So...Videl and Kori got kidnapped last chapter by Tao, everyone is completely clueless, and Mr. Satan won't be discovering it for a few hours so Tao can easily cover his tracks.
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Can we establish something? KI attacks come in many different forms and purposes from laser beams to plasma balls to sharp AF disks, yet, no one ever decides to create a subtle and deadly move within the group besides Destructo Disk. (Piccolo's Death Beam doesn't count.) a
Think about it. If you used it, the opponent would be like Nappa, but would actually get cut due to ignorance and stupidity.
That's why I'm going to be showing off a lot of moves that may seem like Chakra attacks. They won't be throwing out elements, but chakra based attacks such as Rasengan, Water-Walking to freak people out, Chakra Scalpels, Hinata's Twin Lion Fists, and similar jutsu. For those who'll be like, they can't learn that fast. They've been training for around 8 years…
As for why it wasn't used earlier, well, Majin Buu could regenerate and the androids so far have been very weak and exploded a lot.
Btw, I'm making the country of Japan much larger than it is. Since my characters can fly much faster then sound, it doesn't
Anyways, let's start.
Chaos reigned throughout the mansion of Hercule Satan after his daughter's noted absence from the house and her room.
Hercule knew his daughter and she had barely ever slept over 7:30 due to her school starting at 8:30 and her having her voluntary, temporary career.
The times she did, however, she had always left him some sort of message with a special code in case she had been kidnapped.
No note had been found, meaning that his daughter had probably been teennapped.
The man would have laughed if anyone had proposed such a ridiculous hypothesis any time before yesterday, but after Goku had taken the time to tell him about the basics of KI and Videl had shown her ability to use it, his beliefs had shattered in two.
Now, he knew that there were beings far more powerful then he would ever be.
He wasn't suspicious of the ones he knew. They had no real reason for wanting her. They could have gotten everything he owned if they wanted at any time and they were already stronger.
However, he did need their help. They were able to sense other creatures life force so they should be able to track her down.
"Hello, Son Residence!" a young voice shouted cheerfully, his voice echoing through Hercules' ear, making him slightly wince.
"Hello, Goten, it's Mr. Satan," Hercule spoke in a rushed fashion. "Can you give the phone to your brother? I need his help," he continued, deciding not to test the kid's energy by letting him talk.
Goten frowned as he sensed the worry in the Afro-guys voice, but decided that unless Gohan told him, he shouldn't worry about it. Mom worried about a lot of stupid stuff like him getting hurt when playing outside, so he attributed it to old people problems.
'Gohan, Mr. Afro wants you to call him,' he spoke out telepathically after slightly raising his KI in a sharp fashion to gather his attention.
He wasn't the best telepathic, but his brother was good enough to pick up on the thoughts from just upstairs.
Gohan allowed a frown to grace his face as he took the phone from his little Demi-Saiyan brother, concern and worry weighing at his heart after hearing who was calling.
He had made it a habit to keep a KI lock on every one of his friends, excluding the ones he made at school besides Videl.
He knew that when a person's KI disappeared, they might be training to keep their KI at nearly undetectable levels while simultaneously fighting at full power.
It was something he recommended Videl do if she had time. Not as far as that yet, because she still also needed to learn control.
He told her that she should try to keep her KI as low as possible while holding something, such as a small boulder, telekinetically for as long as possible and beat the previous time.
When he woke up in the morning, he hadn't detected Videl's KI signature but had dismissed it as her simply getting better with it. After all, he hadn't kept track of her training.
Now, the phone call from Mr. Satan, along with the absence of KI made him worry.
'Goten, can you tell mom that Naruto and I might have to cut school today, then call Trunks and make him do the same for Satsuki,' he telepathically communicated as he took the phone from his brother, placing emphasis on the word might. 'Tell her Videl might be missing,' he finished as he spoke out loud.
"Hello Mr. Satan," he greeted, waiting for the man to tell him what was wrong with Videl.
"Gohan! Videl! She's missing. I can't find her anywhere in the house and I already called the school to check if she's there and the cops if she was there, but both of them said no. Can you do your sensing life thingy to find her?" he asked, his voice relaying panic and a rushed tone, eager for the answer.
'Damn it!' He shouted mentally before deciding to answer Mr. Satan's question.
"Sorry, I can't sense it. Either she's hiding it or she's been kidnapped to a place where the energy can't be radiated," he told him. "I have to go. I'm gonna get everyone and come up with a plan to find her," he finished before hanging up abruptly.
Turning around, he met the face of his concerned mother and brother as well as the slightly understanding face of Goten.
"Mom,-" Gohan opened his mouth to speak but Chichi interrupted him.
"Don't worry Gohan. I'll call the school and tell them you have a family matter right now. Naruto! Goten! Help your brother find your future sister-in-law!" she said reassuringly before turning to yell at the other Demi-saiyans, causing them to nervously shout "Yes Ma'am!"
"Goku," she suddenly said as she turned around, feeling her mate's presence coming down the stairs.
Before she could say anything, he nodded in her direction and teleported away after saying, "Don't worry Chi, Naruto told me about some minor threats and I think that this is their main attack, or at least the start of it."
'Meet me at Kami's Lookout,' Goku told Gohan and Naruto before teleporting away.
Gohan and Naruto tapped their other family member's shoulder before using IT to arrive at Dende's place.
The first place Goku arrived at was Capsule Corps.
He had teleported to Vegeta specifically because he knew that Bulma shouldn't be interrupted by an abrupt disturbance. She could get injured after all and she was his best friend.
When he arrived, he was forced to dodge a shot right at the face before looking at Satsuki, amused to see her eyes widened before they dropped, her eyes in a deadpan expression that screamed sarcasm and annoyance before she sighed and the energy that had been dancing around her to calm.
Vegeta himself soon appeared, having turned off the gravity machine so they could converse. After all, Kakarot wouldn't just appear inside the Gravity Chamber without reason.
Goku's gaze turned to Satsuki and Vegeta, his amusement wearing off as his voice echoed throughout the chamber.
"Videl's missing."
Satsuki allowed herself to blink at the news a couple of times, allowing her mind to process the surprising statement before her eyes dilated slightly and she narrowed her face, a frown gracing the woman's face as she thought about that statement and all of the implications it held.
Her father, however, didn't really respond the same way, his eyes narrowing and mouth twisting into a scowl.
"And what should we do Kakarot?" he asked, testing his rival's plan. He really didn't want anything to do with the Satan spawn, but she was courting a Saiyan and as the prideful ruler, it was his responsibility to solve the issues of his subjects.
"I'm gonna ask King Kai to find her, although it'll be hard for him since her KI's subdued, but he'll be able to. What we need to figure out is why and where. We also need to get ready for a trap," Goku told them, his own expression unusually thoughtful as he pondered the possibility of a trap.
"Che," Vegeta spat out, his expression glaring at the incompetence of the third-class Saiyan in front of him. "It's obvious why Kakarot. Anyone who would want to capture the Satan spawn would have done it years ago when she was weaker than the weakling she is now. Whoever did it know is after us. They had either a way to subdue her, either by power or by drugs. She was probablasleep, foolish girl. They are after us, and they know she is the weak-link between us Saiyans," he finished.
Bulma and Chichi could easily contact either of them through their bond, it was a mental connection that was unbreakable, even in death. The only limit was the length in which the bond worked, which could be increased in time. The rest within the "Saiyan Circle," meaning mates and saiyans themselves, were strong enough to destroy anyone on this planet. Videl was the only human who wasn't bonded to her Saiyan, so no communication and she was weak and unprotected.
"I know Vegeta," Goku gritted out, the insult to his intelligence was a slightly sensitive topic. "But we still need to find out where she is."
It took a bit of time convincing Vegeta that the plan would work, as well as a compromise that he would spar with him daily from then on.
Unknown to Goku, Vegeta was already going to help, albeit reluctantly, but Kakarot was still an idiot so he was able to get a deal with him to get stronger.
Satsuki was powerful, but she was off doing other things and didn't care for training as much as he did, only fighting him once a week.
Besides, he needed a bit of action. Fighting was his hobby but training every day non-stop eventually got boring, especially since they determined that they couldn't gain much progress thanks to a mental block that had appeared, similar to what had happened before he reached SSJ2.
If saving the Satan spawn would lead to a chain of events that were a catalyst to an exciting event, he wouldn't mind helping.
Vegeta and Satsuki soon left to Kami's Lookout, the Saiyan prince opting to fly rather than teleport, deciding to take the time to think of his progress.
Goku, meanwhile, left the gravity chamber and headed towards his first friend's laboratory, doing who knows what.
When he arrived at the door, he lifted his hands and knocked lightly on the door, the colliding between metal and flesh creating a sound that echoed throughout the hallway.
The sound also appeared to have gone through to the other side as well, if the loud shout that allowed him to come in was any indication.
The Saiyan opened the door, sliding it from side to side, and walked forward, stepping into the laboratory of his blue-haired genius friend.
Focusing on the woman who was at the center edge of the room, he allowed his feet to carry him over.
Bulma turned around, a smile gracing her face as her gaze landed on her best friend. Her greeting showed this happiness and she chirped.
"Morning Goku, what's up?"
"Someone or something kidnapped Videl," Goku said out, allowing his annoyance of another group threatening his friends and family show through his heavy sigh.
The shock of the statement made even the Great Bulma Briefs blink a few times, processing that statement and the implications between them before her brain worked into overdrive, taking all of the information she knew and had, and used those to make logical assumptions and hypothesis, eliminating the unlikely ones from the area where she would actually think about it.
"Do you know if Videl's a light sleeper?" she asked, her voice slightly panicked and rushed. Even though Gohan and Videl's relationship wasn't very serious, the two had a strong chemistry, their comparability was pretty high with only some disagreements, such as Videl's higher morals or Gohan's high trust in strangers. This chemistry had led to a relationship, and no matter how new or weak the relationship was, it was a Saiyan one.
She had only seen the protective side of a Saiyan a few times in her life, it was sometimes terrifying and amazing to see her best friend or husband fly off the handle when their family, either her or Gohan respectively, had been in a life-threatening situation where the opponent was toying and torturing them or just close to killing them.
Krillin had told her about the absolute rage that had enveloped Goku when he saw Gohan's broken neck at Namek.
"It was one of the only times where Goku didn't enjoy the fight. He went full power and completely destroyed the Ginyu Force that were there, except the white-haired guy that escaped."
She shuddered at the thought of Goku going berserk and fighting to kill from the beginning, even though she had gotten more used to it, having seen more fights directly in the past 8 years.
"Do you think the androids kidnapped her?" she asked the man. That hypothesis made the most sense. Her daughter, Gohan, and Naruto had all informed her of the androids and she herself had seen one and even though it was only for an instant, the wiring made it obvious.
Seeing as she had studied 16 before he had been crushed, she was able to recognize the technology. However, Satsuki had told her that these were far weaker then what they had been told by Gohan to the point that either of the two youngest Demi-Saiyans could easily win.
That made no sense unless the person who was creating the androids wasn't Gero and instead someone who stumbled into the area and didn't have the information of Earth's KI levels. After all, Videl was regarded as the strongest woman in the world at the time so it would make sense that she was a threat and needed to be eliminated.
So, either that thought was somewhat wrong or Videl was dead. Since the second option would leave them with no current options, she decided to entertain the first idea.
"I don't know. Maybe?" he asked. He may have been smarter, but he couldn't calculate everything to the point that Vegeta and Bulma had.
"Alright," she said as her ass left the chair, standing up to face him. "Let's go."
He grabbed her shoulder and teleported her to Kami's lookout.
After 10 minutes of waiting, Goku had finally collected all the Z-fighters. Gohan and his family had saved their lives multiple times, this was the least they could do. Plus, they were family now, even if Videl was barely included in their own private group.
how will we go about this?" Piccolo's gruff voice echoed throughout the floating palace high above within the atmosphere, hundreds of kilometers high. "We cannot sense her KI so she must be hidden in an underground area or a building that blocks KI signals from leaving."
"Bulma," Gohan started, his mind racing with ideas as he focused on his girlfriend. "Can you use the CCS to track for Videl's thermal signature in isolated areas?"
The CCS was a satellite that Doctor Briefs had built and launched over 2 decades ago, capable of tracking people using different methods such as KI signatures, Infrared Signatures, and a couple more. It was used mainly so they were able to track Bulma when she had been kidnapped by a group of mercenaries so their boss could ransom her.
However, the infrared vision wasn't very accurate unless given a specific location such as a range of mountains or a small village.
It could be used to gather only a specific species Infrared signature instead of everything, something he didn't even know was possible.
However, there were many isolated regions in Japan where she could be hidden so it could take some time.
"Yeah kid, I can do it. In the meantime, get me Hercule's phone. I'm pretty sure he has a tracker for Videl ever since she started training with you. I can use that to get a radio signal and intercept them to find her exact location unless they blocked it. The only question is who did this," Bulma said, her face frowning before she shook it off. She needed to get to work and find Videl.
Thermal signatures probably wouldn't appear for the androids, only for Videl and her capturer, unless he was also an Android. All she had to do was go to isolated regions in Japan and-
"Wait," the woman suddenly spoke. "What makes us think she's in an isolated region? It makes more sense to be in a city so they could hide better from things like that," she finished.
"Damnit!" Gohan grit his teeth, smashing his fist into a tree, uprooting it and sending it flying through the atmosphere.
'Ok Satsuki, think. What's a specific way we can locate Videl that no one thinks to block. We can't use telepathy cause we can't find her KI. Telepathy!' Her eyes shot up as her brain started to turn gears. They knew someone who didn't need KI to create a telepathy bond.
"Goku, what if we asked King Kai? Didn't you say that he could contact anyone as long as he knew their general location?" she asked.
"Even if he can't, Shin should be able to do it right? His Psychic abilities are better than any of the other Kai's," Naruto said, his mind working along the same lines as his black-haired beauty.
Shin did owe them a favor for killing off Majin Buu and he had shown to be trustworthy, although he placed the safety of the Universe over the people themselves.
Goku nodded and placed his finger on his forehead, connecting to King Kai's KI signature before teleporting there.
"Ok. Now that that's done, what're we supposed to do?" Yamcha asked, not very keen on doing nothing to help.
Tien, who had thought about where Videl could be, had realized something about the man/woman who kidnapped the woman.
"We need to make a plan," he started, the others looking at him questioningly except for the perceptive ones. He quickly released a strong pulse of KI around him, destroying anything that would be electronic, but wouldn't harm anyone else, before continuing. "The person who kidnapped her isn't like Frieza or Cell or Raditz. They aren't relying on strength. They're using their brains, so we need to go rushing in. Who knows what would happen if we rush into their base and instant-lethal poison gas is released. We might all die except Piccolo, maybe even him. We need to use our head. If what Vegeta said is right, then this guy has probably been watching us closely and knows out routine. We might have already met him or, if he has any, his minions in person," he said, his long explanation finally getting through to the non-thoughtful ones.
"We don't even know how long or who. This guy might know everything about us, our abilities, weaknesses, and who knows what else. I don't think we're in a regular brute force battle anymore. We're in a war of intelligence and information," Satsuki said, her expression quickly angering as she remembered the similarity between this battle and the ones before in the Elemental Nations.
'The Shiki's!' Naruto realized with a start. The siblings had been oddly interested in the three Saiyan, more than what normal humans would be and more than at Videl.
"Um, guys, I have been to check something out. I might've found a lead."
Naruto created a clone that blasted out of the lookout, heading straight for Satan City.
He knew the address, having been invited to come over, but he never went.
Knocking on the door, he waited for the inhabitants to open the door.
It didn't take long, but the sight that greeted him was surprising. The two Shiki brothers had answered the door together, tears cascading down from their eyes and dripping onto the mat.
Their golden amber eyes widened and they quickly welcomed him in.
"Naruto, Kori is missing and we don't know where she is. We were trying to find her. Do you know where she is?"
Naruto shook his head, informing them both that he didn't know and that Videl had also vanished. He quickly left after that, but made sure to tell them not to spread the news too much.
The black-haired teen gasped as he held his chest, said organ contracting sharply, causing difficulty in breathing. He winced, gasping desperately for oxygen to fill his lungs.
Anger swelled up within, his incapability of "swallowing" the air at the current moment fueling it like oxygen to fire.
His chest wasn't the only area that was currently screaming in agony. It was joined by his other vital organs.
His brain pounded around his head, a migraine coming forth consequently.
His mouth let out a scream of pain as he clutched his head, trying to stop his mind from bouncing off the wall for some reason.
His vision began to dim, his peripheral vision growing blurry, the darkness surrounding his body and swallowing it up in its hollow shell of freezing temperature.
Even though his brain had begun to malfunction and his thoughts became a community in unintelligible pain, his conscious could feel warmth on his chest and an incomprehensible amount of digested material climbing up his stomach and throat.
He swallowed the vomit within, not allowing it to touch his tongue and clutched the right of his chest.
Warm, sticky liquid stuck onto the palms of his hands. He felt around a bit, his brain not understanding the reason for the blood. He could feel incisions on his body, allowing for the liquid to flow from within to the world outside.
His final thought, before he could leave the world of conscious and slip into the warm embrace of dreams, was used to conclude what he found.
'Blood'
"Dr. It appears that Tracker 7-A is reporting in. The poison seems to only affect one of the targets, sir. It may be a difference in diet or genealogy between men and woman," the monotonous voice echoed throughout the dark base.
Gero, who had given his attention to the robot, grinned in satisfaction, his mouth twisting as his eyes glowed, pleased by the result of the poison that he had created.
"Excellent. Sent Tao to 7-A's location and eliminate the target. Make sure he understands that the body is to be completely irradiated and no trace is left behind by any means behind such as KI, Thermal, Radiation, or Electromagnetic," the white-haired man ordered, his voice commanding as the reporting robot bowed slightly as his subtle dismissal and left to tell her fellow Android his new objective.
After his dismissal of his assistant, the Red Ribbon Army's current commander-in-chief delved deeply into his thoughts.
'So, the poison is finally starting to take effect. It's been a day, but not all of them were taken out. It can't be the difference between their biology, one of the others so still a male and the same age to boot. Damnit! I should've tested it with the food. Their body probably used their stored food/energy to create the bacteria's to properly fight back against the killing agents. However, that means that the food isn't being stored as KI, so their powers should be weaker. The poison is long lasting and customized. No one should be able to figure out the cure, at least not for a while. The agents spread through direct skin to blood contact, useful since the skin should have incisions, big ones too. The poison is effective and the test seems to be doing well. Within the week, all three targets should become enveloped by the biological virus and it should easily spread to the others. By the end of this month, in 10 days time, they should all be dead. I still have the Satan Girl with me as a double back up plan. The magnetic fields, opsins, and electrodes should all be able to control her thoroughly if she is to be rescued and my poison prove cured. I should allow Tao to 'rape' the girl. The psychological effects that my enemies will suffer when someone so close becomes raped will cause anger, especially to Gohan's pathetic emotions.'
Goku had returned from King Kai's planet, having taken longer due to the God's advice that he needed to create a plan not just against brute force, but also intelligence.
The others had also reached the same conclusion but there were many factors that they could not include. They didn't have a plan.
They didn't know what kind of weapons, biological or physical or chemical, he would use and what types. There were too many unknown variables. They couldn't rush it.
They needed a sacrifice. Fortunately, they did have a 'person' that didn't have the biology of theirs that could defend against it.
While Android 18 did have human organs such as organs that allowed her to reproduce, think, pump blood, breath, digest, etc.
However, her metabolism and digestion were completely different from humans. She had technology built within that produced, for a lack of better terms, 'Super-Enzymes' that allowed her to easily break down the polymers and monomers she digested into their simplest form before it reached the small intestine.
As such, the immune system would quickly reach the invaders and annihilate them before it got a chance to attack anything from within.
However, 18 was a friend and she had emotions. She was alive.
Thankfully, Bulma had saved the data she and her father had gathered from Android 16 and created multiple pseudo-androids, all with no emotions and basically robots that had been implanted with artificial human organs. There were also androids with Saiyan organs. While it didn't perfectly create the biological system of either race, it would allow for sacrificial pieces that could be used in times of need.
While the scientific definition allowed them to be alive, being capable of producing biomolecules, having organs, organ systems, and other things such as what allowed biotic things to live, they missed one important aspect.
They had no thought, no emotion, instinct. Their eyes were robotic and used to analyze everything from an objective point, their sense of smell couldn't tell the difference between sweet and foul, their hearing process only allowed them to specify certain sounds, they had no taste, and they had no sense of touch.
This was useful in many cases, such as the current problem.
After their activation and instructions in which they were ordered to never retreat from unless given orders from the registered voice commanders/visual respondents,she set them off.
It wasn't a sight you saw everyday. Nearly a dozen of orange-haired, fair skinned, green-armor-wearing androids all flying in on direction simply to lead an assault attack on the base of an unknown enemy.
"Dr. Gero, our sensors are picking up radio signals that are not collinear with ours," the metallic assistant spoke.
'So, they have finally found the girl's location. Sending artificial androids to scout ahead are you?'
"What is the strength level determined for each individual?" Gero asked.
"They all seem to have a consistent power level of 300,000 SI and their count is 10."
'3,000,000 combined? Are they insulting my genius?! Fools, pay the price for your arrogance," he angrily thought.
"Release unit 1 to lead a fatal assault. Turn off the biological defenses of the base. Allow for 1 robot to go through and reach the Satan Girl before destroying it with the Laser Cannon," he ordered.
The robot bowed at his orders before going off to complete her orders.
Unit 1, a group of androids counting up to 12 total with a power level of 10,000,000 each, were all released from their stationary base at the cave they had hidden Videl in.
Even though they were much stronger than their opponents, they had all been destroyed by the opposing androids, just on orders.
They did, however, carry on the rest of their suicidal attack and used a self destruct bomb to completely decimate/vaporize nine out of the ten androids they were supposed to destroy.
It didn't take long for the line Android to enter the base where Videl had been located.
After quickly flying through the long hallway, the Android arrived at a large hole that expanded from the sides. At the edge of the large room, Videl was within a large tank, completely naked with bruises all over her body and sinking in water.
There was a lone oxygen mask that was connected to the tube, allowing for her to breath while submerged in the greenish blue liquid..
The visual was instantly transmitted to the visual feeder on Bulma's holographic-transmitting tv.
The vision didn't last long as a bright red light dashed across the room instantaneously, completely disintegrating the robot.
Gohan, who had seen the battered form of his girlfriend, shook in anger, barely restraining his KI from acting up. Some escaped his mental barrier and started to crawl around him, swirling from the bottom of his heel to the peak of his hair.
Black flickered between golden yellow and jet black, his eyes going from obsidian to the raging teal eyes of a demi-Saiyan who had gained powers that many gods of the universe couldn't compete with.
Emotion overpowered rationality and he flickered for an instant before his form slowly faded from his current position.
'Fuck!' "Let's go!" Goku shouted as they chased after the enraged Demi-Saiyan.
Done! Damn, that took longer than usual. Well, anyways, info time I guess?
King Kai should know everything on this side on the universe, but he never said anything to help Goku after Frieza. Not the androids or Babidi. Weird right? So instead, I just changed it a bit, not much. Just don't need KI to find telepathic signals, not when you're a psychic.
Every single fucking scene took so much thought. I had to think about every situation and reason through why they couldn't just blow the place to hell.
Oh well, I got to the point where I wanted to be. Got a little bit of Saiyan depth here, a bit of action there, some mystery solving and creating, and a hint of intelligence and logic to create a pretty ok blend of 5k words that allow for the plot to move forward.
I apologize that sometimes, my writing style suddenly turns out so differently I'm so used to typing formally such as this that it's kind of muscle memory now. However, when I'm actually trying to truly blend together specific words for wordplay, or just when I want to, it turns out so much better than what mine normally is.
Anyways, let's get to the reviews:
Guest: Excuse me but can u message skelo and see where he/she put the rest of his/hers story majin naruto buu
Me: I tried and I failed.
StarGazer2326: You keep mentioning Satsuki's tail does Naruto also have his tail? And if he does are you going to have them unlock super saiyan four? And since your not doing pan until after super will you have Naruto and Satsuki have a child instead since their relationship is even further along at this point then gohan and videl's canon relationship at this point in time?
Me: Yes, they both have tails. I placed it in the first episode, but because I wasn't a very good writer back then, I rewrote the complete thing, so basically, nothing from the original chapter stayed that much that was actually mine. For example, in the original first chapter, Gohan didn't know about Naruto's and Satsuki's past, since it wasn't really necessary. However, instead of the brown ones, I made them black, although it doesn't really affect anything in the story.
No GT or events within happen here. I placed a poll so that people could decide if they wanted Gt or Super, and Super won, so I am taking the Super Route. That means no Super Saiyan 4 or Golden Oozaru, sorry if I disappointed there, but I don't want this story to be unbearably long, and GT will make it so.
Right now, Naruto and Satsuki will not have children. You see, right now, even if they don't know it, there will be people coming to threaten Earth, and they don't want their kids exposed to everything they had too. Yes, they have the Dragon Balls to fix everything, but even if you did, the events would be traumatizing, even with the DB. They will have one, cause I'm hoping to have a final epilogue, maybe shorter or longer than usual, don't know, that will show everything from a few years later.
Although I did place in a scene that they have a sexual relationship, it's just that for now. Also, did that ever make sense to you? 1 year after the events of Buu, Pan was born, so that means that shy, nerdy Gohan had sex with Videl within 3 months of their relationship, after just starting out, in Japan. And I think that it happened more then once, since it's not very likely that you'll get pregnant after the first time, unless the Saiyan genes help somehow.
But everything considered, it doesn't make sense for 2 orphans who were raised in a time of war with traumatizing experiences to want to have a kid, well they WANT one, but it won't be safe for the child. They don't want their own child to suffer through that. They won't be like Chichi where they won't let the child train, cause fighting is in it's blood, but they want it to be free of death and pain, just fighting for fun, like kids. Of course, they don't want to force the child to fight either, because look at what would have happened to Gohan if Naruto didn't interfere. Look at Canon. My favorite character, one of the people with the most potential born, becomes so pathetic in Super, and kind of sad and depressing in Saiyaman arc, which confused me.
He is literally using Ginyu Force poses. WHY?! One of their members BROKE HIS FUCKING NECK! THEIR BOSS KILLED OF TRILLIONS, IF NOT QUADRILLIONS OF BEINGS, so WHY in the name of flying fuck would he use his second, maybe third, most traumatizing experience?
KamiKageRyuuketsu: Looks like your a new generation piece of shit because I can tell for a fucking fact your not of my generation your immature childish annoying pathetic writing style shows your one of those piece of shit trashy iPhone genre/generation kids and your all annoying as hell and below me and not worth my time your all pathetic get on my level bitch. Fucking faggot ass pencil dick videl fanboy low life queer trash go kill yourself bitch boy
Me: yep, I've started multiple times that I'm 14, nearly 15. I don't really think you have the right to call some immature and childish for them simply writing in the U.S, you know, the whole First Amendment? I can simply return that seeing as your telling someone to commit suicide for writing. Trust me, my writing not being satisfactory to you has no meaning to me. I've considered and contemplated it with things far larger than something as minor and pathetic excuse as writing style. How does writing style become affected by the type of device you have? I don't think I have the time to bother going down to such a level that if I jumped down, I would die due to old age.
(Anyone find it stupid that this guy insults me using the words given above from himself all the while having bad grammar, style, formally, and all the other jazz?)
Power scale:
Sorry if I came off as a prick.
I will do a better job explaining My reasonings.
Toriyama stated in 2014 interview that Super Saiyan 2 and Super Saiyan 3 are powered up variations of Super Saiyan.
Super Saiyan 2 and Super Saiyan 3 or simply powered variations of the Super Saiyan full power.
Super Saiyan grade 2 and Super Saiyan grade 3 are power up variations of the unmastered Super Saiyan.
Toriyama himself stated that I'm fully mastered Super Saiyan what surpass Super Saiyan 3.
Also according to the GT Files or Sources SS4 Is Only called SS4 out of convenience. It is aa Different line because Super Saiyan 4 transcends both of the Super Saiyan Branch and The Oozaru Branch.
Despite Super Saiyan full power being called Super Saiyan grade 4 ,it makes no sense to me since it's a better Mastery of the form
Therefore Super Saiyan 2 should be called Super Saiyan grade 4 at Super Saiyan 3 should be SS Grade 5
Frieza golden form is actually named ultimate evolution... innocence Super Saiyan 4 is the ultimate evolution of a Saiyan... now if you're thinking Digimon that would be it
For example
For Lines,
Great Ape is Evolution
Super Saiyan is Super Evolution
Golden Great Ape is Incomplete Ultimate Evolution
Super Saiyan 4/Ultimate Form is True Ultimate Evolution.
Me: Ok, this simplification makes much more sense, no offense intended. Anyways, using this to answer your previous statement, which I forgot so I think it's the one where Gohan training would make SSJ3 obsolete. I'm not trying to go by power level, it's just a little game I like to play, similar to wordplay and the pronoun have. However, I don't know if Gohan would have gained much power. There's a lot to consider, such as his personality, morals, guidance, and what he was told to do by Chi-Chi. I don't know if he would have time at all. I also believe that he would hit a limiter. I know that saiyans have surpassed their limits many times over, but they, like everyone, have limits, even if breakable. For example, every grade increases muscle mass, and also speed. I'm guessing that SSJ3, and all the ones before it, have increased speed over muscle so the ratio is far more balanced. Anyways, you are right though. If any of the form a had been accurately mastered, then they would be much stronger than their canon selves. It's what I'm using. I'm having Vegeta and Goku, instead of looking for anew transformation, are trying to learn how to control their KI, including their forms. I mean, Piccolo became so powerful even tho Vegeta had much more physical training, Piccolo kept up with his rate. (Future spoiler) So, how powerful would Goku be if he had mastered KI control, had the power of 5 SSJ3's within?
21HyperA1985: I am looking forward to chapter 18 and I hope Naruto gains the dragon summoning contract.
Me: Wrong story bro.