1st off, sorry for the extra long wait. I needed to perform maintenance on my computer and get a new keyboard cause some letters didn't work. 2nd-lee, shouting...
1) to Kamen Rider Chrome: Ooooooooh! That's what you meant (and yea, I got your PM, couldn't respond properly because of said keyboard). I thought you just meant shorter paragraphs. I gave it a whirl, but turns out I'm really OCD about one-liners I write. Sure it's easier to read, but it makes an anime vein pop out of my head, and how can I enjoy writing if I'm unsatisfied with the style? It worked for your story sure, but I don't feel it will work for me. Thanks for your input though :)
2) to DJ Villian: Lol, your the first person to call my story dope, I'm flattered.
3A) to Desmond: your names Desmond? As in Desmond Miles?! :O
3B) to Desmond: Sorry, couldn't help it. Back to your review, prologues are kinda ball busting anyway. It keeps you coming back for more, doesn't it? ;)
4A) to The Brod Road: True, the end result will be the same. That idea for Reiny made me laugh, I'll be sure to give it a shot. And for a huge time skip, nah I'm not gonna do that. As I said before, I'm not doing all the Alien Force episodes, just the ones that actually MATTERED to the plot, that includes only the major enemies. As for Kevin's reaction... oh, it WILL be worth it, trust me on this!
4B) to The Brod Road: Oh, and Julies... well as Kou would say: there's gonna be a cat fight! WEEEEEEE!
4C) to The Brod Road (from former Page 5): I don't know yet, haven't gotten that far in planning.
5) to Treyalexander63917: Sort of, they just had their first date. Ya know, the whole "Ship" thing? I thought I made that clear on page one, sorry to anyone else who was confused at this.
6) to Walter Cronkite: LMFAO! This is officially my favorite flame yet! No joke, I was reading it and it made me laugh. A Bakuganman kind of day, CBS = Can't Believe this Shit... OMG, pure genius! Hahaha! XD
Prologue: Page 5
PEW PEW!
"HISSSSSSSSSSS!"
"What the hell was that?!" Asked Kurumu, bolting awake. She woke up to Ben and Moka bracing for something, only for their supposed 'attacker' to actually protect them from a very large Dasypodidae (AN: The Ben10 wiki says their called "Rodilia Dentia", but I don't know if that's 100% true). As the large roach-like alien recovered, Reinrassic held it down, preventing its movement. This Dasypodidae was persistent, and struggled to free itself.
However, a second one appeared from behind Kurumu, in which Reiny shot more darts and caused it to fall on its back. With an angry look, Kurumu sliced the pest into 5's... ugh, and she just did her nails too! "Whew... thanks" she said to Reinrassic and while he looked up at the succubus, the struggling arthropod managed to bend back and bite the Highbreed's wrist with its pincers.
Screaming in pain, Reinrassic tossed the overgrown bug off his arm... along with his hand that landed a few feet from its owner! The big insect attempted to get up but Moka, albeit reluctantly, kicked it away. Not as far as her inner self of course, but still a good few yards. Reinrassic clutched his arm, it leaked green blood. "Reinrassic, are you ok?" Asked Moka, clearly worried. "Since your a plant, can you regenerate it?" Asked Kurumu. "What do you take me for, a lowly Florauna?" Said Reinrassic, in a great deal of pain.
"But you can be healed?" Asked Ben. "Not in these conditions!" Reinrassic answered. "I have an idea, hang on!" Said Ben, hearing Wildvine's true name gave him a plan, something along the lines of stitching... or at least something close to it. He would go Swampfire or Wildvine (whichever was on his watch or was closer dial-wise) and mend the arm back in place. Since the DNAliens can change the DNA of their hosts, maybe it could work in reverse! Of course, Ben's no doctor, but he knew amputated body parts had a 12 hour window before being irreparable. It might be shorter for an alien, so every second counted!
Turning on his favorite toy, Ben scrolled through his aliens and got to Swampfire first. He raised his hand high, and goes to slam it...
then time slows down...
and the image...
...
...
... changed itself!
FLASH!
(AN: Play it)
It hasn't happened in 4 months, but once again tiny green bats swarmed Ben. When the blood of a vampire is absorbed by the Omnitrix, Ben's human self disappears, and his own vampiric power... is unleashed. "Ben you son of a bitch, why the hell would you bother saving this High-Weed?" Said... well, what APPEARED to be Ben. If Reinrassic wore boots, he'd be shaking in them... and out of them too. This Ben gave off the same aura as Moka, twice as much! Shit, it might even be more!
Not even Inner Moka or Kurumu combined could fully match the energy level radiating off of him.
"And really, would it kill ya to let ME out? Seriously, 4 months? I'd punch you in the balls if it didn't hurt me" this Ben continued, looking down at the symbol near his neck. That's when he noticed someone lost a hand, the phrase need a hand has never been so literal. "Excuse me, sir? I think you dropped something" said 'Ben', in an arrogant and joking tone. He picked up the Highbreed's hand off the ground, gripping it like how you would shake someones hand.
"Ben-Ben Tennyson! Get your filthy, rear-rubbing palms off my hand!" Shouted Reinrassic. He didn't know why, but in the back of his mind, he regretted how he just responded. 'Ben' frowned. "Look pal, I don't know who you think you are. But if you think I'm letting Ben waste his time helping your sorry ass, your obviously high-bred on something" said 'Ben', then he looked at the camera with his right hand on the left side of his lips. "And definitely not the good stuff either."
Reinrassic would blink if he could, this wasn't Ben-Ben Tennyson? "I don't like him that much either, but he did just save us, so give him his hand back" said Kurumu, defending Reinrassic. 'Ben' turned to the monster girls. "Nice to see you to, Kurumu. Is that anyway to greet the hotter version of your Mate of Fate? I was only giving him a handshake" He said, then he gripped harder on Reinrassic's lost hand, making blood leak out of its wrist.
"Ben, stop it! Your going to hurt Reinrassic's hand!" Pleaded Moka. "Oh please, like he really feels anything from it right now. Listen Moka, as sexy as you are, I'd prefer if she was out" said 'Ben', reaching for something. "Wait, what are y...?"
He pulled it off.
FLASH!
When she was awakened, she didn't expect to be face-to-face with vampire-like Ben again. She noticed the Rosario in his hand and for some reason, she felt violated, both herself and for her other. Something about this Ben touching her holy item made her angry, she snatched it back quickly. "Give me that! Didn't your mother teach you to not touch things that don't belong to you?" Snapped Inner Moka, putting the Rosario in her pocket. "Aw come on, baby! Don't be like..." vampire 'Ben' was saying, but...
SLAP!
"I'm not your baby, asshole. You don't know a thing about me or her, so don't pretend like you do" said Inner Moka. 'Ben' rubbed the cheek she hit. "Well, they do say love hurts. But really, back me up here. You really think Ben should waste his time helping this excuse for an alien? I mean, even their name is a play on hybrid... ironic considering he talks about being pure" said 'Ben'.
Ugh, it was like talking to her own reflection! Inner Moka now understood how her friends/rivals felt about her pride/arrogance, maybe she should tone it down a bit from now on... nah! Putting that thought aside, she got right in the American vampires face. "It's not up to you, jerk-off! You and Ben share a body now, get used to it!" She said. 'Ben' just smirked at her. "Heh, any closer, one thing may lead to another and..."
SLAP!
Inner Moka slapped him again on the other cheek, harder this time. When 'Ben' recovered and turned to face her, his face didn't hold the same conceited expression but rather... something else. "Ugh... the first 2 were free since I like you..." 'Ben' started. Inner Moka was really getting ticked off. Whether it was the fact Ben's persona flipped like a flapjack or this Ben's haughty nature, even she wasn't sure... but it really glazed her doughnuts. She went to slap him for a third time.
...
...
...
He caught her wrist.
"The 3rd... you'll have to WORK FOR!" Roared the vampire version of Ben, tossing the feminine vampire into the distance, a small crashing sound was heard from a rock formation 50 yards away. "Damn tsundere chick. As for you, Mister Purity... I hope your lefty" said 'Ben', his egoistic tone replaced by a cold-hearted one. Reinrassic gave Kurumu a pleading look that said: "Succubus... help me!" Part of Kurumu was uncomfortable with this, could she really force Ben against his will?
Maybe when they first met, but she truly loved him... that, and she promised the others she would not to use her powers as an unfair advantage, she preferred to win his heart fair and square. Then again, this Ben clearly wasn't the Ben she knew, so she decided to make this one exception, though she felt sick to her stomach about it for numerous reasons. Posing and using her Love Charm, she unleashed her spell on 'Ben'.
Although 'Ben's' eyes didn't change due to Love Charm, it appeared to be working. He seemed to glide over to Kurumu and...
SMOOSH!
He pressed his rip, toned chest against her's. Her amorous side began to build up inside of her, and it was taking every ounce of her willpower NOT to give in and rub against him. She LOVED this, her crush this close to her. But right now she had to focus and keep 'Ben' under control until this transformation wore off or he gives up... the latter seemed unlikely, so the 10 minute limit was her only option.
Oh no...
...
...
.. he started to squeeze... er, well you know. Kurumu turned beat red, him touching her was something she always dreamed off! It felt f*****g amazing, 10x better than when she touched herself or fantasized about him! She held in a pleasurable moan that was forming in her throat, she had to hold on, just a little longer. Part of her felt ashamed as this was considered cheating to win his affections, but this Ben wasn't her Mate of Fate. It was the same [slightly different] body, but nowhere near the Ben she fell in love with.
'Ben' stopped and cupped Kurumu's chin. Oh sweet Jesus, is he gonna kiss her? 'Oh my god... he's so... handsome... NO! No Kurumu, now's not the time!' She thought, stopping her hormonal reveries, or at least suppressed them. Her body was on overload/overdrive, by both hornyness and every fiber of her being fighting it. She couldn't keep this up much longer, her succubus instincts were starting to creep up on her, all of this high-intensity sexual teasing was driving her over the edge!
His lips drew closer... closer... Kurumu just stared, but she couldn't hold back anymore! Like Kevin Hart would say: Jesus, take the wheel! Closing her eyes, she leaned in... the distance closed that much faster! They were a mere inch apart, both could feel their breaths hit the others lips... just one more inch, and onward to paradise!
A whisper said, "Nice try."
Kurumu's eyes shot open, but not before 'Ben' shoved her away over to the Highbreed, making her skid across the sand. "Now's not... the time for a mating ritual... get my hand!" Shouted/Begged Reinrassic, annoyed. But Kurumu was too tired both mentally and physically (and emotionally) to carry out Reiny's... request. "Now, where was I? Oh right, Rein-ASS-ic... better not drive stick shift anymore" said 'Ben', dropping the poor Highbreed's hand to the ground like it was garbage.
He went to step on it...
Then, running against the sand was heard from 50 yards away, and got louder as it approached. A form appears before the group and it was an angry...
"YOU MOTHERF******!"
Well, that happened. So what did you think? Added a bit more maturity in here, so the rating of this fic may change. If some of you were thinking Vampire Ben was gonna be a hero, afraid not my friends. He's gonna be more of an antagonist/anti-hero. This was my master plan all along from the first fic, though it SHOULD have been obvious when my theme song actually says they'd go all-out on each other... and this won't be the first, or last, time either.
Also, did you think it was genius that I had Kurumu's Love Charm basically turned against her? I don't think that's ever been done before in both fanfiction and Manga (Although Kou was an incubus in anime, he didn't actually turn her magic on her, he just used his own), share your thoughts! Flames welcome as always and a big hand to Walter Cronkite, for his amazing flame! Hahaha, still laughing over it! ;)
One last thing, Vampire Ben's also gonna be a dry humorous character, you like his jokes so far and if so, should I tone it down or take it up? They all original too, so please let me know. Love you guys and see ya in the final page of the prologue! :)
