Hello Everyone! I hope you enjoyed the previous episode. As you know, last time, Naruto was revealed dead and Satsuki died soon after. Then, it was discovered that it was a poison and Bulma was warned that Gohan had it. He was diagnosed by Bulma and she had a friend to help her figure it out and to cure him.
So, is Gohan gonna survive? After all, he has a newly discovered poison that will fry his brain, nervous system, and circulatory system all at once in a couple of hours.
Btw, I know I'm throwing out a lot of scientific terms and I hope that doesn't cause anyone confusion or offense if I get some things wrong. While I like science and while I do my research on this stuff, a 9th grader has limited knowledge and access to this type of stuff. I mean, what kind of people are gonna make poisons and antidotes accessible to kids, especially how to create an entirely new one. I know our society is lax, but not that much.
I also gave the subtle hint that Satsuki woke up, so yay!
Anyways, can anyone guess what caused the poisoning? With the poison, Gero, and learning of Beerus the God of Destruction's inevitable arrival to Earth, whether it be during Naruto's lifetime or his future children and his descendants, what will happen next?
Well, with all that hype, let's start!
A loud groan echoed throughout the trees as a man with black hair clutches his head, wishing the pain would go away.
'W-What's happening to me?' He questioned as his eyes began to drift off, slowly closing before he blinked as a flash of gold occurred around him, causing his body to react reflexively, and jumped up from his previous position on the ground, getting into his teacher's fighting stance.
"Wha-What are you," the man coughed out as he spat out blood.
"...an. Don't you dare die! Are you just gonna leave everyone behind?" The voice said as fighter squinted his eyes, attempting to make whatever was in front of him clearer.
Suddenly, an image flashed before his eyes, holding a girl with crystal eyes and short jet black hair.
"We both died, but you have not. She's still in trouble, brother. Are you just gonna leave her to die at the hands of Gero, Gohan?" the man asked.
"Die?" Gohan questioned before breaking into a series of coughs, blood dripping from his chin onto the ground.
His foggy vision initiated a void to form, sanctioning the Saiyan proper and vivid images to form, granted by his Saiyan genetics. It allowed him to see the man in front of him.
The man with golden hair and tortoise eyes, with a frown gracing his angled face, a glowing, blood red shirt encompassed by a long, vanta black haori that absorbed the light around it while enhancing the image of the shirt into a glowing figure. The upper clothing was accompanied by dark blue military cargo pants and steel-toed boots.
"N-Naruto?" Gohan stuttered out. "What's going on? The last thing I remember is…" Gohan trailer off before pausing as images came flying back to him.
The battered form of his girlfriend caused my mind to shake and it consumed my being. I allowed my anger to consume me and my KI to run rampant, viciously spiraling around my mind as it took on a dark blue tint.
The energy encompassed my body and caused my hair and eyes to begin changing as my mind barely registered that I had skipped the first level of Super Saiyan and went to the level that I had mastered in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber.
My KI worked with my body and sprung forth towards the location I had previously witnessed.
The second scene occurred not long after his revenge-obsessed mind.
My father appeared before me, glowing with the power given to him by the second Super Saiyan transformation, one that I had not taken due to it being gratuitous. Unfortunately, he was stronger than me and with a shocking punch to the gut then a knockout chop to my neck, causing my consciousness to abandon me.
The last scene wasn't clear earlier, but now, the memory became clear.
My body was paralyzed, unable to move anything, whether it be my limbs or my mouth. However, my hearing was still intact.
I recognized a small voice, however unclear the words being spoken, and focused in on it.
As I did, I could hear words that sounded similar to 'poison' 'virus' and other words. They were concerning as I was able to reduce that they were speaking of me.
Did I have a virus? Was I poisoned? So many questions ruptured forth through my mind, causing a larger amount of pain in my already aching head.
"Then am I dead? Did that poison/virus kill me? Or am I in some type of Limbo?" Gohan asked his younger brother, having never been to the other world and not sure if he was dead or half-dead. Gohan's lungs had started to heal and he was no longer coughing out the red liquid.
"Limbo," his younger brother stated. "And I think I know who it was. It was the Shiki Siblings. I can't believe I didn't figure it out earlier. They were so suspicious and their names. I've never heard that last name before, but if you break it up. Shi Ki. Death KI. It means death to KI users, us. I think they were androids. With all the other androids we've had to deal with previously, plus that their KI never fluctuated whatsoever throughout the whole month makes me believe that it's artificial."
During the time that he had been talking, he had materialized a game of Go. After a quick decision, they began playing the game with Naruto being black and Gohan being white.
Both had learned of the game when they were young. Chi-Chi had forced them both to play as children against her, stating that it was a fun way to challenge the mind while still learning.
Once Piccolo had learned of the game, he too played with Gohan on a monthly basis, stating that it would teach strategy, reading ahead abilities, and more supplements to the mind while in battle. Piccolo held firmly to the belief that a battle was more than just pure power. It also held onto intelligence, strategy, and analysis.
It made it really hard to fight someone who could partially read your mind with prediction and telepathy, but it helped Gohan learn to be one of the best after ten years of playing the game.
"I see. Gero's kidnapped Videl, You and Satsuki are dead, and I'm half dead. This is just fan-fucking-tastic! So, what's the plan?" Gohan asked.
"I was thinking of using Cell's time machine Bulma fixed to go to the future where the cure has probably been developed by Bulma or someone else, as well as finding out everything that Gero has strategized and planned," Naruto stated as he captured three of Gohan's pieces.
"True. Even if we can't change the past, we can use the future's knowledge to help us at this time. So, I suppose that someone is trying to find the energy source for it? Or did Bulma create an energy source that we didn't know about?" Gohan asked that last part sarcastically, knowing that Bulma had invented many things that she had never mentioned.
An example of such an invention would be the water filter tube. A portable, small, tube-shaped structure that, when placed into water and sucked, would filter the water of all impure minerals and dirt, as well as parasites and viruses, to make the water completely pure.
He wouldn't be very surprised if Bulma had created an energy source that could be supplied to anything, regardless of the energy requirements, and also place it within a small structure or containment unit, such as a capsule. They had, after all, discovered a field of black holes that orbited each other in the perfect distance that their quantity of 12 hadn't affected the possibility of being merged with another one.
He surrounded a small area, preparing to take a few of Naruto's prices as he waited for Naruto's response.
"Well, the time machine that she fixed apparently already had a power source, so all she had to do was charge it to full power, rather than create a new energy source for it. Although it does make me wonder…" Naruto trailed off as he realized something.
If he were to go to the future, then he would be able to, with high accuracy, find every threat to Earth and either exterminate it or get them on their side. This included the God of Destruction.
However, time travel is a tricky business. He didn't know what timeline he would end up in, nor did he know when Beerus would come to Earth. If, for any reason, the future had become a catastrophe and came under the dictatorship of someone like Gero, rather than someone like King Fury, then the use of the machine would have proven to be useless for that adventure.
Despite this, though, he would get a, technically unlimited amount of time to get what he needed. After all, if he were to go to such a dystopia, then when he used the next trip, he could go back to the past slightly before he used the machine and then tell his past self to go to another universe and this cycle could continue until success.
Another problem, however, was presented within the scenario, as presented by Gohan.
"But can you go through multiple dimensions? Parallel universes? The multiverse? I don't even know what to fucking call it anymore! Whatever! Anyways, if you could, then, I mean, what? How? Is that even time travel anymore? Or is it simply another universe? But then you have the butterfly effect. Damnit! I liked this a lot more when I didn't have to understand the intricacies of time travel and what it would mean for us, our known laws, and the applications of other theories like chaos theory. Sometimes, I wonder if people of a higher power are just fucking with our heads!" Gohan said as he sighed deeply.
It was a large annoyance of how time travel, if it could even be classified as that since it wasn't even time that was being disrupted, but, rather, an entire universe. Mirai Trunks had proved the multiverse theory when he had gone from that timeline to this one, but it still hurt Gohan's brain to walk around the mind-boggling Physics that took place during these occurrences. And he still didn't know how they were able to access another universe. Or time! The multiverse theory, now proven to be accurate, just raised more questions.
Three major ones were:
'How the hell did Bulma break the dimension barrier between this timeline and the dystopian future?' If it even was a dimension barrier and not an alternative universe, in which case, the question would need to be rephrased into; 'How the hell did Bulma make something go past the universe and the space between the other universes in the amount of time that we are within that time machine?'
A possible answer was a wormhole, but the idea was easily dismissive. A wormhole would only work within a single universe because something from another universe wouldn't be able to bend the space-time continuum to the point that it would touch anything on this side. Even if Bulma made a wormhole, something that wouldn't, shouldn't, have been possible, it would require too much energy. If his calculations were right, then even the entire mass of the universe converted into energy would be enough. Maybe if she had created a perpetual motion machine on a universal scale with a LS rate, then the energy would be usable, but he severely doubted that she had done anything on that level.
Another major question was; 'What is time?' Time had always been a confusing subject. It couldn't be determined as to whether there was a past, present, and future, or if time only existed in the moment, the "now." The same argument could be made as last time on whether Trunks had time traveled or not. One would confirm the other.
The third question it raised was; 'Were there alternate dimensions?' Similar to the concept of time, it raised a very important theory. Everett's Interpretation of Time, otherwise known as the Many Worlds Theory or Multiverse Theory. That question, however, had already been answered. It was simply the implications of that truth that unraveled the complexities of physics surrounding their universe.
The reality bending truth in alternate dimensions, in alternate realities, was in its simplicity. How could people travel or even arrive at these universes? There was another simple question that would, if answered in the way he thought it to be, would burn away at the theories he knew and crush his mind with all the contradictions.
Maybe Shin was right when he said that mortals were not meant to understand the depths, the very being, that was the universe, that it was to large for the feeble mind of a non-immortal.
Despite that warning though, Gohan didn't want to stop. He wanted the knowledge, to know everything that interested him, even if it meant that he would have to go against the rules of mortality and the storage capacity of the brain to do so.
He wasn't the only one, however, that had a thirst for this knowledge. He shared this trait with his brother and Satsuki, as well as Bulma. All four of them had a deeply settled seed that hungered for knowledge, to gain it so they could just understand everything.
Ignorance is not bliss, it is a prison that will stay until you leave your life behind. Gohan refuses to be a prisoner, refused to bow before the rules set by the gods, to remain in ignorance, to not be enlightened by a wealth of knowledge.
He wanted to be free from what held him back in chains, his lack of freedom to understand. His deep desire for enlightenment was simplistic and clear; he wanted freedom to challenge everything he knew, to rid himself of his assumptions and set forth to prove what existed and what remained. He wanted to go forth from his plane of existence into a higher level where he could shatter the illusion of content in ignorance.
Naruto chuckled as the brunette placed another piece of his down. "Yeah, so did I. Before Gero came and fucked with us, before we had to fight. When I could just enjoy time with Suki and fight for fun, not for my life and for the fate of the planet." Naruto smiled bitterly at the cruelty of life and it's constant struggles it placed on mortals.
Life and Time were great teachers and allowed wisdom and intellect, strength and bravery to grow, but to do so, they placed heavy burdens, draining tasks, and impossible challenges for them to bare. Life and Time were great teachers, but they slowly led their students on a journey to death with a thousand steps in between.
'Is this what Kakashi meant when he said he "Got lost on the road of life?"' Naruto asked. 'Because if so, then I can't blame him. Life truly is a complex road in which you must make stops and reflect. Maybe I should use it as well, a tribute to my brother in all but blood.'
"I win," Naruto said after he finished counting all his points. His win, however, hadn't been by a significant margin and if the game allowed for a tie by actual gameplay, then he knew it would have ended as a tie. He didn't count this as a win.
"I'm gonna see what's been going on IRL. You better survive this Gohan. I didn't, but you need to. Too much at risk if you don't survive. And we still don't know if the virus is contagious and, if, how it spreads," Naruto concluded before letting out a burst of energy to disrupt the mental connection. Naruto began to slowly disintegrate into dust particles that were swept away by the breeze generated by the burst of energy.
"It's not easy, brother. What say do I have while I'm trapped here specifically due to the virus. However, I promise, I will avenge your and Satsuki death and I will take Videl back. She doesn't belong to him. She isn't someone that bastard can take as a hostage towards his goal on his vengeance. Damnit! Why can't we just have a peaceful life?" Gohan questioned, gritting his teeth at how the events of the worlds fate always had to threaten them or just occur around Earth instead.
"It's just not fair. Now, what should I do to Gero when he wakes up for taking Videl? Maybe I should tear off…"
Naruto opened his eyes slowly, taking in the expected change in scenery, specially his beloved resting her head on his lap.
He placed his hand on her spiky black hair and gently stroked it, awakening her from her dreams and causing her to look straight at him.
He smiled gently at her as he thought back to the occurrences in the past several hours before he had gone to give Gohan a little visit.
Due to her mental breakdown, Satsuki was not in a healthy mental and emotional mindset at the moment. Thus, he had began to focus every moment of affection that he could onto her, spread amongst the hours after she regained her mind.
A private moment he had gained after he had asked King Kai if he had any areas around the other world that they could spent together without disruption.
King Kai, being the all knowing deity he was, recommended the best place to be the most obvious, Hell, where creatures who had commuted grotesque crimes against the innocent mortals inhabiting the plain of life before death roamed, not free to do as they wished caused by their very beings locked up in prison cells made up of Katchin or, for the worst of the worst, such as King Cold who had exterminated millions of civilizations and billions of species, in purgatory.
However, Naruto disagreed with the idea of going to such a dark place for his given reasons and felt that going to and trying to break out of purgatory would not assist in reconciling his mate.
Thus, the blue-skinned deity recommended his second option of going anywhere they wanted, including the endless void that was space. After all, they were dead. They didn't need to breathe. Such a ridiculous notion only applied to the weak beings still stuck in the sad existence of their mortal coil.
Due to this new knowledge, Naruto had teleported them to the Sacred World of the Kai's, discreetly of course, not allowing any of its regular attendance to know about them.
Last time they had come here, it was with the use of a technology that allowed them to breathe in space through the use of a small oxygen mask, despite it being just a tube that supplied sufficient oxygen into them.
Although Naruto was pretty sure that he wasn't allowed to go back to the land of the living. Fortunately for him, The Sacred Realm of the Kais was held within a small gap between the living and dead, allowing it to be visited by both sides. Unfortunately, you couldn't cross over without the express permission of the Grand Kai or a Supreme Kai.
After giving his beloved mental therapy, for a lack of a better term, Naruto had transported them back to King Kai's planet, stating that he needed to help Gohan and tell him the plan while Satsuki herself told everyone else the plan that they had created.
Satsuki accomplished her mission at a quicker pace, allowing her to take a nap on her man's lap.
Her dozing, unfortunately, only lasted about half-an-hour as Naruto came back from his telepathy into Gohan's mind.
Her awakening was caused by the gentle stroking of her scalp of her lover's firm hands, soothing, and yet, firm.
She leaned into his hands, enraptured by being so close to him after learning of his, and her, death, and enjoying the warmth emanating from his hand.
His soft smile further amplified the heat within her chest and she continued to lean into him, straightening from the ground and onto his lap.
She tackled him, landing on top of him as they allowed gravity to pulled them both down onto the ground.
She snuggled up to his chest, laying down on him, pressing herself against him, enjoying his stroking of her hair.
"Hello, Ruto," she whispered into his ear, the pleasant blow leaving him exhilarated.
"Suki." The blow on her ear was masked with a husky breath, increasing her own happiness as she began to lean down, making contact with his lips.
Her hand slipped up his shirt, her nails lightly grazing his body, leaving goosebumps behind as they trailed up before they forced his black shirt off.
Her lips trailed off his own and lowered, causing him to lean his head to the side, allowing her access to his neck.
She sucked gently while simultaneously switching to nibbling, her fangs grazing his neck, not quite piercing, yet still pleasant.
However, her actions were stopped when she was flipped over by her lover, morning slightly as he gave her the same treatment as she gave him.
His hand snuck under her shirt and slid up, contrasting against her own which had dragged down to his hips, grazing it slowly and tantalizingly.
It didn't take long for Naruto to take her floral shirt off, allowing view of her breasts, covered by a black and red, lace floral bra.
However, the clothing did not last long on her body as it was quickly unclipped and thrown on the ground.
Satsuki let out a soft moan as she felt his gentle hands massage the side of her breasts, stimulating her and causing her arousal to increase.
The pleasant movement of his hand from the soft yet firm sides of her bust began to transition further into the center, towards the hard nub extruding from the middle of her chest.
She let out a moan, her hips twitching upwards, brushing against her mans pants, feeling something hard touching her womanhood.
Her arousal skyrocketed as she felt herself become wetter, a sough escaping her lips before she decided to give him some pleasure.
She flipped him over, twisting herself over him, pressing her knee towards his abdomen to keep him down as she leaned down, grazing his chest with her lips, moving upwards before going towards his ear.
"I love you." her heavy breath washed over his ears, feeling the lips that they exited from nibbling on his ears,
"I love you too, Suki."
"Eternal Dragon of Earth. I summon you to this world to grant my wish. Arise Shenron and allow the personification of my desire!" Bulma stayed loudly as she stared towards the namekian dragon balls with bright red stars encased within.
The blue-haired woman's voice echoed throughout the area, filled by a couple of her friends and family, who, along with her, bore witness once again to the mystical sight of the glowing, golden energy emitted from the mystical orbs.
The light shot up towards the sky, weaving around and through self-created loops as it soon solidified into the green scaled dragon with red eyes.
His previous statement of returning within four months didn't seem to be a lie, as concluded from current events.
"You whom have uttered by name and awoken me from my slumber, state your wish so I may return to my home!" The loud voice of Shenron echoed throughout the grounds of Capsule Corporations, the sky having darkened from the energy required to summon forth the serpentine dragon.
"Shenron! Grant life back to Briefs Satsuki and Son Naruto!" Bulma shouted towards the hulking figure much larger than her.
The green dragons eye glowed brightly as he stated that her wish had been granted.
The red eye's glow died down and the enormous dragon once again looked down towards them.
"Your wish has been granted. With this, I shall call peace and arise not until the year has passed!" the namekian dragon stated before his body began to disintegrate into golden energy, picking up the seven orbs and rising to the sky.
The energy was evenly distributed to each orb and began to rotate as each began to gain enough momentum to speed away into the horizon.
However, they were not allowed to leave the area they were just contained within, courtesy of Krillin jumping and capturing each of the spherical objects and sending them down towards the solid ground of Earth.
It was a plan that they had made before. They didn't want anyone to abuse the dragon balls for things such as immortality or other harmful and dangerous wishes. An example of which would be Emperor Pilaf's desire to become the ruler of the world.
If anyone were to track the balls, they would be forced to come to them and their, they would know why the person wanted the dragon balls.
It also spared them the time to search for the balls. They learned that lesson the last time, when the younger saiyans had to fight Broly.
The dragon's dissipation signaled the appearance of Bulma's and Chichi's children. They appeared back in the world of living in a bright flash of white covering them before fading.
However, the reunion needed to be let off. They couldn't afford to waste much time, not when they finally realized that their opponent this time was much smarter then they had given him credit for.
They had confirmed their foe to be Dr. Gero, courtesy of all their investigations and the help of King Kai.
Neither Bulma nor Goku were stupid. The intellect of the man was held high in society, matched by very few in the world with a couple breaking that limit being Dr. Briefs and Bulma.
For all they knew, the man could be watching their move, making his own move, or hatching a scheme.
Right now, one of their key player was out of commission thanks to the old man.
As soon as the two appeared, Bulma and Goku, along with Piccolo and Vegeta went inside, followed by the former's children.
Bulma's friend had already been teleported back to his place a couple of hours ago after they had discovered all they could with the limited amount of time they were given.
If the way they had thought time travel physics to work was accurate, then they needed to make sure that they didn't go even a minute to the past or future, but appear right after they disappeared.
Otherwise, another 'branch' of time would be created and they couldn't afford that. That would guarantee Gohan's death.
Two people would be going into the future to gather both information and to gather a cure for Gohan.
The decision of who would go to the future had already been made. It was easy to narrow it down to five people. The decisions needed to be made with thought and therefore, they needed to send two of their strongest fighters. That had held down to Goku, Naruto, Satsuki, Piccolo, and Vegeta. It wasn't hard to eliminate Goku. While he was very powerful, Piccolo would be able to match him now as long as they didn't ascend to the second level of Super Saiyan.
Unfortunately, Goku was not the most focused or intelligent of the group, eliminating him from the group.
This left the other four. Piccolo was a necessary to go in all honesty. He was the most knowledgeable about the Earth due to his unfused other part was the previous Guardian of Earth. He also had the abilities that Kami previously held, although some were eliminated due to no longer being the Guardian of Earth.
Two such abilities were the ability to peer into any part of the world from the lookout and the ability to heal, which, while not as strong as Dende's, was better than the nonexistence of the rest.
That left Vegeta, Naruto, and Satsuki. Eliminating Vegeta wasn't hard, however, as he did not know or care for Earthling customs besides the ones important to his wife. He didn't know to conduct himself in a social environment on Earth.
And Between Satsuki and Naruto, Satsuki won out between the two because she was better at information gathering than Naruto was.
So, Bulma decapsulated the Trunk's time machine, the one Cell had stolen, and allowed Satsuki and Piccolo entrance.
She had repaired it in her spare time, hoping that maybe she would be able to see her future son again after so long.
"Stay safe," she smiled at her daughter as the vehicle was started.
"Good luck," Naruto whispered to her as he stared into her eyes, giving her a quick peck to her lips, knowing by now that the rest of their family had already figured their relationship out.
She smiled at him, returning the peck before beginning the process.
The machine floated up in the air before beginning to rotate at quick speeds. While she set the date, the pod had began to move forward at an inclining velocity.
The rotation stopped instantly and the extra momentum gained propelled the machine at a larger speed, increasing their rate of acceleration.
Soon, it began reaching the speed of light and there, Satsuki fired off the special function of the machine, teleporting them into a wormhole of time, colored by a vibrant mass of tints and shades of each hue.
Satsuki grinned at the feeling of the speed, enjoying the fast velocity through time. How many people could claim to have moved at light speed in a machine through a wormhole of time.
The wormhole began to curve slightly and the machine moved with it, it's code allowing it to flow smoothly while looking for it's destination.
The spiral shaped wormhole also had bolts of negative energy moving throughout it, going from one end to the other.
Satsuki stopped grinning, knowing the possible dangers of time travel.
The Tipler Cylinder that they were currently traveling through had a mass amount of negative energy flowing through it and if they got struck by one, it could through them into a different timeline.
They didn't need to go back to the past and it was a serious concern with the current circumstances.
Time travel was dangerous and despite the process being possible, it wasn't easy. It also wasn't difficult.
A quick flash ejected the Saiyan from her thoughts, looking down at the blue light coming from one of the screens in the machine.
Reading it, her eyes widened as she looked up, only to see a blast of negative energy coming straight towards her.
Taking the steering wheel, the girl twisted it, trying to escape the blast. She silently thanked Piccolo for his telekinetic abilities that slowed down the energy enough to give her a larger amount of time to react.
The girl gritted her teeth as she tried to maneuver away from the edge of the wormhole, not wanting to exit into an unknown location.
Unfortunately, the time machine seemed to attract more attention as another bolt of energy came towards them.
This time, they couldn't do anything, the attack occurring too quickly for them to react. The blast hit them head on and caused immense damage to their machine.
The attack also forced them into an unknown exit in the wormhole.
"Damnit!"
Fuck! I'm two months past my damn schedule and it's probably gonna get worse. High school got harder all of a sudden and now, I've signed up for all advanced classes as well as a new language for next year.
Also, tell me, did anyone, for their first year of IT have to design and create a game. For bio, did you have to do a ¼ of a thesis per semester? And now, I have to breed fucking dragons and track their pedigree!
Anyways, I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter. The most important things I need to discuss here are the Time Travel and the next several chapters.
First, the chapters. Right now, we are at a cliffhanger. Now, I want a poll, but since my account already has one, this will be a Review or PM vote. Both work. Anyways, the vote is, should I go along with what I am doing, or should I add a sub-arc where Piccolo and Satsuki have to travel through space and gather materials. That won't really be much, probably a couple of chapters if I'm being honest.
Second, I know I put a lot of time travel physics here. I'm sorry if I caused any confusion with the whole physics, the theories, hypotheticals, and slightly destroying the DBZ canon. Also, yes, I know, the Tipler Cylinder doesn't work like I said. However, I had no desire to say that Bulma somehow got negative energy then built a Tipler Cylinder, especially since the whole thing is hypothetical. Hopefully, my version was satisfactory.
Anyways, Satsuki and Piccolo have the spotlight for the next several chapters as they have to gather the antidote for the poison, if there even is one ^~^.
Reviews:
T51b Moridin: Could just pull some bs and have them all 3 forced to experience DBGT and all it has, then someone on earth decides they hate that timeline and fk it up somehow by getting pialf to never make that wish of his, thus causing them to live the DB Super story line, but because of the absurd power they got to in GT they will have their memories of that time, albeit not the power and thus be able to train to that level while also learning how to harness god ki thus attaining Saiyan God Red and Super Saiyan 4 God Blue. Saiyan God Red is due to that form using only god ki thus being in your base form completely. While the other is due to a mix of regular ki and god ki that you need to adapt to from the red form. I can see why you had them age up, but that also leaves them with a rather shaky foundation. Likely should have just had them time travel backwards and train until the right age. Age up really just loses time.
Me: Well, like you said, it would have been bs. But in all seriousness, the whole SSJ4 Blue thing wouldn't occur. You see, I've been having thoughts about what powers they'll have in Super and one of the things I've decided, inspired by someone who's name I forgot, is that, oops, spoilers! Well, here's a hint. Vegeta won't become a Super Saiyan God. As for the age up, it was something that I hadn't truly thought of in terms of the story line. You see, I made a mistake in making this story. I wasn't supposed to actually do this until I completed ROTB. I also hadn't made an actual outline with this that was very detailed. But my stance on the age up stands because they've already experienced a life in their previous ones so the childhood area is already covered. Therefore, I made them age up enough to be beneficial, but not too much as to being suspicious. I also had it right after the Cell Games as to allow the adaptation to occur over the time skip. Unfortunately though, you are right and the foundation is shaky.
KamiKageRyuuketsu: Well it be said that if I had the only 2 options of killing every corrupt government leader or Congress man or woman besides trump, or torturing your entire family and raping your mother and sister then cutting their tits and Lithia off while your pathetic bitch ass is chained down and force to watch then killing them and you well you and your entire family is fucked buddy.
Me: You are disturbed, aren't you? I refuse to reply to this. By the way, would you happen to be named Austin? Just a suspicion.
1Savageverse: Your power levels are wrong they are in the billions not what you put.
Me: But I did put them in the billions~. But in seriousness? I doubt that their base forms would be in the billions. Goku, at Namek when facing off against Freiza, had a power level of three million. To be in the billions, he would have had to get 1,000 times stronger in his base. He can be in the billions here because getting 10 or 20 times as strong, boosted by a factor of 137.5 would allow him to be that high up. But he definitely did not become stronger by a thousandfold in just base form.
Guest: Who said anything bout you favoring Naruto, you favored Satsuki way more.
Me: I can't really deny that statement. I don't know who said it though, but I remember the person saying that I was showing Naruto favoritism.
LuluViBritania: tsk tsk it isn't called the Room of Space and Time it is clearly called the Hypersonic Liontamer and SS2 gives a multiplier of 100
Me: Yes, SSJ2 gives a 100x base. Here however, I made it 137.5. Why? Because they all have mastered Super Saiyan, which gives them a bigger boost. Not as big as SSJ2, but grade 4 does make them stronger.
Tsukoblue: When will the story say how Naruto and FemSasuke died and were reborn into the Dragon Ball world?
Me: That will occur in ROTB, my other fanfiction.
7Noctus Of The Thousand Blades: GT was a piece of crap, mainly due to the fact that Toriyama was NOT the one who did that version. the only good thing to come out of that disaster was SSJ4, which according to Toriyama himself, while it IS an official canon transformation, despite the rest of GT being officially considered Fanon by Jump and Toriyama himself, the SSJ4 transformation is NOT considered a super Saiyan transformation, but is officially considered a transformation along the Oozaru line.
the official transformations are: Super Saiyan: SSJ, SSJ2, SSJ3, SSJ God, SSJGSSJ (AKA SSJ Blue, Rose, etc.)
Oozaru: Oozaru, Golden Oozaru, SSJ4
Other: Kaio-Ken, Ultra Instinct, Fusion Dance, Potara Fusion. while i am sure there are other forms i am missing, those are the official ones i can think of off the top of my head.
so personally,i recommend avoiding GT altogether, and instead go with Dragon Ball Super, as that one WAS done by Akira Toriyama and is considered the official Canon sequel to Dragon Ball Z.
Me: Welp, that's the plan. Although I can't really use the Oozaru transformations in mine anymore because of my plans for the future.
T51b Moridin: Pretty sure Tao became an Android during the Dragon ball saga. Pretty sure fusion dance was gogeta. unless that not canon anymore. Still badass form. Vegito form didn't have the fusion form outfit that is supposed to occur when that dance is used. Perhaps the modifications by vegeta? Also, Mystic is just going to be an add essentially or better yet a releasing of their base ki levels, ergo ssj1,2,3 should still be usable and worthwhile. Goku may not be able to do 16 minus 1 but he can do 111 missing from home and out of my families lives for 7 years, and dying sucks. Who'd a thought. Remember BP is a measure of Ki. Special skills or abilities or magic are not counted in that number. Its literally an exact measurement of their maximum Ki output. A special skill for higher speed is merely a different method of ki usage. I gotta say I do enjoy the idea that sayians actually cared for their kin. Some stories have them as complete savages and others as indifferent sociopaths. Sometimes a bit of love is all they need. Unnecessary power boost for Videl. Coulda just made her work hard at it and simply have greater gains due to heritage rather than an instant boost. Korin is supposed to be the penultimate martial arts master. I always feel like there is much to learn from him more so than simply how to predict movement. Heya that was cool. Always loved Korin's Tower. But really your pacing is a bit off in these early chapters. And they were fighting at human speeds due to the gravity they had going so why would Videl suspect anything? So funny.
Me: I apologize, but I had to condense all of your reviews into a single one and cut some out. Anyways, I'll address each ones here. Tao did become an Android in the original DB. Did I contradict that? I apologize. I never meant to do it though. Gogeta is no longer canon. Screw the Broly movie. I don't need to have both here so I might as well make one fusion for them. As for their appearance, I got bored of the design and came up with my own. Now, for the mystic form, my original plan was to have them have mixed the two to gain a max multiplier of 200,000 thousand, which I would make the multiplier if I mastered God Form. Then, the power levels would continue going up as Goku gained Blue- Oops, spoiler territory. Well, let's just say that they will become much stronger after going through some training. I made Goku different here. You see, this time, Goku is a much better father. The only time he "abandoned" them was during the Yardrat thing. In my Fanfic, the power levels didn't just mean KI. That's another reason it's much higher than normal. I made it so that it would actually have their other things, like skill, speed, and strength, as factors. It's not fully reliable as it doesn't add strategy, mind games, or techniques, but it is more reliable than canon ones are. For Videl's power boost, that is something I now consider a mistake. I shouldn't have done that. My original thought was that I would have her more involved, but she's honestly a secondary character. I doubted that I would be able to have her grow strong enough to beat Krillin, one of my planned 'right of passage' if she just trained hard for a month or two because that doesn't make a lot of sense. But if her potential was higher, it would be easier to grow faster. Korin, while I would love to experiment with him, he's a secondary character and I can't really involve him in much. I mean, I could make the three do his training, but Goku or Piccolo would already know them and the few other things he could teach them wouldn't even be thought of. Remember, Piccolo does have Kami in him now. My pacing was a little off, I have to admit. Like I said, I was barely decent back then, is my earlier works need a bit of work. Videl was suspicious for three reasons. One, they were training for so long and knew so many styles, forgetting that she had also trained for as long. Two, they knew Yamcha, someone famous and were on a first name basis. Third, who said they were fighting on human levels? They were at WMAT levels, the kind that Videl's father is at as well as the other people, such as the previous champions. While that may be relatively pathetic, for her, it's about as strong as her dad. And they are the same age as her. And there are three of them. While it isn't the most suspicious like other fics exaggerate, I was going for her solving it logically and giving her small hints that pointed her in the right direction.
Holy god that was a lot of writing. Anyways, remember to vote and I'll see you all next time.
P.S: That whole sexual scene was not supposed to go that far.