I want to give all the characters as much airtime in the story as possible. What really helps is having my own kid and using a lot of what we do with our daily life.

3 MAY 18

So hope the story is in much more better shape now, be sure to let me know in the comments!

"Soooo you're really a father huh… that's pretty wild to be honest!" Jackie was having a hard time swallowing all this.

"Yeah… I know?" He really didn't know what else to say to her.

"How did this all happen and all the kids?" She asked looking up to him.

Marco gave Hekapoo a dirty look before she could open her mouth, "It… just kinda happened…?" He didn't want to go into it much.

"Hekapoo and I were on and off when we played our game, Star and Janna had a thing for me and just one thing lead to another… never saw my life going down this road." This was a lot harder for him than he thought it would be, a little after week ago, was Jackie his girlfriend.

"So how is it over there, this whole hunting down clones doesn't sound half bad..." She was half joking and half serious.

"It's not easy, I'm not sure about much of their time there, but for me it wasn't the best. I've killed, been on the edge of death and seen some really fu-"

His girls look up at him knowing he was about to say a bad word, "The point is, I don't know how I made it out that place alive Jackie." He then looked over to his girls and pats their heads.

"If I had to do it all over again, I would in a heartbeat because I can't see my life without these troublemakers!" The girls smiled and gave him a hug, then they all stuck out their tongues at Jackie.

"Wow… they're really protective over you." She flinched at the sight.

"Just a little, I would like to stay and talk some more, but I told the girls I would take them to the park." Marco was feeling uncomfortable with this situation.

Jackie nodded her head at him as the male made his way over to the door, "Marco… good luck with your new life, I really hope the best for you!"

"Thanks, Jackie, I'll see you around." He closed the door behind him and let out a deep breath.

"Daddy… you OK?" Gidget knew something was going on with him.

"Yeah baby… Jackie used to be really important to me…" He just wanted to shake this weird feeling that was in the pit in his stomach.

"Last one there is a rotten egg!" Ember was already halfway down the street screaming back at them and running.

"WAIT?! YOU DON'T KNOW WHERE YOU'RE GOING!?" They all started to run after her.

Back At The House

When Marco walked out, Jackie started to break down. Star pulled her into her chest and started to pet her hair.

"Wh…why… wh doesn't he feel… feel the same way about me…?" She just cried harder now holding on to Star. Janna turned off the game and sat on the other side of Jackie, she felt just like this after seeing Star come back. She just knew Jackie wouldn't be cut out to take on the task.

There were some many people she had to walk over to finally be with Marco, there's just no way this girl could do it. Star had strength on her side, Janna had the street smarts to make her plans work.

While Jackie was a stunning site to behold, there wasn't a single evil bone in her body. Yeah she's tough and can get back up after getting knocked down, but the things that happen over there… your heart has to be in it to make it out alive and still sane.

"Hey stop that… we… we…" Star looked over at Hekapoo for help.

She put down her book, "Check it out, it's not you, it's him really. He's been through a lot the last few days with us dumping kids on him left and right. Nothing against you, but I really can't see you making it a week if you tried this thing." Hekapoo wasn't being mean, she was just being herself.

Star looked down at Jackie knowing what Hekapoo just said was true, the girl in her arms might me cool and great, but it takes more than just that to survive years on end alone or knowing every person you meet, might end up killing you.

Janna saw the look on Star's face and was thinking the same thing, each of their experience was different, but there was just one thing that was common for all three of them. Death was always just around the way, if you didn't watch your ass then it became someone meal.

The two women held each other with Jackie in the center as she cried even harder.

At The Park

Marco was running low on energy, the girls have been running circles around him all day, "Okay... I give up… next one that smacks me in the back of the head is grounded until their 30!"

"Come on guys, bring it all in!" Gidget called out to her sisters. It was late in the afternoon and they were all covered in dirt and bruises.

"I'm not sure about you guys, but I really had a lot of fun, let's get home… you guys stink!" At that comment the girls pig piled on him.

They dusted each other off as Maria climbed up her father's back with Gidget hold his left hand and Ember holding his right. Marco loved these little moments with the girls. "Daddy" Ember looked up to him.

"Yes my lighting bug?" How does he keep coming up with all these names?

"Well I was wondering and all, but… do you think you would…" She didn't know how to spit out the question.

"Let Jackie take on your mother's challenge and then have another baby with her?" The girls were in complete shock on how he could get all that out like it was no big deal.

"Yeah, that thing… it wouldn't be half bad to shoot for a brother this time?" She started to giggle at the thought.

He kept his head and eyes forward, "I don't think so, I'm running out of spots on having kids hang off me." They started to laugh.

"But really… I'm happy with you three and I'm pretty sure Mama would kill me if one more baby comes out of nowhere… we'll have to see!" Marco was already sure about having anymore kids.

The girls started to laugh some more, "I don't want to give up my status as the baby of the group!" Maria was proud of her title and wasn't ready to let it go just yet.

They made it to the house just before dark, "Alright smelly girls, go wash your butt!, I'll make some dinner." The girl went upstairs as he went to find his lovers in the kitchen.

The women were sitting at the table, "Wow, you look like a real mess. The girls really been giving you the business huh" The Filipino smirked at him.

He went up to Janna and pulled the back of her hair to look up to him, "It's been a very… very long day. Please, someone, give me a back massage." Then he gave her a deep kiss, as she moaned into the kiss, she likes it rough.

After a short bit of time passed, he released her and started to cook a meal for the kids, "So tomorrow is the big day Star, are you ready?"

She came up from behind him and placed her hands down the front of his pants, "First of all, it's not nice to show attention like that to just one of us mister and yes I'm ready to see my parents!"

"Okay honey… but really… I think my back might be messed up after Maria gave me the people's elbow off the jungle gym!" Star pulled out one and made a fist with it as she dug her knuckles into the center of his with Marco purring out loud.

"God, you're such a weirdo!" Hekapoo warmed up her hands and started to work on his shoulders which almost made him collapse on the spot.

"Why don't you relax and I'll finish up the kid's meals?" Janna started to move him out the way as the other two guided him upstairs for a shower.

3 MAY 18

So if you guys have read my other story, Never Too Late.

Then you already know that I feel very differently about Jackie now in days. I think the reason I hated her so much was because deep down I thought she was the cutest thing out there and had a real big chance on taking Marco away from Star. The show just never developed her correctly.

I like her clothing style, eyes and hair with major points seeing how JLT looks to be way top heavy side as in having a sweet rack on a tight body frame.

There is a ton of pictures of her on my laptop, she's even my wallpaper right now from a artist called RaicoSama. Oh and he did a ton of great NSFW stuff on her lol.