Kikkie: To Ray, I am sorry, but Tom and Sabine will not be together in this rewrite. The goal here is try to remake the story while keeping the strong plots. Marinette creation is one of them. Thank you!


It was a sunny day in little heaven, and on this day four young adults were sitting at a round table discussing things. Mostly about school and all the crappy things that are in the town, mostly the town council. The conversation didn't stop till one of the Adults said some about the black-cat demon the town dreaded.

"I am going to that sexy club. I wonder what the prince of sex is like." Alya said.

"You mean Chat Noir?" Nino asked, Alya nods her head. Nino, the towns Local DJ and one of Marinette few friends. He was a talented artist with dreams that surpassed even the towns expectation of him. Which was to become the towns future music teacher. Something Nino both dreaded and feared.

"I know where his club is, wanna come with me?" Alya asked the girl, a small blush appears on her face. Alya was Marinette best friend since they were born. Alya was the only kid in town that would speak to Marinette when they were children. Alya wants to be a journalist when she graduates, like Marinette, she hated this town and felt that it was a prison.

"Why would you want to go to that…sex club?" Marinette asked.

"To find Chat Noir! Come on Marinette, aren't you curious to see who is responsible for most of the public indecency? I mean, Chat literally is the prince of BDSM! Just thinking about him makes me wet. Plus, imagine the publicist I would get if I get an interview! It would land me a scholarship right out of this shit hole." Alya said with glee.

"But you've never seen him, no has seen him. Well, the real him. He always wears that suite and masks to hide his image." Marinette said in worry. "Besides, I don't want us to get hooked on any drugs or anything."

"I think you have been hanging out with the town council for too long." Adrien said to the blue haired girl, she couldn't help but blush as his words. He was so cute, like an angel. Adrien Agreste was the son of Gabriel. He moved to the town at the young age of eight, becoming a logo child for the town at the age of ten when. Adrien apparently has never drunk liquor, reframes from any sexual indulges and acts like a star child in the town. Adrien was also a professional model, all thanks to his father's connection though.

"Oh no, the old people that run this town!" Marinette joked. "For the logo boy of town, you're a bit of a hypocrite."

"How long have you known me? Tikki?" Adrien asked with a small purr at the end of his voice.

"Long enough to know you enjoy banana pudding and your favorite meal is anything that involves raw fish." Marinette said with a smile on her face. Adrien smiles back at her for a second, before snapping out of his happy phase to ask.

"You should, reading the bible every day keeps the devil away, and also impure thoughts. Anyway, did anyone get the last notes for the quiz next week?" Adrien asked, Marinette was the first person to pull her pink note out of her bag and hands it to him. Alya and Nino giggled at her action while Adrien pulls his cell phone out and begins to take pictures of her notes.

"Oh my god, if it isn't the man-hating feminist!" Chloe shouted as she walks towards the kids. Marinette was in no mood for this girl, but she held her tongue.

"Chloe, I have been having a really bad day. Hold your insult for tomorrow when I don't feel like crap."

"Awww, if this baby-killer upset because her boyfriend didn't like her anymore?" Chloe asked.

"Yes, yes I am! And I don't kill babies you slut!" Marinette shouted at the blonde girl.

"You believe in abortion."

"I believe in women having a choice." Marinette responded.

"That the same thing as killing babies." Chloe said. "Maybe that's why Nathan left you, because he was scared you'd probably kill his baby if you two ever had one." The blonde told Marinette. The blue haired girl slammed her fist on the table before standing from her seat to shout:

"He left me because you and him had sex!" Marinette shouted. "Your fake Christian-wannabe act is ridiculous to even god is crying!"

"How dare you take the lords name in vain!" Chloe shouted at her.

"I am more pure and holy than you will ever be!"

"What cause you're a virgin? News flash Marinette, your virgin because no one wants to fuck a baby-killer created from sin." Chloe said. "In fact, since you believe in abortion so much, why don't you go back in time and convince your momma and daddy to abort you. Maybe then your mom can stop drinking and crying about how depressing her life is cause you're here!"

Chloe spoke, everyone in the area became silent. Rage boiled in Marinette body, oh how she wanted to hit the woman in front of her so badly. But she knew the results of that, and she couldn't risk it. In anger, she grabbed her bookbag and walked away from both her friends and her enemies. She could hear Chloe laughing behind her.

"Oh my god! Was that cool or what?" Chloe asking Adrien. The blonde male looks over at the brown hair girl rising from her seat. Placing both hands on her hips, she begins to give Chloe a nasty look. Something that would make a blood hungry lion pee themselves before running. Chloe just looks away.

"Alya..." Nino said as he places a hand on her back, trying to calm the girl down. The girls look down at the male and sighs before sitting down. This made Chloe chuckle a bit before she said:

"I knew it, don't even have the balls to come at me." Chloe growled before walking away from the table. Adrien looks down to the ground for a bit before cracking his fingers, making loud POPing sounds as he thinks...


Marinette walked straight to her mother's house, her mother owned the local Bakery for the town. When she walked into her home, which was located above the bakery, her mother greeted her with a smile.

"Hello Marinette!" Her mother shouted. "How was school?"

"Same as every day of my miserable life." Marinette responded as she hung her book back up on the wall hanger. Only to stop midway, making her look up from what she was doing in the direction of Marinette. Tears in her eyes as her mouth forms a frown.

"Marinette?" Her mother asked, her response was Marinette breaking down into tears.

"Nathan broke up with me because I didn't want to have sex, I got an F on my report because it wasn't what the teacher wanted! Even though almost everyone did the exact same topic as I did, oh, and I was reminded yet again by the mayor daughter that I am a bastard child! So yea, today's been great mom, just great!"

"Oh, sweetie…" Her mother spoke, but Marinette shakes her head in annoyance.

"I just want to be alone mom." Marinette said, but her mother ignored her words.

"Marinette things will change." She started. "Things will get better, I promise!"

"When mom?" Marinette asked. "When? Because I am so tired of waiting."

"Marinette…"

"I can't even leave here with a scholarship! The stupid community college won't even give me the grades I need to get out of this shit hole!" Marinette shouted. "I am going to be stuck here for the rest of my life."

"Marinette they can't deny you what you deserve." Her mother told her. "You just need to be patient."

"Patient…I have been patient for so long. And you know what I have learned from being patient?" Marinette asked. "No one looks at the sinner…they only look at the sin." She said before turning her back to her mother. She makes her way to the bedroom, that was the attic of the building her mother owned. She threw herself on her bed and sighed, as she closes her eyes, her phone begins to ring. She digs her hand into her back pocket and saw a couple of sent messages from Alya. She opens the messages and that most of them were about the Chat Noir club.

Alya: Come on! It will be fun, plus I have a discount for the Uber!

Marinette: What about the gate that keeps everyone in the town safe?

Alya: I got a plan for that! Come on, it will be fun!

Marinette: Are you sure you know what you're doing?

Alya: Of course, we'll stay there for a while, I promise ;)

Marinette: Okay, I will go.

Marinette texted before throwing her phone onto her pillow. She then stands up from her bed and walks over to her desktop that was located near her window. Pulling a chore open, she reaches in to pull out a light green colored shoe box. Removing the cover, she sticks her and in and pulls out a piece of paper. On this small piece of paper was a set of numbers:

04-03-20-20

Staring at the numbers for a bit, she wipes her tears away before throwing the paper back into the box. She then covers it up and closes her chore.


Kikkie: Not much of a difference from the orginal. But just wait