Hello, Everyone, I decided that it was time for a new chapter. I wrote this over the course of the 2 months and have finally finished it. I hope you all enjoy it.
Last time on Renaissance: Pui Pui continued to mock Vegeta with False Bravado until finally, the Saiyan King started to destroy him. Hoping to give his fighter the advantage, Babidi changed the location to a planet with 10x earth's gravity.
Pui Pui got arrogant with the gravity, but Vegeta stated that he was able to easily stand much higher and didn't feel it. Angered and frustrated, the alien charged at the king but was quickly destroyed another d his hand got ripped off before dying.
On the Next floor, Yakon, a monster that ate light came out. Goku fought the monster and easily toyed with him. Eventually, Babidi transported them to an area that allowed Yakon to eat light. Yakon ate Goku's Super Saiyan energy.
The greedy idiot tried to get more and Goku gave it to him, causing him to explode. Once again, they went to the lower floors. Gohan started to fight the next fighter, Ula, a previous demon king.
Before the fight, Babidi increased the weight of the Saiyans by 1000 while lightened his own fighter by 1000, after having thought back to Vegeta's statement. Gohan noticed this straight away but was able to still fight against Ula.
After finding out the previous demon king was able to absorb KI, Gohan started to fight with his sword until Ula asked to be transported to an area where, when energy got released by the Saiyans or Kai, it went to Buu. Babidi granted this and sent them to the demon realm
(Continued)
'Better be sure.' Gohan took precautionary measures and turned into a super saiyan. He didn't want to get beat up by Ula, who was sure to have the advantage and release his energy so Buu could get reawakened faster. The demon was blinded by the light, but he quickly grew a gleeful expression as the KI was sucked out of the earthling.
Gohan screamed in agony as his energy was ripped away from him. The golden aura that had surrounded him had started to spiral around him before moving away and getting sucked into the ground.
"Gohan, they're taking your energy, stop trying to transform!" Gohan was able to make out Satsuki's voice through his scream and was able to resist the pain a bit as he tried to stop the energy from flowing.
Within the second, he stopped the transformation and dropped on his knees, panting in exhaustion.
Ula was still laughing gleefully as a lot of energy was absorbed for Buu.
His face then twisted into a sadistic smile as he dashed towards the man.
Gohan saw the bastard coming at him and quickly drew his sword and slash, though slower than usual.
Ula saw the attack and stopped himself as the sword grazed him a bit.
The demon in human skin engaged Gohan in a hand to sword fight, but Gohan quickly realized that his swings were to slow.
The black haired man sheathed the blade and once again charged at the man.
He threw a jab at the Majin servant's face, fully expecting to be blocked or grappled.
The previous demon king grabbed the extended arm of Gohan's and pulled him forward, hoping to knee him in the stomach.
Gohan easily licked the knee and did a ninety degree spin and kicked the arm holding his other leg before bouncing off and doing a heel drop on Ula's head.
Ula was sent face first into the ground as Gohan flew downwards and kneed the demon king's back.
Ula screamed in agony as his back arched, his spine breaking..
The demon spit out large globs of blood as he layed on the floor, nearly dead.
Gohan decided to have mercy on the man and, after unsheathing his sword, decapitated the previous demon king.(1)
When Gohan killed Ula, Shin widened his eyes. He didn't think that the Saiyan would kill him.
The others however, were not shocked. Goku had matured with his second death and finally realized that if you spared your enemy, it would come back to haunt you.(2)
Vegeta had killed millions of species and trillions of lives. He wouldn't care if a stranger died or if it was someone he knew it that did it. At least, the boy had matured enough so that he realized that sparing an enemy might kill his family.
Satsuki had also killed before, hell everyone here had. She didn't really care for the enemy. The only ones she cared for was Naruto, her family, and her extended 'family.'
Naruto was the same. He had killed before and knew why. Why should he care about the death of someone he barely knew?
With Babidi
Babidi was laughing. He couldn't believe it! Ula had served his purpose and now, Buu's energy levels were almost filled.
It needed maybe a bit more, but he wasn't even worried anymore. Dabura would easily get the amount needed and Buu would be revived! Finally!
After so many years of trying and trying, it had payed off!
'Dabura, it is your turn. Go finish this and let the final energy for Buu be absorbed!' the yellow wizard yelled, not being able to contain his joy.
'Yes master,' the current demon king answered submissively as he headed towards the door.
When Dabura left, Babidi started to plan his next move. He would kill Dabura, well Buu would, then he would kill those fuckers that we're trying to stop him, except the Supreme Kai, oh no, that one deserved torture, not a quick death.
Then, he would continue his father's plan to dominate this universe.
With the Saiyan and Shin
The warrior race had grown tired of waiting, even Gohan.
After a few moments, the escalator in front of them opened and out stepped Dabura.
"So, which one of you two brats are fighting?" Vegeta asked.
Naruto met his lover's eyes as they had a mental 'conversation.'
Instantaneously, without even having the conversation, the two decided that Satsuki should fight.(3)
The raven haired woman stepped up, standing in the style she had created with her lover and brother.(4)
"Which one of you dares to fight me?" Dabura's deep tone echoed through the chamber. He then saw Satsuki in a stance ready to fight.
"I see," the King of Demons acknowledged his opponent. "I do hope you are a challenge," the red fighter commented clenching his hands.
The man's energy level started to rise, surpassing the previous minions by far. It kept going and going until eventually, he stopped.
The amount of power he had surpassed Cell, at least double the grasshopper's own.
Satsuki, realizing the problem, quickly ascended to the second level of her transformation.
Her spiky, blue tinted, black hair spiked even more before it turned golden. They grew longer until eventually, the locks hit the ground. Her energy skyrocketed.
When the transformation stopped, the busty woman charged forward, intent on having a good fight.(5)
Dabura quickly raised his hands to block the attack of the young girl, but the force of her attack sent him flying backwards.
The demon king quickly composed himself in midair before propelling himself forward.
The reincarnated Uchiha avoided the outstretched fist and did a roundhouse kick.
The red man jumped over it before he tried to elbow her head.
The fair skinned girl was ready for the attack as she disappeared from sight and appeared behind him, a razor ki blade that covered her fist and thrust it into his back.
The majin went forward as he realized the attack.
"Is that all you got?" the man taunted.
"Why, is that all you can handle?" she retorted with an infuriating smirk on her face.
Dabura was fuming, but reigned in his rage.
Soon, the red demon summoned his sword.
"Darkness Sword attack!" he exclaimed as he slashed the blonde in front of him.
Unfortunately, for the bald man anyways, the Saiyan blocked it with her hands.
Satsuki then created her own sword, similar to her Kurasu, but with different materials.
The black-eyed beauty swiped the long sword at him, sending a flying blade made of KI.
Surprised by the unfamiliar attack, he was a little slow in dodging it, causing a gash on his arm.
Pink blood splattered in the surrounding area as he grabbed his arm.
The Demon Realmian cried out in outrage as he blurred forward, his power increased in his rage.(6)
Satsuki's own power, however, still far surpassed his own.
His sword slashed at her, but her Kurasu was able to easily deflect it.
As the Darkness Sword slide against the long sword, Satsuki imbedded it with her, strengthening its durability.
They were now it a battle of strength, but Dabura liked to play dirty.
Due to their closeness, he was able to spit at Satsuki.
The woman realized what was going to happen and dodged to the side, letting it harmlessly fly past her.
The blonde's eyes twitched as she was now a little miffed. This motherf***ing coward had just tried to turn her into stone.
Satsuki decided to quit playing around. She didn't care about the fight anymore. Besides, she would much rather do something else with the time.
She dashed forward, her sword glowing with power, as she slashed at his abdomen.
When he tried to block it with his own sword, she changed her position so that, instead of his stomach, it was now at his neck.
Fortunately for the current demon king, he was able to move away just in time.
Unfortunately for him, Satsuki had very good instincts and reflexes. Combine the two and she was easily able to parry of the slash of his sword and blast his face with a little blast.
She didn't have much time to charge it so it didn't do much damage other than some small bruises and pushing him back.
"Damnit! How can a weak child like you best me?!" He yelled out as he started to scream. Red KI began to surround him and spiraled upward before it suddenly drove into his body.
His power once again began to enlarged, trying to close the gap between himself and the child in front of him.
He looked up, his eyes glowing red. He took a deep breath before he strayed to spin in every direction possible while spitting out his saliva.
Satsuki look at the incoming onslaught of saliva and screwed her face up in disgust. She place a large force field to vaporize them except for one.(7)
'Thank you, Gohan!' she mentally exclaimed as she showed an expression that was a mix between a smirk and a small grin.
She focused her ki to the single ball of saliva coming at her, still keeping her force field to vaporize all the other ones.
She then began to redirect it at Dabura at speeds that he couldn't comprehend.(8)
As the saliva hit him, the red demon king froze in disbelief as he realized that one of his strongest attacks had been used against him.
As he began to turn into stone, he decided to take at least one with him. As his entire body was turned to stone, Satsuki held up her hand and sent out a large blast of energy.
Very unfortunate, but the demon king's body chose to explode, not only letting the ki blast be absorbed by the ship for Buu, but also for it to slightly injure Satsuki.
At his death, Goku and Gohan were able to sense the return of Piccolo and Krillin while they flew away.
With Babidi
Babidi let loose a blood curdling laugh that had his minions, or at least those who heard it, shiver in fear.
The yellow magician looked on as the power meter with Buu's egg began to rise to the top. It had just needed a little more energy and Dabura had done it perfectly, letting his own KI, along with Satsuki's to be absorbed.(9)
Buu's ball began to glow brightly as he started hatching.
"Yes,yES,YES!" Babidi cried out with a happy laughter.
With the Saiyans and the Kai
When the hexad saw the doors open, they immediately rushed down, each for different reasons.
Shin wanted to seal away Buu and Babidi so they could never harm anyone again.
Vegeta went down there so that he could kill them. He would be fighting Kakarot right now if it weren't for these insufferable weaklings.
Goku went down there so no one could those he cared for.
Gohan went down there to kill Buu.
Naruto and Satsuki went down there so the problem could be over faster. They enjoyed a good fight, but as of so far, only Ula and Dabura, and not even then, had been an actual fight. Why would they want to fight against some weaklings.
When the group of six arrived at the bottom a second later, they realized that Babidi had been laughing and that there was a bright glowing light to their right.
The Kaioshin amongst them quickly realized what it was.
"NOOOO!" He screamed out as he launched his strongest blast of KI. His attack however, had no affect to the know purple glowing ball.
"OH YES!" screamed Babidi, ecstatic. "SWEET BEAUTIFUL SUCCESS! He's going to come out! Majin Buu is coming out!" Steam began to shoot out from the platform. The ball began to pulsate, still glowing with purple energy. "He's going to come out, and when he does, EVERYBODY IS GOING TO RUN AROUND AND SUFFER UNTIL THEY DIE! My father's going to be avenged by his own creation!" The wizard exclaimed.
"Too late!" Shin realized, drawing back in horror. "We must retreat! And quickly! We've no choice. Run when I signal!"
"Hold on," said Gohan, staring at the ball. "We've got to try and stop this thing from hatching. There are too many innocent people on this planet for us to just abandon them. We've got to do something! You're the Supreme Kai!"
"Yes, and unlike you, I've seen what Buu is capable of! It's more than our present state can handle. This is a time for strategy, Gohan, not blind heroics. We must recoup and wait for a better opportunity. We have to wait!"
"We have to try," said Gohan, cupping his hands at his side.
"Gohan, please! We need you alive!"
He nodded to the others, signaling them to start their attacks.
"KA….ME…...HA…...ME…..HAAAAAAAA!" Goku and Gohan screamed out, launching the Turtle Destruction Wave.
"Final! Flash!" Vegeta yelled as he launched a golden ball of power at the purple egg.
"Hakai-Tekina Uzu!" Naruto screamed as he raised his hands up in the air. Red KI began to form around before Naruto launched it. It started to spiral as it continued forth, mixing with the other saiyans attack.(10)
"Burakkumūn!" Satsuki yelled. She had her arm raised in front of her as a jet black ball with purple electricity inside it began to form. It grew to the size of a beach ball before it rocketed forwards.(11)
All the attacks met before they combined to create a very destructive attack. The black and golden KI balls from Satsuki and her father combined into one, one half golden and the other jet black.
Behind it, the KameHameHa and the Hakai-Tekina Uzu combined, forming a wicked spiraling wave of KI that rested behind the Barakkumun and Final Flash, causing it to speed up even more.(12)
The attack raced towards Buu as Shin looked on, hoping against his knowledge that Buu just might get destroyed while Babidi himself chuckled to himself, believing that the attack was foolish.
The Saiyans strongest attacks hit Buu's egg head on. A giant explosion and shockwave was created sending all inhabitants in the room flying. Yes all of them.
Babidi quickly raised a barrier to protect himself, but was still sent flying.
The Saiyans and Kai weren't as fortunate as they got slammed into the wall of the underground ship and flew through it.
Shin recovered quickly and went forward to see if Buu had been destroyed.
He and Babidi saw the purple ball still there, but when it fell apart nothing was there.
"I did everything correctly," said Babidi, stunned. "Followed every step, every word. Come out, come out and destroy it all, Buu! We're waiting!"
Supreme Kai broke down into laughter, over joyed that it was ineffective. "All your efforts for nothing," he said. "You've made a fatal mistake, Babidi, just like your father. Fooled by overconfidence, underestimated your opponents. And so these Saiyans have destroyed your sacred Buu. Years of captivity in that shell must have made him defenseless, and not even the energy from this planet could revive him. Now the story of Buu finally comes to an end."
While he was giving his speech, the others had gotten out of the ground.
When they did, all of them suddenly felt a huge amount of energy, surpassing all of their own multi fold.
"Hey Kai or whatever you are, Buu is still here," Vegeta decided to inform him.
Babidi and Shin looked at him like crazy, but before they could say anything, the Saiyans looked upwards.
The wizard and deity followed their gazes, only to see condensing pink smoke.
He stared in horror as the clouds began to compress, forming a shape.
"Something's forming," said Babidi, hope in his voice.
The clouds finished forming into a shape. The figure was wearing baggy white pants, a black belt with gold buckle and M written on it, a black and gold vest, yellow gloves and boots, and was incredibly fat.
"BUU!" screamed the creature, a childlike expression on his face as he landed on the solid ground.
"This is the great Majin Buu? A child?" Vegeta voiced his opinion based on his appearance, momentarily forgetting the power he sensed. How could this childish blob be a universal terror?
"That's him," said Supreme Kai. "That's Bibidi's creation, without a doubt. I'd never forget that disgusting creature's face."
"Look how scared the Kai is," said Babidi to himself. "It must be him!"
Babidi hovered forward a few feet. "Hey! Majin Buu! Come to me!"
"Buu?" He asked as he turned to face Babidi.
"That's right, Buu," said Babidi. "Come to your master!" Buu turned around and walked away, his arms held out like it was some sort of game.
The Saiyans looked on in bewilderment as the so called terror of the universe behave like a child with backflips and just walking around.
Babidi cackled as he approached Majin Buu. "Look at my face, Buu," he said to the creature, "I'm the son of Bibidi, your creator. See? You can call me the Great Wizard Babidi, or just wizard, or master, since that's what I am to you now."
Buu simply turned his back on Babidi, giving a small "hmph".
"Hey!" said Babidi. "What's the meaning of that, Buu? You can't turn your back on your master like that! At least give me a proper greeting! Turn around! I command you!"
Buu spun around, making a face to Babidi. The wizard fell backwards in fear. Buu broke down laughing, still acting like an infant.
"He is just an idiot," Satsuki growled out, looking at the Supreme Kai.
"No," said Supreme Kai. "Buu has always been this way."
"What nerve," said Babidi, seething with anger before thinking of a way to control him.
"Oh, Buu," said Babidi. "Would you kill these annoying fools? They just called you a weakling!"
"POW!" screamed Buu in response, bouncing towards the Saiyans and the overseer. Gohan assumed a fighting stance, ready to fight. The others did the same, except for the Supreme Kai
"Buu turn you into chocolate!" He yelled out as his antenna began to wave before he shot a thin pink beam at them.
All of them avoided it,no one was prepared to become a delectable treat today.
The Saiyans had already turned into Super Saiyan 2 as they flew towards the pink blob.
Unfortunately for them, Buu was quicker as he avoided them before speeding through them, leaving each one on the ground, coughing up saliva.
The Supreme Kai decided that they should retreat now that Buu had shown a little of his power.
'Supreme Kai, can you teleport them to my location?' Dende telepathically asked.
The overseer decided to do so, having already talked to the guardian after coming to Earth, and teleported the Saiyans to the lookout, but not before contacting Kibito.
'Kibito, bring the fighters from the tournament with you, the ones with a higher level of KI then normal,' Shin telepathically commanded his underling.
The Kai confirmed the order before he told them the situation and teleported them to Shin's location.
By the time the other Z-Fighters got there, Goku, Gohan, Vegeta, Naruto, and Satsuki had already been healed.
"What happened?" Goku asked as he became conscious.
When he saw the others finally awaken, he answered the question.
"Majin Buu knocked all of you out. I temporarily blinded Babidi and Buu and teleported you to Dende-San here."
'What?! We lost to that overgrown child?!' Vegeta mentally exclaimed in shock.
"Yes Vegeta. That 'overgrown child' is much stronger than any of us. You were lucky enough to make it out alive!" He exclaimed. What arrogance from these earthlings! Sure, they were strong, stronger than he himself, but to believe that they could beat Buu? Preposterous!
Shin, in his anger, forgot that they had never met Buu before in their life and so, didn't have much knowledge of it's power level.
At that moment, Kabuto had teleported to the lookout with the others. Videl, Krillin, Piccolo, Goten, and Trunks were with them.
Goten caught sight of the older Saiyans and bounded over to them. He looked at Gohan.
"Hey Nii-Chan, what happened? Did you kick that Buu guys butt?!" He exclaimed with a large grin on his face.
Gohan shook his head before mentally connecting with everyone there. He shared his memories with Videl, Goten, Trunks, Piccolo, and Krillin, showing them what had happened.
As the memories played out, each being was shocked with different things.
Videl was shocked at how their opponents had been killed as well as the strength of Buu. She had already heard the story of Buu from Kibito, all of them had, but it was still shocking at how powerful he was, rendering people who could destroy planets and even solar systems unconscious with ease!
Goten and Trunks were not shocked by how easily their relatives had killed others and neither were Krillin and Piccolo. They were however, shocked by Buu's strength. The youngest Saiyans had always worshipped the older Saiyans, believing them to be the strongest ever. Then, this Buu proves to be even stronger, defeating each one easily, even when they were at SSJ 2.
Even Piccolo was shocked by his power, not to mention Krillin.
"This Buu is a threat. He is going on a killing spree with Babidi leading him. I can feel it." Piccolo gritted his teeth as he felt thousands of KIs dying instantly on the planet.
"They are probably trying to lure us out to kill any threat that remains." Goku deduced.
Vegeta had murder in his eyes. He could feel the people below dying, but he didn't care about that. He was paying all of his attention to the location of Buu.
He was pretty goddamn close to Bulma at the moment!
"Kakabrat!" he exclaimed, turning to Gohan. Gohan, Satsuki, Naruto, and Goku had all felt where Buu was too. "Go do something now before Buu kills them!"
Piccolo, even Goten and Trunks were surprised at what Vegeta was saying. He usually didn't care for humans.
Piccolo narrowed his eyes as he quickly realized what Vegeta meant. He didn't mean the humans, he meant Bulma and Chichi, well mostly Bulma really.
Gohan quickly nodded, teleporting to the stadium seats, right next to Oolong, Puar, Yamcha, Bulma, Chichi, and the Ox King.
"Gohan! W-" his mother was cut off as he quickly grabbed each of them before instant transmissioning them back to the look out.
"Dende!" Goku growled out. "Right now, we can't beat Majin Buu as it is. We need to use the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. Have you fixed its problem yet?" He asked. The problem was the capacity of the room as well as the time limit.
Goku had asked Dende to wish for unlimited capacity and time in the Room of Spirit and Time, though no one ever told Vegeta in the fears that he would use every second of every minute of every day to get stronger and they couldn't have that.
Thankfully, the second wish had been so that Dende could ban people from using it if he wanted and so, he could discreetly make it not function and tell him that sometimes it didn't work and that time, it wasn't working.
Not all the time as Vegeta would grow suspicious though.(13)
"Yeah it has. What are you planning to do?" he asked.
"King Kai taught me a move that allows us to be even stronger," Goku replied. "No time to explain. I'll tell them when we get it. Guys follow me!" He told the Saiyans, even Trunks and Goten before rushing to the RoSaT.
Done everyone! Thank you all for reading. I know there were a lot of mistakes and plot holes in this chapter and seemed rush and the end part kinda was. I stupidly killed Dabura off, but at that point, it was too late. After Buu was revived, I was stuck on what to do! I left a lot of detail out at the end like their reactions as well as a bunch of other stuff, but it would be pretty cliche, don't ya think? "He was shocked...I can't believe I wasn't told this!...blah blah." Whatever their reactions would be is pretty predictable here.
I kept thinking that I should have Vegeta turn evil after Babidi sees them arguing a bit, but then I remembered why that couldn't happen.
Remember, Vegeta cares more for Family than anything else. This includes fighting, food, and his pride added together than cubed before that gets cubed as well.
With Satsuki there as well as his caring of family, even if he doesn't show it much, means that it wouldn't happen!
So, I just thought, why not make Buu stronger many times stronger and knock them out and have them appear at the look out so Goku can teach the fusion technique.
So after I did that, I rushed it without much details and decided, why the hell not?
power levels:
Ula:50 million
Gohan 45 million
SSJ2: 6.187 billion
Dabura: 4 billion
angry: 4.5 billion
super angry: 5 billion
Satsuki: 46 million
SSJ2: 6.325 billion
Naruto: 45 million
SSJ2: 6.187 billion
Goku: 50 million
SSJ2: 6.875
Vegeta: 42.5 million
SSJ2: 5.843 billion
Buu: awakened: 30 billion.
now: 50 billion.
Wārupūru no hakai-tekina saishū-tekina shi: 20 billion.
Anyways, on to other business, like footnotes.
1) I hate that people are killed all the time, but Gohan and Goku are usually hesitant to kill. Here, no mercy to opponents that have wronged them. Some will be given second chances, like the innocent Buu, but not all of them. Some are redeemable, a lot are not.
2) Goku has matured! Surprised? Don't be. He realized what his heart has caused. Raditz, killed him and nearly ki snapped his son. Frieza, nearly destroyed the earth. Gero, the androids had happened. Gave Cell a sense bean? Caused his own death and wasn't with family for 7 years.
3) I had Satsuki not fight for a bit, so time for her to have the spotlight! Besides, Naruto doesn't care to fight right now. Well, at least not as much as Satsuki and he also wants to please her.
4) Yeah, Gohan is brother. Naruto is her Mate, so he is her brother along with Goten.
5) she hasn't had a good chance for a fight yet. Fighting with the Saiyans at base form won't work. They fight at base form as it is better than SSJ. Do some ratios with the multiplier by SSJ transformation and you'll see why.
6) Demon Realmian is a term I think I made up. It's obvious what it is.
7) I never saw them use a force field like this a lot even when it would have been so useful for many things.
8) This one too. They can lift stuff and can be put to practical use. Freezing opponents in place, redirecting KI attacks, etc etc.
9 Gohan's energy is the anime filled nearly half the bar. I never understood why Babidi just didn't take Dabura's energy multiple times as he can obviously do it, case in point with Vegeta v Goku battle.
10) Hakai-Tekina Uzu: loosely translates to destructive whirlpool. I know, cliche, but still pretty original if I say so myself.
11) Barakkumun- loosely translates to Black Moon. Though it appropriate as Uchiha and Moons are really connected and I feel a connection between the Moon and Satsuki. I thought of Black Moon as of her hair and the Moon and her connection.
12) I will name this...Wārupūru no hakai-tekina saishū-tekina shi, long I know. They won't ever say the name though, way too fucking long! It means Destructive Final Death of Whirlpool. Take a word from each attack and combine it.
13)Vegeta isn't dumb, he is actually pretty smart. If he can't use it every time he comes up, he will threaten Dende into calling him when it does.
Time for reviews. Since I didn't do the reviews for the 2 previous chapters (10 and 11) I'll do them here too.
Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama: yeah, the first part was stupid of me. I was too caught up in the moment. For the second one, they don't trust Shin, not in the least, but they need to figure out why he did what he did. They can sense his strength and know they themselves are stronger. They followed for an explanation. After that, the tale of Buu drew them as they wanted to prevent another disaster before it got bigger, even though they couldn't. As for the third, thank you =).
Guest uno: I dunno, Satsuki seems a massive sue
Me- :/. *sighs* this just pisses me off. Prepare for a rant.
How the hell is Satsuki a massive Mary Sue?! She is a more loving, less prideful, kinder version of Vegeta. Are you telling me that if Vegeta was more open and wasn't very prideful, he would be the perfect male? FUCK NO! Satsuki would only be the perfect female for 2 people. Naruto and Vegeta. Naruto believes she is the perfect female and mate as he knows and loves everything about her. No secrets or fears kept from each other. They have spent over a decade in this timeline alone, not to mention the other one. Their, it will probably be either 4 years or 12 years, I haven't decided when they die, 25 or 16. Anyways, with that much time with each other, they are perfect for each other. That's how I made it! She is the perfect daughter for Vegeta. Strong and has a good personality, for him and Naruto at least. She is the perfect Saiyans Heiress.
To other people, she is an over confident girl that doesn't care for anyone other than her family. Let's go over the definition for Mary Sue shall we?
"A Mary Sue is an idealized and seemingly perfect fictional character. Often, this character is recognized as an author insert or wish fulfillment. They can usually perform better at tasks than should be possible given the amount of training or experience."
Satsuki is Idolized by only Goten and Trunks, no one else, and they are kids! She is not perfect! She isn't the strongest ever nor will she ever be! Xeno is still there! She isn't the smartest out there! She has a college level education! Many people also have it! She is Battle/Street smart, something she has earned after her hard work! She isn't a self insert! I am a boy, she is a girl, 'nough said! Wish fulfillment? I love a girl totally different from Satsuki. Hell, opposite hair, personality, and more things. She has so much experience and training, from both her original world and hear, nearly 2 decades of it! Gotenks, a 8 year old was able to do what she can in battle! She is as smart as college people, I am fourteen so I wouldn't know it, but she has it, just like Gohan and Naruto. Lacking in realism? This is totally real enough in 1: Fiction! 2: Fanfiction. Unreal would be Naruto being better than the hokages combined at 7 or him using millions of Kage Bunshin for training and nothing happening! Not this! Damnit dude! This pisses me off like nothing else.
RANT DONE!
Guest: your "language" wasn't that hard to understand. It's just upside down and backwards. You misspelled some words, but it was good nonetheless. I like the way you're taking this. Peace.
Me: not anymore.
NobleRogue: Quick question: How did you get the text to appear upside-down? I want to do that for a story I'm working on.
Me: just google word inverter. You know, you could use IM for this instead of review.
There with the reviews.
Note, I write this on google doc before putting it here so there will be many bolder and Italic mistakes. This phone is too small for me too properly spot them or remember them, So I'll just leave the italics. Holds I fix as they are more important.
To guests: please put a code name so if you're review is long, you'll know I am talking to you as I will not copy down the review.
I thank you all for reading and hope to see ya next time. Bye!