Author's Note
I wish to take a moment to say a few things to all the people who've been reading the story up to this point. Your support in this piece means a lot to me and I've been having loads of fun making it, so far. To all my followers and reviewers, your support and feedback are all very much appreciated.
To all those who presume that I've been demonizing the Loud Sisters; I apologize, if you've felt that way. But since part of this story is based off the...absurdly stupid "Sister Fight Protocol" from the episode Brawl in the Family." I think we all know how aggressive the girls can be during said protocol.
That being said; as shown in Chapter Eleven, the girls aren't beyond redemption (at least...some of them aren't.) Leni, Luna, Lucy...even Lola and Lisa have begun to see the error of their ways. Meanwhile, Lori and Lynn Jr. are still caught up in their silly pride to ever show regret over their actions.
Especially since Lori almost always considers herself to be "in the right" simply because she's the oldest. As for Lynn, due to that "tough girl" exterior she created since her Middle School days (as seen in Middle Men." She's become so wound up with needing to be tough and "the best" that to her, showing weakness is like committing a heavy crime.
But rest assured; after the picnic fiasco she started, the verbal lashings she'll receive coupled with any possible police action performed by Officer Schoffner will be just the thing to break down that façade and show everyone Lynn's sensitive side again. Back on the topic at hand, this story isn't me demonizing the Loud Sisters or their parents. If it were a story set within the actual show, the events would be like karma giving them some long overdue payback.
To explain what I mean; I ask you to look back at the Season 2 Amazing World of Gumball finale entitled...The Finale (ironically enough.) Those of you unfamiliar with the episode, here's a shortened version of the synopsis. After who knows how long; the Watterson Family is receiving some long overdue payback from the people of Elmore for all the stress, property damages, disturbances, reckless endangerment and who knows what else they've caused.
That is sort of, what is happening in the Gal Pals story. After so long, the Sisters and their parents are being punished for the things they did wrong. The girls' behavior in public due to the protocol being in affect was simply the tip of the iceberg.
So, I can assure you that I am not demonizing them. I'm simply showing how amplified their otherwise "normal" chaotic behavior can become, when properly sparked (and the Sister Fight Protocol is that spark.) Now that Lynn and Lori's attitudes have escalated things to (as Lisa put it) erupting volcano levels of bad, what will happen next?
All we know is that now, Lincoln has a new player at his corner; Ronnie Anne. Find out how she came into the picture, in Chapter Thirteen. On one final note; to anyone who felt that the shed scene was awkward, it was my best attempt at fulfilling a request made by crafordbrian17 (the user who asked me to make this story.)
For sometime, he/she has been begging me to include at least one scene where either Lincoln is trapped in a small space, some or all the girls are trapped in said space or both halves are trapped. I've tried telling crafordbrian17 that such a scene wouldn't make sense for this story and that it wasn't something the rest of you wanted. But he/she told me that there were other such stories out their (be they Loud House related or otherwise) and he/she considered them to be "good.
Long story short, the shed scene is the only time the characters will be put in such a position. The story will go as follows, from here on out. Thank you all for understanding, have a nice Memorial Day and enjoy reading the rest of the fic.