Konichiwa everyone! How is Y'all doing? It's time for chapter 16 now!
Apparently, people like to advertise good stories that they have read that they feel are amazing, so from now in, I'll do two every story on this story and ROTB
Dark Phoenix of Konoha by White Angel of Auralon. Skip to chapter 4 for the main story to start as the first three are just intro and exposition dump. They are helpful though so...
This Time As a Namikaze by TwiceMarked
I recommend reading all the way as the later chapters are absolutely hilarious, at least the ones that are intended to be. Tended to be pretty awesome including how Naruto grew so protective of Hinata because of Danzo, Yurei, the seriousness, but still humorous.
Anyway, into my notes for this chapter…
I apologize for this chapter being so late because you see, I changed writing styles a little, anyway, this should have been released on May 14, because I was ⅗ through on May 3, but after that, I couldn't find what to write so I didn't start writing till May 25.
Since this chapter isn't here to advance the plot, rather, but leaning towards the GohanxVidel development as well as the time before the celebration.
Also, I made a mistake during the last chapter that I hope to fix, but I didn't realize when Gohan's birthday was. It was, according to sources, on May 17. Cell's death was on May 26. I said that there were eight days til the celebration. Using basic math, that would mean that that the last chapter, the last part, took place on May 18.
I meant for it to take place before Gohan's birthday and for this chapter to be dedicated to what I listed.
I know that some people are going to say that Gohan's birthday is not on what I said as the Gohan's Birthday episode wasn't canon, but I couldn't find any other birthdays listed. If you have a better one, with concrete evidence, I'll fix this.
Note: This takes place on May 17; a day before the last chapter. The beginnings could be counted as a large flashback while the days after can be considered the countdown to when Tao strikes and when the Cell Death party goes down.
Also, can anyone guess what the three siblings I introduced purpose is? I used a horrible and hardly noticeable hint during the time of their school introduction. It's almost impossible to see because it doesn't mean what I want it to mean, so I used two words in Japanese, One isn't ever said in this franchise while the other is consistently used and combined them to mean something completely different from what it means.
As such, I'll give you a hint. Shinigami and Energy. If you can use these two words to get what my hint means, you have to find it yourself, Well, I'd be impressed cause it's not easy to make the connection. I guess you can call it a challenge, no?
Down-SouthSouthwest is a direction I use in a spherical direction. It is going down, but towards the south. Here; imagine a sphere with your typical North, South, East, West, Up, and Down. Now, when I say the word down or up before I give a direction, that means flip your mental compass so that North is now up and the up and down don't exist. Now, since he is going down, the direction would b south, hence the first south. Since it's not directly south, but rather the middle of "south" and "west" I called it Southwest. But they didn't go exactly between the two, but farther on the south side. Think of the mental compass after I say down so South is now down. Go to south. Now, since the angle from south to west is 90*, you have to do a 22.5* turn from south to west so it would be between southwest and south. That's the direction of what Down-SouthSouthwest means. I hope you apply this to my other directions as well.
Warning:Some sexual content in one of the scenes. I put a warning their; don't read if you don't want to and skip to the next scene. The warning will be in bold btw.
Different Scenes are represented by the lines, like the one below these words.
"Videl, where are you going?" Erasa asked as Videl got into her copter.
"Gohan's birthday is today. I need to get a present for him," the dark-haired woman responded as she started the loud copter.
Erasa was going to ask to come, but the roar of the blades covered her voice as her best friend looked away from her, disabling her from seeing the lips move.
Videl was in too much of a panic. She had been focused on the Cell's Death Party going on around that she had forgotten about Gohan's birthday.
Thankfully, it was Saturday and only morning so no school to fuck her over.
She had time to get to the store and buy something that he would like.
Conveniently, the party was occurring at Capsule Corps. at around three, so she had a few hours to do so.
After two hours of constant thinking and searching, Videl finally got to something that she felt Gohan would love.
"Gohan's favorite color's purple." Naruto had told her two weeks ago when he told her to come over to Capsule Corps. for his brother's birthday.
Taking the next ten minutes to buy and package the gift, she placed it in her copter and capsulized it before taking off from the roof of the mall she had shopped in.
West City, or more specifically Capsule Corporation, was a 3-hour drive from Satan city at around 121 average kilometers per hour, 50 minutes in her copter at top speeds, and 27 minutes by herself.
She had about an hour before it started, only being around 2 when she arrived.
Landing in the back of the famous company, she unloaded her copter of the gift and went to the front after capsulizing it again.
"Hey Videl," Bulma greeted her as the woman waved her over.
"Hey, Bulma, sorry I'm so late. I had trouble finding Gohan a gift that he would like and didn't already have," Videl greeted back, explaining why she was late.
"Don't worry about it. I told Naruto to make sure that Gohan doesn't come here until 3. I'm pretty sure we'll be done setting up by then," Bulma told her before she gave a new order to the robots helping around.
"How can I help?" Videl asked, feeling uncomfortable about not doing anything to help.
"Well, you can put your gift in the storage and help the Chi-Chi and Goku set up the food," Bulma told her.
Videl didn't exactly trust Goku not to eat the food while Chi-Chi wasn't looking, he was definitely fast enough, so she quickly agreed to her newly assigned 'mission.'
Walking over to the large table where Chi-Chi, Goku, Goten, and Trunks were loading the absurd amount of food, some healthy, but mostly junky, although not really unhealthy, as well as a large amount of liquid that she identified as soft drinks, soda, and bottled water, Videl started to watch over the three Saiyans as she helped the others place the food using telekinesis.
Gohan scowled as he grabbed the kick Satsuki sent at him before swinging her around and throwing her around to her mate.
His brother grabbed his lover by the waist and set her back in the air.
"Is there a reason for this?" he asked the two. They'd been at this so-called "spar" for over 3 hours. They usually only did this for an hour or so. Due to this, he was highly suspicious of their reason for their insistence on this fight.
"Just shut up and fight for another hour," Satsuki told him before smiling mischievously.
'Naru-Kun. I'm gonna Solar Flare and tele-grab him. Hit him with a Rasengan Blast Barrage,' Satsuki told her lover as she concentrated her KI before releasing it in a large flash of electromagnetic waves.
The radiation of pure white light blinded Gohan, forcing him to flinch slightly. While his sight wasn't necessarily important to the fight, it still gave him an advantage.
The flinch was all Satsuki needed as she used some of the KI not lost in the Solar Flare to latch onto Gohan, restricting his movements.
Caught by surprise, Gohan was unprepared for his brother to jump behind him.
Naruto has taken the time of Satsuki's distraction and attack to create multiple spiraling spheres in his hands, four in his right hand and three in his left.
When Suki gave him the signal, Naruto jumped behind his brother and blasted his back with the Rasengan Blast Barrage.
The Rasengan's exploded on contact, slightly burning Gohan's skin and sending him flying down-south-southwest.
Gohan landed roughly on the ground, causing dust to fly as he slowly got up from the hole, grimacing at the pain of being smashed into the earth with speeds surpassing a bullet.
He quickly shook it off, having suffered worse, and growled as he looked at his brother and 'sister.'
Before the other two could react, Gohan moved towards Naruto and let his fist meet his face before punching Satsuki right in the stomach.
Satsuki lost her wind and gasped for air, but Gohan had conserved his energy, not having used anything that required intense amounts.
Using this to his advantage, he created a quick blast behind him, not too powerful, giving him a boost that allowed him to grab her by the arm before moving to Naruto and slamming her onto his brother's body.
Ow/Motherfucker!" Naruto and Satsuki yelled in unison as they parted from the other.
The two decided to end this as it was near time so they decided to do their final collaboration on Gohan.
'Suki, Speed Shuriken him. I'll add the Rasengan to make it faster. Use a barrage,' the once blond told his beloved. 'Then I'll distract him. You knock him out. Not too hard though. I think the parties in about an hour,' he finished.
Gohan wasn't gonna let them plan to take him out though and quickly went after his little brother and engaged him in hand-to-hand combat.
This provided Satsuki a good amount of time to create her shuriken.
Concentrating hard, she let out her energy, hoping their mentor didn't notice as they quickly grew into vermillion-colored stars.
As this was going on, Naruto had just smashed Gohan to the ground.
Gohan quickly rebounded with his hands as he gave his brother a kick to the chin using a handstand.
When it made contact, Naruto used the momentum to his advantage, flipping in the same area while twisting his body to the right.
He thrust his right leg right at Gohan's stomach, shooting his brother across the field before he disappeared.
Naruto quickly turned up and around before letting out a blast of KI with Rasengan to follow up.
The attack hit Gohan as he reappeared on the spot, creating some dust.
Using his KI Sensing, Naruto located Gohan's energy, but when he shot his arm forward, he got blasted back as another explosion ensued within the dust cloud.
Gohan appeared behind his brother and shoved his new creation, Volt Sphere, into his brothers back.
A ball of condensed plasma that was consistently moving throughout the air to generate lightning that could be controlled with his high levels of KI control.
Flashback: Year's ago
"Bulma, do you know what KI is?" Gohan asked his godmother after remembering something. Most times when he had turned into a Super Saiyan, lightning was generated around his body. He wanted to know why. Lightning itself wasn't energy. It was visible and energy is invisible.
"KI is plasma Gohan. While you guys were all training for the androids, I asked Goku if he could help me with a project. He said yes and I got my hands on a constant source of KI," Bulma grinned at him. "So anyway, I thought back to a lot of stuff I saw you guys doing with KI while simultaneously asking Goku to do stuff with it. Just so you know kid, KI isn't actually energy, at least not when you release it. Energy is invisible, your attacks are literally bright blasts…" Bulma continued. (Watch Film Theorists: DBZ episode for what I got)
Present
Gohan had practiced his KI control after that, forcing his fellow demi-saiyans to do the same.
As such, he could, partially, control his body's lightning to create attacks. He had tried to take it further and further but so far, he wasn't that high.
He needed more control dammit!
Naruto was able to dodge, barely, but got touched in his left leg.
Wincing at the numb feeling in his lower limb, Naruto took a quick glance at Satsuki.
"Suki, throw them!" he told her. His lover complied with his request and threw the plasma shurikens towards Gohan.
Gohan smirked at dodged them, not wanting to make the same mistake as many people like Nappa had made.
He sensed his brother focusing a large amount of KI into his arms and quickly deduced that he was creating a Rasengan.
Not knowing why, he turned around and flew towards the black-haired teenager.
Satsuki got in his way, however, and engaged him in another taijutsu match.
This gave Naruto enough time to insert the multiple Rasengans he had created into Satsuki's Speed Shurikens.
The Spiraling sphere of plasma made the rotation of the attack even faster.
Gohan didn't notice this, but Satsuki did.
'Release on signal hime,' Naruto told her as he rushed towards his brother.
The multiple shurikens, powered by his Rasengan, rotated around his hand.
Satsuki threw herself out of the combat while Gohan widened his eyes and turned around.
'Release!' Naruto yelled as Satsuki released the control over her shuriken.
The attack exploded, splashing KI all over the area.
Gohan tried to get back from the ensuing explosion of plasma, moving as fast as he could, but the attack still reached him.
Wincing at the blunt force of the energy clashing with his enhanced skin, Gohan decided to concede to his brother and sister.
Gohan's birthday celebration was fully underway. Everyone had been invited.
Every one of their friends and families on Earth, from Krillin, to Vegeta, to Piccolo, to Launch.
Piccolo was standing against a tree in the garden, bottles upon bottles of sugared water surrounding him as he drank up, mediating at the same time as he was training his telepathy to prepare for their little Mini-Tourney.
Krillin was trying to be the comedian with Yamcha as his 'assistant.'
Goku, Ox King, Vegeta, Naruto, Satsuki, Goten, and Trunks, decided to hold an eating contest with Oolong as the announcer.
"And Ox here pulls ahead of the competition with eating an astounding 5 plates of food at once. Oh! It looks like Vegeta and Goku are trying to out rat the king! They are neck and neck, but can they catch up to the king?! OH! What's this? Satsuki has just mixed together 7 plates at once and feeding on them. She pulls up right to the king, but can she surpass him?!" Oolong shouted as he flashed around the table.
A few minutes later "HO-, Satsuki continues her combination of food. She has pulled ahead of the competition and destroyed them with an amazing score of 127, crushing second-comer Ox King with a 29 plate victory!" Oolong shouted as Yajirobe held up her hand as she was declared the victor.
"And a few words from our victor!" Oolong shouted as he gave the 'microphone' to the ravenette.
The woman grinned as she spoke her mind.
"I would like to thank my Saiyan genes and my fellow kin and mate's training in many contests before this, letting me kick their asses from here to Namek like the weaklings they are!" she declared with a small grin, laughing at their faces of either defeat, anger at losing, pouting, pride, or a combination.
The festivals had finally stopped as Bulma loudly proclaimed that it was time for Bulma to receive his gifts.
Yamcha's gift was the first one he received.
Yamcha had to go take it out from the front of the building, but when he arrived, Gohan couldn't help the widening of his eyes nor the slight grin that came with seeing the gift.
The motorbike was a customized Ducati 1098, painted with cyan that complimented the dark black parts of the vehicle.
The designs were the best part of the bike.
Long, golden serpentine dragons that seemed to flow throughout the bi-wheeled vehicles, glowing with bright golden energy that the dragon itself seemed to be made of and emitting.
The dragon was complemented by the thin outline of metallic black that seemed to be eclipsed by the golden fire the bike was spewing from its side.
Gohan had to admit, it looked admittedly badass, although it would be useless in emergencies as he could go supersonic. It would be fun for just zooming around though.
The next noticeable present came from Bulma. She had it capsulized so when it was her turn to give him a present, she grinned and unloaded the present.
Goten and Trunks had gotten instantly jealous. The hoverboard that she had created for him was beautiful. The board itself was designed with shades of his favorite color and multiple shades of light blue to form an ethereal tornado with clouds that seemed to circle around it, also formed with a mix of violet and cyan and the thin, powerful, blitz of lightning circling around the flowing colors as they zapped around the tornado, protectively sending out blasts in all direction.
The lighting itself seemed to be divine, dark blue in color with lighter shades on its edges, surrounded by the glowing amethyst hugging the painted plasma tightly.
The final presentation came from Videl, right after Bulma, and the last of them all.
Videl took out the box and unwrapped it as quickly as she could without seeming hastened.
She took out the gift and told Gohan to close his eyes.
Gohan complied with her order and closed his vision for the moment.
Videl got right behind him and opened the necklace for him before placing it around his neck.
Clicking it closed, she told him that he could open his eyes and he did so, looking down at his neck, only to see an amethyst pendant.
The gemstone was cut into cylindrical shape with parts of it cut off. The top and bottom were octagons with the unsymmetrical middle becoming eight imperfect rectangles.
"Hey, Erasa!" Videl asked the blonde as she flew back towards her house. She was just a few minutes away, the same length it would take for Erasa to arrive at her house.
"Hey V! How was the party?" Erase asked her when she picked up.
"It was fun, but I wanted your help with something," the dark-haired woman told her best friend as she landed near her house.
"Oh?! Sure. I'll come over to your house k?"
"Mmm," she mumbled in agreement.
After she had arrived at her house, she went to the front porch and waited for her best, childhood friend to arrive. A few moments later, the gates to the mansion opened as a woman with a mop of blonde hair came through.
After greeting her friend with a hello, the black-haired woman quickly ushered the girl to her room.
Locking the door to keep her fathers prying eyes if he passed along the door, she turned around to meet bright blue eyes gazing into her own.
Erasa had a soft smile on her face, having gone through the various reasons why Videl would want to talk to her. Due to the events that were happening, she came to the most likely one.
"What'cha wanna talk about, V?" the blonde asked her friend.
Video bit her lips as she spoke of the person she wished to converse about.
"Gohan," she spoke aloud as the soft vibrations flowed through her mouth and gracefully flew into the ear on Erasa's head.
'Finally!' Erasa thought to herself as she cheered within the recess of her mind.
Although Videl had confessed that she held some affections for the aforementioned boy, Videl had asked her to leave it at that until she could fully confirm herself that the feelings were true instead of a crush.
Although it had turned into a teasing topic that Erasa took multiple advantages of, the blue-eyed girl took her best friends feelings seriously.
She was determined to help her best friend develop those affections.
Gohan was a great guy. After all, when he and his brother and Satsuki entered Videl's life, she seemed to be happier than she was before.
Videl had always been content with what she had, but she did miss a few things such as a mother, deceased, and her father about 25%.
Hercule was a businessman as well a martial artist, so he didn't have much time to dedicate with his daughter, even though he tried his hardest on the days where he could just relax at his house.
She could also confirm that Gohan at least held some affections for Videl, observing him had been easy while he was distracted.
"It's about time," Erasa huffed as she looked at her friend with a smile.
"I know, I know, but I think I'm ready now," Videl admitted.
"So what are you gonna do?" the high-school student asked, encouraging the woman in front of her to make a decision and review it.
It was best to be cautious around Gohan right now. While going off by instinct may work, delicately thinking had a better chance right now.
"I was thinking of asking him to the party as my date," the black-haired explained.
"No."
Videl looked at Erasa confused as to why she denied the idea so immediately.
Erasa sighed as she explained to her friend that you couldn't just ask your crush to one of the biggest event's dance. You need to actually be his girlfriend or something.
"Try some small things first. Try to go on a few dates before it's time for the celebration. It's in 7 days right, so ask him out tomorrow, go on a date or two, then, in 5 days, ask him if he wants to go to the dance with you if everything works out well," the blonde explained.
"How do I know that he's going to want to 'Rasa? Like you said, if everything works out well," the girl questioned her friend.
"Because Videl, I know he at least likes you a little bit. What do you think those dates are for? It's so that those feelings can be developed."
Videl blinked as she processed what Erasa said. Gohan liked her over just a friend? When did her best friend notice? How did she not notice?
"Is it not worth the risk?" Erasa asked Videl.
Videl nodded her head instantly. It was definitely worth the risk, but the chance of rejection was still always there, no matter how low or high.
"Don't be scared Videl," Erasa told her softly. "Gohan won't reject you. He's been with you this whole time. Even if he doesn't like you, I'm pretty sure he'll still go on at least one date with you. Just convince him on the date that you're definitely worth his time, and I'm pretty sure that he'll be worth yours."
Videl nodded her head. Gohan was definitely a great, potential, boyfriend. He was kind, caring, intelligent, and strong.
She knew he was loyal, Saiyan customs demanded it.
If he grew to love her, he would continue to do so unless something disastrous happened that would cause them to separate, like the non-existence chance of someone cheating, or disagreements on their livings, such as children, education, or something else.
(Warning: Some sexual content ahead)
She sighed in bliss and happiness as her body absorbed the warmth radiating from his body as her crown rested on her lover's chest.
The rise and fall of his chest lifted her head up as his slow and familiar beat vibrated through her ears.
His arms encircled around her body, held at the crook of her neck with the right flowing from her mid-back to her waist, where it rest.
His head layer on top of her own, his chin on the crown as his grip become tighter, pressing her own body against him even more.
His soft snores flowing through her ears as her eyes began to shift down.
Her eyes became tired, her body cold as she laid on her lover as the music from her phone slowly caused her to doze off, her dreams manipulated to form a connection between her own and Naruto's, easily possible with their mate marks and close connection.
A couple of hours later, Naruto's eyes started to slowly open as he felt a soft weight on his chest.
As his gaze snapped open as he stared down at his raven-haired weapon.
Naruto smiled mischievously as a perverted, yet lovely way to wake his mate up.
He carefully moved her head off of his chest. Laying her down on the soft ground near the lake where they had taken a nap.
He moved on top of her and his moved slowly to her chest, covered by her dark clothes.
Moving his thumb and index finger to her nipples, he slightly rubbed the warm bud as he kissed his lover on the lips.
The beauty moaned loudly into his mouth as her eyes slowly opened as she felt her lovers' KI.
She kissed him back, her lips grinding against his own as he sucked on her bottom lips.
Her arousal increased as he continued to rub her soft but firm breasts.
Her pink lips left his own as she let out a soft moan and decided to get even.
Since she was finally fully awake, she used a short burst of strength against her unguarded lover and flipped them over as their lips reconnected.
Her hips laid on his as she invaded his mouth and sucked on his tongue, slightly enjoying the taste of dark chocolate that he had for dessert last night.
Naruto himself enjoyed the bitter and acidic taste of her lips that came from her snacking on some tomatoes late in the morning.
Her black, Saiyan tail unwrapped from her waist and reached down to his cloth and started stroking the member that rubbed against her lower lips.
Done. First of all, no, there will not be any lemons on here, at least not until I grow older from 14 to at least 16, maybe not even then.
Okay, let's get to the actual and important notes.
Once again, I apologize for taking so long to post this. This should have been posted around 3 weeks ago, but I couldn't decide what to write after Gohan's birthday. I came up with a lot of ideas, such as Goku and Vegeta coming up with the idea to fully learn KI control to the point where it would be the same as when they went into the RoSaT in super to get SSB mode.
I eventually landed with the Videl x Gohan starting point because I didn't have anything else. Anyways, I used little clips in earlier chapters to show that, unclichely, Videl did admit to liking Gohan without much denial, if any.
I didn't, as I said before, want Videl to be like in canon where she's super nosy. Let's be honest. No high school student would act like that, especially not the daughter of a world-renowned figure. People have secrets, Videl should know that. Yes, Gohan's was larger and he was a nervous guy, but really? Gohan never had many interactions with teenagers and no one knew how large his secrets were.
Second of all, it's common knowledge that superheroes would hide their identity so that family isn't in danger, even if we're talking about Goten and Chichi here.
Second, Gohan wouldn't just reveal his identity to someone who doesn't deserve his trust.
She fucking stalked him!
So… I made Videl more, er, realistic? To me anyways.
So the gifts Gohan got were just something's that he would appreciate. If you've had the ability to fly your whole life, it's not very exciting while doing something that's enjoyable and new is more fun.
So… Yamcha and Bulma are rich so they got him, built in Bulma's case, a motorbike and a hoverboard.
Yes, I made the designs on them myself, based on my own imagination and my wallpaper.
A serpentine, golden dragon made of pure energy that flows around him in a spiral form.
The other, I can't describe. It's my wallpaper and it's a veil of blue and purple with every single shade I've seen.
Videl's gift was a purple colored pendant, similar to Naruto's original necklace from Tsunade. No, it doesn't have any special properties.
So...Erasa has helped Videl with her love issues now so, between this chapter's time point and next chapter's, Videl and Gohan will have gone on a few dates. I don't really want to write all that out so I will just summarize it in a few paragraphs then leave it at that.
The last section doesn't need addressing so let's all just move on. It was just some filler that was supposed to be a lusty-romantic type with low lust levels, but still there
Also, the whole idea of KI being plasma gave me ideas such as, when they can fully control their KI, they'll be able to manipulate pure lightning and fire as both are forms of plasma.
Should I do power levels still? I will have them myself, but should I post them?
Reviews:
Guest: Of Gohan Trained he would likely be Stomp Buu as SS1. Lol
Me: truthfully speaking, I don't think so. Remember before Cell what Goku said? Training their bodies would not really make much of a power increase, if any. My conclusion is that when you reach a certain point of power, there becomes a mental block that, until you destroy, doesn't increase your strength. My thinking is that you can destroy it in three ways, a new transformation or destroying it through massive meditation and going into your mindscape. Since Gohan wouldn't know about the new transformation even though it's a logical thought. Second of all, Gohan probably wouldn't have time with training his siblings for a few years, then Goten+Trunks. The time he had probably wouldn't have been enough. Besides, in Gohan wasn't as strong as Goku or Vegeta in base form or his transformations like he is her. Anyways, my point is that, in canon, going to SSJ3 is 8x SSJ. Since it's different here(11x), Gohan would still be weaker because Mystic form is stronger than Goku's SSJ3 so against Fat Buu, Mystic Gohan would win, but Mystic is at least 8x stronger than SSJ, which is a whole lot, trust me. In DBZ, a difference of 2x made Gohan go from getting beaten by Cell to thrashing him.
monsterkillers124:!Defect I think you meant Deflect
Me: I tried, but I couldn't find what you meant in chapter 7.
: I'm gonna have to agree with point number 2 as for how the hell did Toriyama never bother saying Vegeta was the king always calling him the Prince of All Saiyans even though his father was dead. The ONLY thing I could think of is MAYBE just MAYBE at the start of the story even though he wasn't mentioned maybe Vegeta's brother was stronger? I think a race like the Saiyans would care more about power than who was born first when it comes to the ruler so by the end of DBZ there was no question about it that Vegeta was at the very least the second most powerful Saiyan and since his father was the previous king he should now be king
Me: I don't think Tarbles was ever stronger than Vegeta. It was, while not canon, that Tarbles couldn't fight.
Mar 23 c9
instead of using Pokemon for reference when making a move you should make it from Naruto such as the Force Palm being an Eight Trigrams Mountain Crusher. Here's the description of that move The user hits the target at close range with a powerful wave of chakra emitted from their palm, which sends them flying back, causing severe damage. So just replace Chakra with Ki it's pretty much exactly what you're going for except maybe a bit more powerful
Me: I tried to use reference from a few anime, but I didn't even know that was a move in Naruto. I remember Lucario well since he is one of my favorite Pokémon and Focus Palm has always stood out to me. I'll try to make it from Naruto, but I don't know all the moves, especially since the only Hyuugas I ever cared about was Hinata and Neji + that move was used in the war that I skipped a bunch of episodes into.
: I don't understand your power chart here. If Naruto and Satsuki are as strong as Gohan's base form then why aren't their other forms equally as strong as Gohan?
Me: Because the Zenkai boost happened after the battle. They didn't receive the boost until after the fight. They never healed during the battle, not enough to gain the zenkai boost anyway.
If you have any questions, P.M. Anything you have problems with, including Mass grammar issues or with the plot itself, feel free to tell me.
I ain't blaming English not being my native language since, while not the best, I know enough to have those mistakes fixed when I see them. Unless their punctuations like commas and semi-colons. Those always screw me over.
Until next time, goodbye.