Here's the beginning of my newest masterpiece! Enjoy! Post and review.
Chapter 1: Prologue
As our story begins, we see a forest with animals doing their natural thing and a deer drinking from the creek. But the focus soon switches to a beautiful castle that is home of a prince.
As we see many portraits on the castle window outside, the narrator spoke, "Once upon a time, in a faraway land, a young prince lived in a shining castle. Unfortunately, although he had everything his heart desired, the prince was spoiled, selfish and unkind."
We see a prince, looking selfish and vain on the first stain glass window.
We now see another stain glass window that shows some sort of old woman arriving at the castle, much to the prince's annoyance. We see her showing a beautiful red rose to the young prince.
"But then, one winter's night, an old beggar woman came to the castle and offered him a single rose in return for shelter from the bitter cold."
Of course, the prince frowns as he turns away the old woman, trying to dismiss her.
"Repulsed by her haggard appearance, the prince sneered at the gift and turned the old woman away, but she warned him not to be deceived by appearances, for beauty is found within."
As predicted, the selfish prince closes the door on her, dismissing the old woman once more. That proves to be a mistake as we see her transform. The young prince looks stunned and horrified as he saw that she has transformed into a beautiful elf woman with long golden hair named Galadriel.
"And when he dismissed her again, the old woman's ugliness melted away to reveal a beautiful elf woman named Galadriel. The prince tried to apologize but, alas, it was too late for she had seen that there was no love in his heart..."
And thus, we see Galadriel sternly tapping her wand on the shameful prince. Two stained glass windows show that the hands become hideous and with claws.
"And as punishment, she transformed him into a hideous werewolf, and placed a powerful spell on the castle and all who lived there."
We now see the present as the castle is now darker and covered with dark clouds...of hatred and such. Inside a room of the place, the former prince, now a werewolf, growls as he slashes a picture of himself with his claws before turning away in shame and despair.
"Ashamed of his hideous form, the werewolf concealed himself inside his castle with a magic mirror as his only window to the outside world. The rose she had offered was truly an enchanted rose, which would bloom until his twenty-first year."
"Until then, if he could learn to love another, and earn her love in return by the time the last petal fell, then the spell would be broken. However, if he didn't, he would be doomed to remain a werewolf for all time."
"As the years passed, he fell into despair and lost all hope."
"For who could ever learn to love a werewolf?"