Sorry for the delay ... for me, chapter 5 has always been cursed, every time I get to chapter 5 of a story (whether it's published or not) to history one of these two things happens: either it ends or it suffers some moderately important change ...
Do not worry this story does not end here I'm already working on chapter 6 (after much meditation and thinking I decided that I would not write chapter 5 and jump directly to 6, as in those Japanese buildings where there is no floor 4). So, Chapter 6 does not take long to arrive, just ask for a little patience. I have to overcome the curse of chapter 5 ...
A and thank you all for your comments:
-thanks to Y.A.O.I.F.T.Wfor giving his idea and letting me give it the shape that I imagined it would take
-thanks to Haraldr for his incredible advice
-mattcun do not worry, the next chapter almost comes.
I will post this weekend without fail, I assure you
Maraviri
