Advent of Orion

by mak89

All of it started with confusion and terror and didn't get any better from there. A look in his father's old invention leaves a twenty three year old Stanford drop out with thousand questions and no way to find answers to them. Well it's like they say if there is something that doesn't make sense, let's go and poke it with stick. Beta'ed by my good friend LancerGaShinda

27. Chapter 27

Important Notice

I don't see the point of hating my characterization of Chuck based on the chapter he didn't even appear in but now I kinda see where you are coming from in regards to certain aspects of the whole fandom in general. I actually prefer Castle and Beckett WTWT dynamic over Chuck and Sarah but that's besides the point. So I was hoping to do something different, a more pleasant dynamic between the couples like I usually watch in korean dramas. My logic behind Chuck being rather nonchalant about the Stanford affair wasn't because he is in "wuv" with Sarah, I was more or less trying to show that he doesn't really give a damn about Bryce (and Jill as well) anymore. Also he was trying to diffuse the situation and planning to "talk" with Sarah later on, but he never got that chance. Though considering his usual portrayal in stories, I understand why that might have pissed off some of you

Nevermind, so far the only problematic aspect about my version of Sarah is the casual fling she had with Bryce. If that's the thing the core audience of my story dislike so much, I am willing to rework on that scenario by making her unaware of his true identity upto the point of him going rogue (I don't see Chuck carrying Bryce's picture everywhere with him for her to know how he really looked). That won't require me to make much revisions in the most recent chapters and I can replace the flashback with something related to Chuck's training montage or a new chapter from current storyline. I guess that's more sensible way to deal with this issue rather than bringing in Zondra/Lou out of nowhere.

Now as far as me taking so much time getting to the pilot is concerned, there are already tons of canon rewrite stories available. I don't have the desire and/or motivation to cover every single episode of this show. And, if I don't feel like not continuing with this fic, I will just write an epilogue and move on to something else. This is the longest story I have ever written , so it's more or less like a child to me. So instead of killing this story over one wrong move in these ridiculous trying times , may be I can learn from my mistakes and make it better. I hope you still have some faith left in me.

This is the final AN on my side. If you want to communicate with me further, you have to PM me or wait till the next chapter to get your answer.

No matter what's going on in the world, know that the reviewers and followers of this fic always have my gratitude.

Sincerely,

Mak89