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{2notgood; Good idea but the OC guys seem pointless as the deathstalker could have replaced Jaune. Also repeats cannon a little much. Onyx's power seems to be all over the place. he defended a village from Grimm but then struggles against a single alpha Beowulf and is weaker than a deathstalker?}
[I am going to assume you mean that Onyx could've replaced Jaune, I have no argument for this, that would have been a good idea if I had thought before I wrote the last few chapters.
Yes, for the first chapters it will follow cannon quite a bit, but soon that will change...
And While yes, Onyx defends a village from Grimm, he has massive help from Palidin Jenkins...
The Deathstalker never kills or permanently hurts Onyx, it just throws him. ]
Onyx groaned as he slowly sat up, a dull pain emanating from his chest. Onyx looked to his chest to see that a good amount of scales had been torn off, but thankfully, nothing had penetrated his skin.
"Onyx!" Someone yelled, coming up from the side. Onyx recognized the voice as Silver, who seemed to chase after him as he was thrown.
"Where is the rest of the humans?" Onyx asked, getting on his feet.
"I don't know, I ran after you," Silver stated, looking around at their surroundings.
"There are six people fighting the Grimm. They should be fine. Let's start heading towards the cliff," Onyx explained, walking away.
"You got it," Silver answered, following Onyx. It took less than a minute to come across an open field with what looked like ruins and pillars strewn across of it. Onyx looks up into the air to see the Nevermore flying towards them.
"Take cover!" Onyx shouted moving over under a pillar along with Silver. The gang of humans that were fighting with them before burst out of the forest, ducking behind some ruins as the Nevermore flew over them and landed on a pillar, cawing. Yang quickly jumped under a pillar, accidentally bumping into Onyx.
"Hey Onyx," Yang whispered, Onyx nodded and quietly waited. The Deathstalker suddenly burst through the trees as it rampaged through the forest, immediately charging at the people.
"Ah, man, run!" Jaune yelled. The group emerged from their hiding spots, causing the Nevermore to rise up into the air.
"Nora, distract it!" Ren yelled. Nora obliged, running out from her block and jumping through the feather projectiles before reaching behind her and launching several heart-topped shells from her grenade launcher, bursting into pink electricity when they hit the Nevermore and causing it to retreat. She is unaware of the Death Stalker rushing up behind her until Blake and Ren perform a cross-slash with their Gambol Shroud and StormFlower against its shell. Weiss lands next to Nora so she can create a jumping platform beneath them and leap to safety while Blake and Ren are now being chased.
" Go, go!" Phyrra said. She stopped running beside Jaune and gets out Miló, firing shots alongside Ren's green blasts for a second until it reaches them and tries to swipe, prompting the group to run again.
The eight race over the ancient stone bridge, not noticing the Nevermore closing in on them until it uses its giant wings to shatter the path right in the middle, forcing Silver, Onyx, Ruby, Weiss, Yang, Nora, and Jaune closer to the central collection of columns and leaving Blake, Ren, and Pyrrha on the other side with the Death Stalker. Ruby fires at the retreating Nevermore while Blake is beaten back by the scorpion
" Man, we gotta get over there! They need help!" Jaune whined, walking up to the gap.
"Let's do this!" Nora said exightidly, walking up next to him.
"Yeah, but, uh... I can't make that jump." Jaune stated, looking down into the abyss. Nora smiles diabolically at him, laughing as she knocks him back, turns her weapon to its full-length hammer form, and jumps to the edge of the bridge.
"Oh, wait!" Jaune yelled, but it was too late, she slams the hammer into the bridge and throws Jaune to the other side, yelling: "No, no, no!" Nora places one foot on the hammer and fires it off the collapsing section of the bridge, launching her to slam its face right in the center of the Death Stalker's skull. She fires it just as the stinger comes down to get her, and blasts back again to avoid its reach, accidentally knocking into Blake and making her fall from the edge. Blake sees the Nevermore above her and launches her whip so the gun's blade sinks into the edge of the bridge, circling around and leaping onto the aerial Grimm's back. She dashes all over its body, slashing the entire time, before jumping off and landing on the ruined platform at the top of the columns next to Ruby, then going over to Yang and Weiss.
" It's tougher than it looks!" Blake yelled.
" Then let's hit it with everything we got!" Yang yelled, readying her gauntlets. The Nevermore approaching, Ruby, Blake, Weiss, and Yang set their weapons to fire a barrage of blasts at the bird, which it either dodges or takes harmlessly until it crashes through the columns and platform. The girls leap from one section of falling stone to the next until they reach the higher bridge on top, just below the cliffs. Onyx, however, was having an extremely troubling time with the crumbling platforms, as he was nowhere near as agile as the humans, and his weight was not helping. Onyx charged across the platforms, jumping across them as he made a dash for the cliff. It wasn't like they would have trouble with the Grimm.
[Meanwhile]
Paladin Jenkins looked around in awe at the massive classroom that a fidgety coffee drinker named Oobleck walked him into. Though with the way the man fidgeted he was either drinking pure caffeine or he was spiking his coffee with a Jet-like substance.
"And this Sir, will be your classroom. Here you will teach your students... Say, what are you going to teach them?" Professor Oobleck asked, pivoting sharply towards Jenkins.
"Survival skills," Jenkins shrugged, walking up to a desk at the middle front of the room, which he assumed would be where he sat.
"The children know how to survive, how do you think they got to this school in the first place?" Oobleck asked, not trying to sound rude. Jenkins smiled and positioned himself next to his chair.
"I think I will make this class about foraging and fighting with simple tools, like knives," Jenkins answered, pressing a button on his power armor. The Power-armor opened like a shell and Jenkins fell into the chair, rolling a little bit away from the desk.
"that's a little childish, don't you think?" Oobleck asked, watching Jenkins use his body weight to inch his way to his new desk.
"Ay, If I could stand up and walk without power-armor, I would. Aint' my fault that my legs don't work right." Jenkins returned, finally getting to his desk.
"Oh, I didn't realize you couldn't walk, I'm terribly sorry about that comment," Oobleck apologized, actually not drinking his coffee for a minute or two before returning to sipping on it.
"Yea, unless I find a way to charge these Fusion cores, I think I'll be needing some wheelchair ramps," Jenkins responded, sighing.
"That is definitely something you would need to think about. I will let you get acquainted with your new classroom," Oobleck said, waving goodbye.
[Back to Onyx]
Onyx watched as the red human ran up the cliff and sliced the head of the giant bird off. Onyx was currently clinging to the side of the cliff, slowly making his way up. Onyx reached forward to grab the next rock, only for it to give way and slam into his shoulder on the way down. Onyx roared in pain as he dug his claws into the rock so he didn't fall off. The climb up was strenuous and uncomfortable, when he reached the top he flopped onto the ground sighing in relief.
"Why didn't you help us?! You were right next to us then you just ran off!" A girl in a white dress yelled, pointing at Onyx.
"You might not know this, but I'm not a human. My agility is bounds below any of yours. You may be able to jump between falling rocks, but I can't," Onyx argued, still laying on the ground.
"Well- you... we... uggg!" The annoying girl grumbled, walking away.
" Blake Belladonna. Ruby Rose. Weiss schnee. Yang Xiao Long. The four of you retrieved the white knight pieces. From this day forward, you will work together as Team RWBY. Led by... Ruby Rose!" Onyx announced, mentioning towards the team, who celebrated.
"And finnaly. Silver Clark. Percy Apollo. Azure Apollo. Onyx..." Ozpin started, stopping as he turned to Onyx.
"What is your last name?" Ozpin whispered.
"My name is Onyx. Nothing more. My species has no need for familial connections in name," Onyx stated, not bothering to whisper or be quiet at all.
"Okay... The four of you retrieved the black king peices. From this day forward, you will work together as Team SPAO [Sparrow]. Led by... Onyx!" Ozpin spoke, making Silver smile and the other two smile.
"It looks like things are shaping up to be an... interesting year." Ozpin said, walking off the stage.
Onyx and his team, which were being very annoying at the moment, walked up to a room that Ozpin game them a key to. But, Silver was being... quiet. Very quiet. Onyx stopped at the door and tossed Percy the key, as he didn't have the dexterity to use it.
"Silver, you're being quiet. Wha-" Onyx turned to Silver and immediately stopped, sniffing at the air. Almost immediately, Onyx could tell what was wrong, just from the smell and the way Silver acted.
"We need to get him to a hospital immediately," Onyx announced, making Percy and Azure swivel around to look at Onyx and Silver.
"Why?" Someone said, the heavy clunking of power armor giving them away.
"Radiation poisoning...I told you humans that putting me in this school was an idiodic idea," Onyx sighed, turning to Jenkins.
"Good thing I came up here then... Onyx stand still," Jenkins said, pointing a spray can at him. Onyx coughed as a green cloud of chemicals erupted from the device. The cloud dissapated quickly, leaving a sterile scent.
"What was that?" Azure coughed.
"That was RadAway. I just put it in a pressurized can. You shouldn't have much more problems with radiation. And for Silver, here take one a day for a week and you should be fine," Jenkins said, tossing a bottle of pills to Silver.
"And that is my last bottle, so dont waste them!" Jenkins said, walking away.
"Who was that?" Azure asked, turning to Onyx.
"Palidan Jenkins," Onyx awnsered entering their room and curling up on the floor, not even bothering to try and fit on a bed.