Hello everyone. As no one may have noticed, and I made it intentionally so, I never mentioned Naruto during the end sessions of the last chapter. What gives? Well, long story short? He's dead! BOOM! MIND BLOWN! No one can accuse me of favoring Naruto over Satsuki or Gohan, can they? Well, you could, but you'd be wrong! Then again, I couldn't really kill off Gohan, so it was between these two. Anyways, If you wish to know how he died before reading this chapter, then I suggest you go from the end of the Buu Saga until now and read carefully between the lines and read the author notes. Let's just say that this did happen intentionally so and it was planned out since I created Gero's plan. It happened somewhere between then, just look at all the clues scattered throughout. (Hint Hint) Yeah, remember where I had that scene where a black-haired guy died after becoming sick and throwing up blood? Well, that was Naruto if you're still clueless.
So anyway, after that shocking factor, we come into where we left off, but thing is, now, we have to points of focus, maybe three. I'll let you figure it out for yourself but be warned.
Anyways! *claps hands cheerfully* onto the next chapter!
Satsuki Briefs had always been a cautious woman, both in her previous life as well as the current one she was living in. It was necessary for survival and she had practiced caution since the day of the Uchiha Massacre.
She was also observant, quick to notice anything that occurred around her and to anyone she knew, analyzing everything she could about them, such as tone, body language, the body itself, way of speech, and other signals that could give away anything about them.
So, when she noticed that Naruto had soon disappeared after his clone had gone to the Shiki household, she grew suspicious.
She couldn't find Naruto's KI signature. It wasn't hard to reach the logical conclusion that he was dead. Logically speaking. Satsuki wasn't exactly the most logical person.
She was furious. Her mate, the most important person in her life, seemed to have disappeared off the face of the universe.
'Satsuki!' the ravenette heard Naruto's mental voice bounce inside her head, causing her to look up randomly, expecting his physical presence even if her mind knew he wasn't there.
'It's important, you need to get to Bulma now! Gohan, you, and I might've been poisoned. I'm with King Kai, it was a lethal one. King Kai told me that he knows that since I have it and that because it's a biological attack, he thinks you are too, as well as Gohan. Hurry, I don't know how long it will take to take effect!" Naruto shouted through the telepathic link, Satsuki tentatively listening, knowing this was important, but her mind was on something else.
'He died,' her thoughts echoed throughout her brain. Her body grew cold as she felt an extreme ball of emptiness weigh on her chest, causing a deep physical, phantom pain, leaving her breathless.
She couldn't focus on anything else, not Naruto mentally urging her to go to her mother to get a medical check-up, not her body beginning to fail as her knees buckled, making her fall on them as she fell back, her lower knees bent under her thighs as her eyes glossed over.
Naruto's death wasn't confirmed previously and she had held onto some irrational hope of his survival and just being in a location that suppressed the movement of KI.
They had never died, neither of them, ever. They had witnessed the death of those close to them, but never each other. He had been her lifeline for so long, when her life had been in a blaze of chaos and emotions as she learned the true definition of betrayal and manipulation. A blaze that he himself has caused, even if he had never desired to set her upon the emotional journey throughout the few years of their teenage life in the Elemental Nations.
He had also been the only one to kidnap her away from the darkness that had reigned around them both as they attempted to control their lives and the darkness surrounding them. He had been the only one loyal to her, never betraying her, never backstabbing her, always holding onto her as they went on to experience the hell life threw at them while attempting to control their fate.
And now, he was dead, gone to the next world by himself, without her by his side.
Her vacant eyes had a faded black to them, contrasting to the crimson blood flowing through the edges of her eyes and running down the side of her face, dripping onto the ground like tears would, parallel to the blood from her mouth, whose quantity had risen to larger heights.
She didn't notice it, she couldn't focus on it, not on her senses and not on her logic, that the dragon balls could revive him, only on the sole fact that her love had died.
She didn't notice as her body began to give in to the biological poison inserted into her, her lungs collapsing, her stomach and chest contracting, her limbs weakening.
She didn't notice her body dying, only the death of Naruto.
"Dammit!" Naruto growled as he hit the wall of the house with the side of his fist, the hit not doing anything after the ruler of the northern quadrant of the universe had upgraded the material after the amount of Saiyans that came to him so often.
Naruto quickly left the small, dense planet, ready to pick up his girl from the pickup station at the entrance to the Otherworld. Before he left, he asked King Kai to tell his brother, but King also cut him off, telling him he knew what he had to do.
Due to their direct role in killing Majin Buu, one of the biggest non-authorized destroyers of the celestial bodies within the universe, all Saiyans that were alive at the moment on Earth, as well as a few specific others, were granted a body in the World of the Dead if they were to pass.
When he arrived at the pickup station, traversing the area with Instant Transmission, he flew up to King Yemma's desk.
He greeted the red-skinned ogre with a polite bow, greeting the King of Ogre's formally.
"Hello Yemma, I'm the emissary for King Kai to escort Satsuki Briefs to his planet," he said, clear enough to be heard, but quiet enough to not give himself and any other being a headache.
"Satsuki Briefs, Satsuki Briefs, Satsuki Briefs, Satsuki Briefs, Satsuki Briefs," the horned ogre muttered as he searched through the massive list on his desk, using the alphabetical list to find the name of the girl so he could make sure she wasn't going to hell.
After 10 seconds of searching, he found the name of the woman and using the picture of the girl, he summoned her to the front of the line of souls.
Her appearance, compared to the normal floating, white clouds called "souls," was apparent, but Naruto could see that she was still in shock.
It didn't take long for King Yemma to "judge" the woman, knowing that since she had a body, she was to be sent to heaven unless requested by a Kai, which was obvious due to the presence of the teenage Saiyan holding her bridal style who he realized had teleported as soon as he got the approval of the judge.
Sighing at the impatient manner of the Saiyan, he continued to judge the souls of whether they should go to hell or be allowed access to heaven.
It didn't take long for the former blond to grab his lover and bring her to the small, dense planet of the Northern Kai, still holding her close to his chest, his gaze locked into her blank, glossed eyes that held no thought.
"What happened to her?" the blue Kaioshin inquired, concerned over the Saiyan lifeless eyes and motionless body.
Naruto sighed, sorrow pacing his voice as he answered the man.
"Satsuki has a lot of flaws. Most of them are things that a lot of humans find unacceptable, such as her not really caring about society's opinion of her, so anything that others wouldn't do out of fear, she doesn't really have a problem with it. It's not like she would go out naked or anything, but it still withstands. One of her most fatal weaknesses, which we both share, is how much we love each other," Naruto began, smiling sadly as he remembered all the times when the other had been hurt and they had gone ballistic, barely better than a berserker set on revenge.
"Thing is, when she realized I died, her mind went into deep shock. Everything she held, it's all been thrown out the window, including logic. While she possesses knowledge of Shenron, she completely forgot about him. She thought that since I died, she would never meet me again, her mind and her heart couldn't handle that stress, so she locked herself up. She's in what could be considered a coma. However, she isn't aware of anything around us. If our situations were reversed, I would be the same way, and so would she. I died first so I still held my logic. It's a weakness we really need to destroy, but no matter how much either of us have tried, we never could," the black-haired man spoke, his eyes still holding onto the raven-haired beauty as he later her on his lap.
"How did you to get this far? I've spent time looking over Goku after he first came to me for training and when he had you, I started looking after you as well as Gohan. I've seen quite a few of your interactions with her, and no, I didn't invade your privacy, but as far as I know, as soon as you two met, you two have had more love for each other than that of many beings throughout this universe. It doesn't make sense. When did you have time to develop such love for each other? Your families may have forgotten, but you two have only been alive for just under 12 years, yet, at 4, those were your affections," the observer of the northern universe pondered, looking at him with a sharp gaze.
Naruto wasn't surprised at the perception of his father's friend. He was the deity responsible for overseeing a fourth of the immense universe and he had gained intellect and wisdom through his lifetimes of experience. There was no point in withholding the truth.
He narrowed his eyes at the man, his voice suddenly gaining a cold edge.
"Know this, King Kai, that while I do consider you a friend, even though I don't know you very well, my story with Satsuki here is a private one and no one besides Gohan knows it, but I will tell you. There isn't a point in lying to you, as I'm fairly sure you can easily find out through methods I don't know. Satsuki and I've lived a previous life, and here, if you will, we are reincarnations. We hold out memories from before. That is all I will tell you, ever. I don't like threatening people. It's meaningless most of the time, so I won't. I merely ask that you hold this secret to your grave," Naruto told him, his voice still holding a hostile tone.
King Kai nodded and promptly responded. "I will hold your secret and I will not expose your privacy. However, I will give you a warning for the future if this is your weakness, as well as any of your family. There is a being out there called Beerus and he holds the title of God of Destruction. He is, as I know, the second most powerful being of this universe. I have no doubt that he will eventually come to Earth, whether it be your generation or the next. He has already come once to cause the extinction of dinosaurs, although some went into hiding so not all of them," Kind Kai mused, unaware of Naruto's shocked eyes. Dinosaurs had been said to be extinct 65 million years ago, although they had living proof that they weren't. How old was this Beerus guy and how powerful must he be to gain the title of "God of Destruction.
"Anyways," King Kai continued, killing his musing to get back to the serious topic. "Beerus is easily capable of destroying this entire universe and he would survive it," King Kai said, a tinge of fear overlaying his voice. Naruto could tell that the Universal Level of destruction may be an exaggeration, even if not by much. After all, fear does that to you.
"Beerus is capable of completely destroying anyone on Earth at this moment. The comparison between Vegito and Beerus is the same as a Hercule and Frieza," he continued, his gaze striking Naruto's face who had a look of pure astonishment. He couldn't blame the kid. After all, he had just been told that Beerus was millions of times stronger than anything they have ever encountered and that was no exaggeration.
"How can we possibly deal with a threat like that?" Naruto growled as he finally realized the implication of the Kaioshin. If this Beerus did ever come to Earth, then the possibility of Earth's destruction and its inhabitants were high!
"Thing is that you can't deal with it. Beerus's personality varies, but at the beginning, he is polite but he is quick to anger, even over trivial things such as Hide-and-Seek. He is not a child, nor does he behave like one, Naruto. He simply has a short temper and is very confident and definitely arrogant of his own power and he had every right to be. He does not tolerate even the slightest sliver of disrespect and will erase you from existence if you annoy him enough. However, he is also intolerable of cowards and he will most likely kill you if you are a coward. As long as you show respect to him and to yourself, you are alright in his book, but remember, he has a short temper. The two most important things you have to remember about Beerus is his love. He loves cuisines and he loves the thrill of a challenge. If food is even slightly greasy, he will kill you and your planet," King Kai finished.
Naruto could now understand the terror that the Kai held within his eyes. The possibility of even making the smallest of mistakes could result in the destruction of an entire Planet, if not the galaxy and there was no going back.
The dread the Saiyan felt now far eclipsed anything he had ever felt before, even his mother.
Naruto," the man's voice echoed throughout the small planet as he looked at Naruto with a final piece of advice. "I suggest that you do not anger him and warn all of your children of this as well, including your families and theirs as well. I know your Saiyan pride will not allow you to bow before anyone, not even a god, but I hope to Zeno that you don't disrespect him. I would tell all the others about this as well," he finished.
"I will," Naruto nodded, knowing that Beerus was a threat that ranged on a level far above anyone else. "But not now. We need to deal with Gero and while I'm sure we can win, we need to be careful of casualties. After all, Shenron does have limits and I doubt that Porunga will also us to revive the dead as his only duty," he finished, King Kai nodding to his logic. "But first, I need to 'wake' Satsuki up. I also have some questions after this," he said, focusing his attention back onto her.
"So, how is this going to work?" King Kai asked, sitting down next to him as he looked at the female Saiyan.
"I don't know. While I know what caused it and I can assume a few things, this hasn't actually ever happened before. I have no idea how to get her out of this coma," he admitted, furious that his lack of knowledge caused him to be useless in the current situation.
"Why don't you try to reach her mindscape?" King Kai asked.
Naruto nodded, telling the older man that that was his first idea.
Placing his pointer and middle finger on her forehead, he began to concentrate on his energy, commanding it to take his conscious and transfer it to the mindscape of the lifeless woman.
Unless you are erased from existence, whether by a deity or through death after dying, you are allowed to keep your mind, even if you are dead and a soul cloud.
Therefore, Satsuki still held her mind, although she herself had disconnected from it completely. Now, he simply needed to find her in the scape and get her to come back, to gain conscious within her own mind.
Naruto looked around the area, seeing nothing but darkness as a black void surrounded the entire mindscape.
The mindscape reflected across the person and right now, Satsuki was lifeless, so reflexively, her mindscape had shaped itself to a dark void of nothingness.
He began to walk, using his KI to make hundreds of clones with minimal KI, each spreading out in separate directions to find the woman he loved.
When one of the clones did find her, curled around her own body as images of Naruto surrounded her. He spiked his KI to attract the other versions of himself, signaling his findings. It didn't take long before one, who had obviously merged with all the other clones to arrive faster, finally reached the location.
Going towards the black-haired man, he soon merged, discarded as the whole being walked towards the raven-haired Saiyan.
He gently kneeled down behind her, wrapping his arms around her stomach, pulling her closer to his chest, halting her sobs of sorrow and causing her to tense.
The black-eyed woman looked behind her slowly, gradually seeing his unique hair, facial features, and eventually, him.
"N-Naruto?" her whisper of disbelief echoed through his ears, causing his chest to suddenly gain weight as he felt a pang of hurt.
He looked at her, turning her body fully around before laying her on his lap, holding her head to his chest while gazing at her eyes.
He allowed a smile to grace his face, bitterly happy to see his lover, but furious of the state that he had left her in.
"Hai, Suki-Hime," he began, using the nickname he had given her so long ago to set her mind at ease.
Hearing the light pounding on his chest, he realized that Satsuki had put her head down so he couldn't see her sob at her own sorrow.
He pulled her up, closer to his neck and placed his lips near hers, stroking her back gently as he whispered to her.
"Suki-Hime, I love you." He gently blew across her ears, dipping his lips down to meet her own.
"You're dead?" He heard her questioning whisper as she tried to comprehend why she could see him. "Am I?" She asked, less quietly than normal but still well below a statement.
He nodded, sighing sadly as he held her closer, still pissed off that he could do nothing to prevent her death.
"What happened?" He heard her question, her voice slowly coming back to her original tone.
Naruto began to tell her the events that had occurred over the past few days, including some of his theories on what occurred.
Goku was forced to stop, a telepathic voice from the Otherworld echoed throughout his head, carrying the voice of his Sensei and friend.
'Goku, I've some bad news. Satsuki and Naruto are both dead, and if you don't hurry, Gohan will soon meet the same fate. I need you to restrain him quickly and take him to your blue-haired friends home so he can get diagnosed. I'll tell her the rest of the instructions later, now do what I tell you!'
Goku didn't disobey, knowing the personality of the Kai, and quickly transformed into the next stage of power, an Ascended Super Saiyan, and flew past Gohan and into his path.
Using the shock caused of his actions, he quickly punched Gohan in the gut.
Gohan bent over in pain, not knowing that his father had sent a spike of KI inside to cause a second of paralysis.
That instant gave Goku enough time to knock Gohan out with an accurate chop to his neck.
Goku, without answering Piccolo's question or the other's eyes of confusion, threw Gohan over his back before teleporting to Bulma's lab, where he quickly also brought the woman from her previous position in the lookout.
The emotion of rage quickly quelled from Bulma's face when she saw Gohan unconscious, as well as the serious and narrowed face of the first Super Saiyan in the previous millennium.
"Goku, what's wrong with Gohan?" she asked before she was interrupted by a mental voice echoing throughout her mind.
'Bulma, King Kai here. Gohan's been poisoned by a biological virus. We don't know the basics of it, but this just killed Naruto and Satsuki. Gohan will also be killed in a couple of hours, but you need to quickly analyze it and find a cure!' He yelled at her unconsciously, his panic of the possible death of his 3 best fighters in the northern quadrant of the universe finally coming out.
Bulma held in multiple emotions and reactions that had occurred within her throughout the speech just given to her. Anger and sorrow at her first child's birth. Sadness at Naruto's death, sympathy for the two when they realized the other had died, wrath at not being told sooner and not discovering it herself. There were even more emotions that had been placed, but she was quick to ignore those, knowing that time was of the essence.
Gohan needed to live.
"Goku!" She yelled at the powered down Saiyan, who had let go of his transformation when he realized that any attempts of helping Bulma would be detrimental with the enormous strength that he possessed against the weak durability of many lab items that he might need to give her.
"Get my phone from over there," she pointed towards a desk holding an Xphone, courtesy of Capsule Corporation. "and contact the person named Gurahamu Bizuri and tell him you need his current location. Then, bring him here. I'll have some supplies ready for him." Bulma ordered, making the powerful Saiyan blur towards the desk and gently lifted up the cellular device.
The call was quickly made, sending out electrical/radio waves towards the routed location of Hope College.
"Hello, Dr. Gur-" the man on the other side of the call was quickly by the quick voice of Goku.
"Mr. Bizuri, I need your location right now. Dr. Bulma Briefs wants me to be there as soon as possible!"
"Excuse me, but what do you need so urgently?" The other man asked calmly on the other side of the phone.
"Gurahamu, I swear if you don't give Goku your location!" Bulma yelled as she continued to gather supplies for the nuclear physicist's soon-to-be arrival.
Hearing the urgent and commanding tone of the CEO of Capsule Corps, Gurahamu changed his mood and mind to the serious conversations and action that may take place.
"I'm at Indiana," He told the man on the phone, knowing that Bulma could hear him.
"It's that way," Bulma said, pointing slightly above Northwest in the direction she knew was Indiana due to her photographic memory of every state/region, and country on the planet.
"Bulma, there are nearly 9 million people in that direction," Goku told her blankly, silently telling her she needed to be more specific or something. While it was true that he could sense KI across the universe, he needed the general direction and a familiar KI. It was similar to when he got to Namek, but this time, he needed to find one person's KI, which at the time, he didn't know. It wasn't like he could just appear in Indiana from thin air and expect to find one man in a place of millions.
"Tch!" Bulma clucked her tongue and quickly grabbed a Saiyan Scouter from her counter.
"C.I, locate Dr. Gurahamu Bizuri, approximate location: Indiana, United States. Notre Dame University," Bulma finished with a scowl as she began to prepare nano-bots to insert inside of the Saiyan so she could find the virus.
Goku soon gained a holographic visual location of Notre Dame and quickly began to search for KI signatures that seemed to be slightly higher than the rest, even though it was minuscule. After all, intellect did add a little bit of KI into someone's being as they had once discovered.
Goku instantly teleported himself to the location given within his head while leaving behind a Goku-shaped vacuum that was instantly replaced with the air molecules used by Goku to move.
Soon, he appeared next to Gurahamu Bizuri, confirmed by seeing the phone next to his ear.
"What the-" the brunette called out as he saw the man appear before him from thin air. He was cut off quickly when the man disappeared again, even though he himself didn't realize that he had as well until he was reconstructed in the slightly familiar lab of Capsule Corps.
Gurahamu was an adult male, 178 centimeters (5' 10") in height and slightly chubby, weighing in at 73 kilograms (160 lbs). He had light brown hair, styles in a typical inward shifted fringes.
"Gurahamu, I need your help. My godson's been poisoned by an unknown substance and we can't figure it out. I'll explain everything else later. Can you help me find out what it is and a cure for it?" Bulma asked.
"You realize I'm a Nuclear Physicist right?" he asked the blue-haired genius.
"Yes, but you're also one of the best Molecular Physicist/Chemist in the world," she told him, trying to get him back to what he used to be, an expert analyzer of synthetic and natural poisons to be more specific.
"Fine," he exclaimed before cracking his knuckles, the calm 28-year-old cracked his knuckles, excited to perform an analysis on a mysterious, synthetic toxin. He let his excitement show through a small grin as he walked towards the computer placed near Gohan.
The computer's sole purpose was to be the receiver for the video waves being sent back through the nanobots Bulma had previously injected into the young saiyan's bloodstream.
'Bulma, focus on the lungs and heart. I found the most pain in my chest so the poison is most likely their. Also check the brain so he doesn't die from brain death,' Naruto's voice came as a surprise to Bulma, not having heat from him for quite a while, but she quickly followed his recommendation, informing him that she had already checked the brain.
Checking the brain for prevention/possibility of brain death was one of the first things she had started to do, as that was one of the quickest ways to die without anyone knowing. It didn't matter if she could save the lung if the brain died. There was a reason the brain and heart was one of the first organs that developed when a child is given birth, whether that baby was human or not.
Redirecting her nanobots to the circulatory system in the chest area, Bulma quickly began to search for any DK-Cells from the immune system. DK-Cells were the upgraded version of the B-Cells present within the human immune system. T-Cells were also 'replaced' by XU-Cells.
It was powered mainly through the KI of a Saiyan due to them having an surplus supply to use for other functions of the body besides fighting.
Due to this, the organelles within the cells gained more energy through the mitochondria present within the cells. This allowed them to perform their functions more efficiently due to not needing to form as much ATP and NADPH energy.
The nanobots continued their search for any lymphocytes present within the teenager's body, finally arriving at the chest.
It didn't take long for them to find the white blood cells fighting off a foreign substance but Bulma easily noticed that Gohan's body was losing to the substance.
Directing her nanobots to the foreign substance, she made them take a sample of the material, presented through the right side of the large computer screen on their left.
"Holy Kami!" Gurahamu exclaimed after a few minutes of looking at the molecular structure of the virus.
He turned around to Bulma, his eyes eager to tell her about what he just discovered, but as his gaze passed through the other male and the unconscious teenager, his mood and tone became somber.
"This isn't a virus Dr. Bulma, it's a new form of poison, one I've never seen, not even close. From what I've understood, this seems to specifically target this boy seeing as it attacked the immune system first. It's almost as if it's alive. This was designed to terminate the circulatory and nervous system as well as the brain!"
Damn, I really gotta crunch out these deadlines don't I? Damn, October really messed me up. Well, hopefully, I can get back on schedule.
Anyways, I know I placed a lot of stuff here that hasn't been explained and things that people may not know about. If you have any questions regarding the scientific or anything really, just PM me or ask in the review and I'll try to answer in PM if you have an account.
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Ki Control and 5 Super Saiyan 3s?
Well Based On Power Scaling And Statements.. Base Form Gotenks after Training in the Chamber Surpassed SS3 Goku.
Even if we Stupidly Lowball Base Gotenks.. The Guides stated Base Gotenks after the Hyperbolic time chamber Surpass SS2 Vegeta and The Others.
Therefore Lowballed Base Gotenks is Easily Stronger than Buu Saga SS2 Goku.
Let me use Low balled Power scaling Calcs For You.
Goku:
Base: 1
SS1: 50
SS2: 100
SS3: 400
Gotenks(Before Training)
Base:8
SS1: 400
After Training:
Base: Over 100
SS1: Over 5000
SS2: Over 10,000
SS3: Over 40,000
Ultimate Gohan is at least 50% Stronger than SS3 Gotenks.
Ultimate Gohan: Over 60,000
Therefore With just Lowballed Calculations Ultimate Gohan is easily over 150 Times More Powerful than SS3 Goku.
Not Base Goku.. Ultimate Gohan is 150 Times More powerful than SS3 Goku.
Now Think think about Revival of F Gohan... As A SS1 He Stomped Ginyu Tagoma..lHe Even Stated Tagoma Rivals Ultimate Gohan.. Therefore A Rusty Base Gohan in Revival of F Would Stomp Buu Saga SS3 Goku.
Me: And seeing as I made them even stronger here, along with the changed SSj2 multiplier, their even stronger. Damn, SSJ3 powered SSG will be powerful as fuck compared to the anime. At least 8 times.
ruE 2018: What the fuck did I just read?
Me: I don't understand your question? Can you explain what you mean?
KamiKageRyuuketsu: cannon fanboy trash burn in the lowest pits of hell low life. your videl fanboy trash, videl is not and never was, or has been or ever will be stronger than Krillin, and I hate Krillin but I despise fanboy bitches who think someone as weak as that pathetic human being with the last name satan could ever amount to anything hell his daughter is pathetic trash. she is just as pathetic as Hinata Hyuga and her fanboys. and they are low life trash.
Me: *Sigh* Okay! First: While I don't want to push my beliefs on anyone, I'm an atheist so I don't believe in hell so… Second of all, Videl is stronger than Krillin in here, not canon. Also, Videl is basically Half Human and Half "Kami" while Krillin is a full human so there goes that argument. A last name has nothing to do with a person's potential. While he's, Mr. Satan won't amount to anything strong, he wasn't ever meant to be, he was made for comic relief in all honesty, IDK why, but he was. Third, I find Hinata to be better than Videl, no offense to Videl Fans. I'm not a stupid idiot. I acknowledge Hinata's flaws and I also do find her to be stupid sometimes, mostly when she faints from Naruto's closeness, but as for her personality. Well, it's a fucking personality! Not everyone is a fucking Extravert God fucking dammit. People like Hinata, Sasuke, I, and many other people are introverts. She isn't just introverted either, she is also shy and as that's understandable due to the life she lived, which would either cause her to be like she was at 12, or like Naruto. I know Hina isn't perfect and inconsistent but honestly, I don't really care much about that. Here's how I see it. Hinata is a shy girl who wants to prove to the person she has a crush on and would do anything for his acknowledgement as long as her morals didn't conflict with it. She would give everything for him and she places him above anyone else, including her family and friends. That might not be true, but that's how I place her. Her flaws however, are as follows. She faints near Naruto even after having outgrown that phase and should be much more confident. She ignores her duties and position to stalk him and she cares more about Naruto then her clan and village. But I don't really see the last part as a flaw, just something everyone else sees. I mean, morally they're right, thing is, I don't really have high ethics which can be reflected by the story style and personalities I've adopted to characters. I mean, I'm pretty sure that if I was given a choice between bombing the entire US and saving all my family and friends, we'll, let's just say the US is fucked.
21HyperA1985: I am looking forward to chapter 19 and I hope Naruto gains a Kitsune bloodline.
Me: Wrong chapter.
Guest: Excuse me but can u message skelo and see where he/she put the rest of his/hers story majin naruto buu
Me: Well, his/her exact words (except for the 2nd to last term) were "Ok so I am writing on Spacebattles. Look for skelo. Lol. But it's all different; and I have improved shit loads since then as I can write on my phone on that site :). From Magister to God is my quest that has taken over the site lol."