I the only one who can't see the reviews or what? What's going on with this site? The reviews are not showing up! It happens often and is terribly annoying. Gosh! I'm sooo excited for the next chap, I can't get that hot night off my mind, you killed it! Thanks!
hopefully fan fiction will start showing the reviews again!!! idk what is going on