Hello Everyone! So with some thinking and some overhaul, I decided to rewrite this fic completely and end this one. Honestly, I can fully agree that I have totally butchered the idea and made everybody from their respective series completely OOC. That is something I want to rectify and completely fix in the new and (hopefully) much more improved story of this.
For one, I am going completely drop the idea of Basara having the powers and abilities of the Ghost Rider and Issei becoming Venom. Basara with Brynhildr and his bloodline on top of him getting the spirit of Vengeance would make him instantly OP. Issei as well would get OP in his own way since he shares the same blood line since he and Basara are brothers in this fic. Not to mention, the evil piece system would not work on them at all for that reason. Since Sapphire is suppose to the younger sister of Wilbert who is the demon lord, Raphaeline is a goddess from the ten gods and Jin being reinforced with Fafnir's blood, their bloodline alone would of purged the evil piece system from entering their body. My idea to make them apart of a peerage in the original (which would be this fic) didn't make sense and was downright retarded.
Aizen and The Espada will no longer be allied with the Khaos Faction like how they were here. Aizen's ideals alone are the complete opposite of the Ideals of Rizevim, Katarea, Shalba, and Ophis. While Ophis technically isn't bad, the odds of Aizen allying with her would be next to zero. Now while Aizen's Ideologies are somewhat faded (To me at least) since they never really delved into the specific of his ideologies on him becoming the god of the new world, Im iffy since His Ideologies can be somewhat conflict with Nagato's since Pain's ideology is that the everyone would have to feel the same pain in order for conflict to truly end and for peace to happen. The Only way I can truly see them working together is I go with is that I not only make Soul Society corrupted but several factions which in turn would make Pain want to end the conflict and skrimishies with everyone.
If I do go that route, Then Natsu and the Fairy Tail elements, as well as One Piece, Tokyo Ghoul, SAO, HxH, Maken Ki and Senran Kagura will have to be written out completely since there is no one in those series (to my knowledge) who believes in that ideology or has something that resembles it . So if I add someone like Acnologia, Aoigiri Tree or the yoma. They would literally would just be there for no reason what so ever. To compensate for this, The Akatsuki and Espada will be the main villains of the series with the Khaos Brigade acting as a secondary villain such as DxD canon.
Issei and Basara will be getting their own powers back to them completely with no added bonuses what so ever. While I know that Sacred Gears can only be given to humans. Jin is just a human in the end of the day, Just reinforced with Fafnir's blood. It makes total sense for Issei to gain Boosted Gear from that particular reason alone. While Basara has trained with Brynhildr, getting to the point in the beginning in Shinmai, Issei will still be reduced to his canon state at first or have unlocked the very first level of Boosted Gear (Before the Church Fight with Raynare but after Kalawarners fight. If I remember correctly, He unlocked it somewhere in episode 2 or 3.). This is so it doesn't impede on progress and away from his original canon self like this one I did.
Raynare is either going to most likely stick to her canon self and try to kill Issei and Basara. It is Either that or she is the only one who is actually following Azazel's orders and only observe the two rather than kill them. Im trying to figure that out still.
Ainz, Nazarick as well as the Daedra from Elder Scrolls will be written out. While there will be demons in the story since making everyone devils wouldn't make sense to Mio, Basara, and Sapphire. It would be to complex on having the daedra lords pop up since ALOT of them are shady. However, since there isn't that much information on the concept of magic and magical items in DxD, ill be using Overlords tier system of magic/magic items/ and world class items.
Lastly, The Harems and characters in general. I have made everyone, literally everyone way OOC. Its to the point that they are barely recgonizable. Like Komish, Eddy and chisa have stated in the reviews, Yeah I totally fucked a lot of shit up and added way to much unnessary bullshit that didn't even need to be talked about let alone thought of. For one, I could of definitely could of listed the harems at least once and leave it at that (or not mention them at all) and really shouldn't of warned about lemons. Also, I could of added and intertwined the interconnecting stories a lot better rather than leaving it a total clusterfuck. Also, Chisa is right. There is no way Ornis could destroy Togami by himself if Chisato could one shot him essentially.
Orihime, Hinata, and Sakura will no longer be in the boys harems. Since Aizen and Pain will be the Primary antagonists in this fic, that means that the Soul Society Arc (When Ichigo saves Rukia with Chad, Uryu and Orihime) has already ended with Central 46 already dead and the Pain arc either starting or halfway done. It wouldn't make a shred of sense to have Hinata and Sakura suddenly have an interest in Basara and Issei since they already grown up with Saskue and Naruto. The Same goes for Orihime and having her know the boys since childhood and not know who Ichigo is would just be a major cop out.
Zest will not be apart of Risers Peerage. That was a really bad move on my end and I introduced her way to early instead of the Zolgea arc. The same goes for Sapphire as well. Both girls will not appear until later down the line.
I will be dropping Overlord, Senran, fairy Tail, Maken Ki, HxH, Valkyrie, Marvel, Elder Scrolls, One Piece, Tokyo Ghoul, Devil May Cry, and SAO from this series. Literally they have SO much different lore and A lot of the people I would of added in the series have REALLY big conflicting ideologies that wouldn't work if I added them to Aizen's Faction or Issei and their group.
The four series that I will be using from now on will be Bleach, Naruto, High School DxD and Shinmai.
By all means, I welcome any and all suggestions on how to make this a really good story. Im just starting to write honestly and ANY help would be a godsend guys. And yeah I think Chisato would be pretty good queen honestly.
The Last thing I wanted to ask is that when I start the rewrite of the new fic, Should I base the first chapter off of episode 1 of Highschool DxD (meaning that were already in the shit, Raynare attempting to kill both of them with Rias making an appearance.) Problem with that is that Mio will have to introduced somewhere and ill most likely need help with that.
Or
Based on the first episode of Shinmai( plays out word for word and scene for scene, Mio is on the run from the demons or devils depending on what one gets more favorites, this alone would most likely be a full chapter. They eventually head to Kuoh and meet Yuki like in episode 2 with Rias and her group shadowing them. Raynare would eventually show up with someone and attack both similar to DxD and that's how the church/ Asia arc begins.)
PS, Since Basara and Mio are cousins in the official Shinmai canon. This means Issei is also a cousin to her as well. Should I continue with Rias being related to Issei and Basara as well or have her and the devils a complete outside faction with no blood relation to the boys. Whatever gets the most votes wins!
Like I said guys, im generally new to the writing scene and I want this to kick off and be better than the original. Whatever help would be a godsend. Just don't flame me please lol
Ill see you all in the new and hopefully much improved version of this fic!
Cheers!
