I need some help from everyone. It's about Vampire Ben, I'm stuck on what to call him. Calling him Inner Ben or Ben's Vampire Form is getting really old, REALLY fast. If anyone has any idea's on a name, please do share. Or should I not give him an actual name at all?
And if ANY of you say call him Whampire, I'm discontinuing this. :P
Speaking of which, Whampire may or may not appear, still deciding. If I do have him fly on in, I have an epic battle scene prepared between him and Vampire Ben to fight for dominance, lets just say the Omnitrix isn't big enough for the 2 of them. Until then, the only rule for name ideas is to not send me Whampire, though I'm digging my own grave now since I know for a fact the trollers under the fanfic bridge will spam it in the review section. Not that I care though, its they're electricity they're wasting.
Chapter 5: War for all Worlds + Vampire, Part 3
Coming to his senses, Ben woke up... and was greeted by the sight of thousands of warships! "BEN!" He heard someone call for him, it was his cousin Gwen, sliding down the crater Way Big made. Well, at least it wasn't...
SMOOSH! (3x)
"Oh my gosh, Ben! Are you hurt?!"
"Please don't die on us again."
"We haven't gotten to the part where you save the day and I reward you!"
A witchling, yuki onna and succubus... in that exact order (AN: It was originally succubus, witchling and yuki onna; but I felt this fit the character personalities better). "Heh, this never gets old" said vampire Ben, enjoying this moment... not so much as the outside Ben. Gin, Kevin and Darkstar happened to be in a group at this point. "We're born with the power, yet he gets the women" said Darkstar. "Tell me about it" said Kevin, free to say this since Gwen wasn't near him. "It's the same way back home, IT'S NOT FAAAAAAAAAAAAIR!" Cried Gin, gushing wolf tears.
Gwen and Inner Moka helped Ben up after she... kicked the party of the block we'll say, much to the other Ben's annoyance (AN: That ones for you, Brod Road. Your super-kick moment is coming, this was just a sample). "Damn, and I was just having a growth spurt" he commented. The human Ben couldn't help but think; this side of Moka was more eager to inflict damage than usual. Ben also noticed for some reason, she was more protective. Maybe cause an alien invasion wasn't what she was used too? Yeah, maybe that was it. Or was it... something else?
"We're too late" said Gwen worriedly. "If you have any ideas, now's the time" said Inner Moka. Though she tried to hide the concern in her voice, Ben picked up on it. Ben pondered for a moment. "Ok, new plan!" He announced.
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He was stared at for about 10 seconds before he spoke up. "Workin' on it, gimme a minute!" Ben said. "Your silence is VERY reassuring" said Kevin. Ben snapped his fingers. "Got it, we break into the Highbreed control tower and force the commander in charge to order a retreat" he said proudly.
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"Waltz in and politely ask a bunch of killer-plants to bloom somewhere else? THAT'S your big plan?" Asked Darkstar, clearly unimpressed. "And I just suggested that last chapter, you asswipe!" Said the other Ben. "Hey, how many times did I beat you? Twice?" Ben asked Darkstar, either ignoring or not hearing his vampiric self. "Technically once, though I can't imagine how at this point" said Darkstar. "The control tower will be the most heavily guarded building, how do you purpose we get inside?" Asked Azmuth.
"Leave that to me" said Kevin. "You have an idea?" Asked Inner Moka. "Yes... yes I do" Kevin said.
-TIME BREAK-
"Drive in a car, that constantly gets damaged as a running gag... THIS is your idea?" Asked Gwen. She, Ben and of course Kevin went into his car upon his request. "Yup, thought we'd go out in style" said Kevin, pressing a button on the dashboard that no one noticed before. Kevin's car transformed before their very eyes!
First; circuitry designs resembling Upgrade glowed around the car, then 2 guns with 3 barrels sprouted out in front, the wheels grew in size like a Hummer-H2, and a missile launcher popped out of the trunk and placed itself on top of the car. "Whoa, when'd you get all this stuff?" Asked Ben. "Whenever we came across alien tech, I threw it in the trunk and..." Kevin was saying. "Worked on the car" finished Gwen. "Bingo" said the Osmosian. Everyone outside was surprised (except Paradox, maybe he knew this would happen?), they've never seen anything quite like this before. "WOW! Human technology is amazing, it's just like magic!" Said Ruby with sparkling eyes, not realizing what it really was, earning sweatdrops from those who did (again, excluding the Time Walker).
Ben, Gwen and Kevin emerged from the vehicle that would put the Mach-5 to shame; and re-discussed the plan once more. Everyone knew what they would do, how they would do it and where to go to complete their tasks. Their was a hair pulling, washtub bashing, flash freezing argument between certain females about who would go in Kevin's car to sit next to a certain boy.
Kevin saw this coming from a thousand miles away, and pressed another button. The car grew longer, adding another row of passenger seats. It was now a Highlander of Death! "Guess Argit was right to install another row for chick-scoping" Kevin said, he then felt mana power-up behind him. "What did you just say?" Asked a glowing-eyed Gwen. "I-I said, er... t-to add another row for... uh. SHOPPING! Yeah-haha, that's it" Kevin chuckled, nervously.
Getting back in the driving arsenal; Inner Moka, Kurumu, Mizore, Yukari (who wanted to sit on Ben's lap, but got a assertive "no" from the other girls, especially Gwen), Ben, Gwen, and Kevin drove off. The Great Ice Cube of China was blocking their path... nothing that a few missiles couldn't fix. Then came a brown truck in an attempt to stop them. "Your gonna stop, right?" Asked Yukari. "Nope" smirked the driver, pressing his favorite button.
KA-FLOOSH!
Whatever was in that delivery truck, its gone now... but it WAS flammable! Focusing her power, Gwen managed to surround the car in a dome of mana and made it float through the flames safely. The artillery-mobile returned to ground floor with a crash and kept driving. Inner Moka and Kurumu's chest landed near Ben's crotch, much to the annoyance of the 2 monsters' in the back. "This is why we drive sober or get pulled over!" Said Ben, slightly red from the close contact. "And never let the group delinquent take the wheel" said Inner Moka, luckily none noticed her red face. "No one likes backseat drivers from the peanut gallery" said Kevin.
"Can we do that again? Only this time..." said Kurumu, seductively. "Meven Aweg" said Gwen, dryly. Kurumu just kept talking, but no one could understand her.
-TIME BREAK-
All was calm in the control tower...
Until the front door was burned down by Swampfire. Inner Moka assured she would handle it... didn't work out too well and she had to be pulled out. Kevin couldn't help but crack a joke, earning him an express elevator trip back down to earth. "Ow... I'm glad I absorbed the wall first" said the poor ruffian, snapping his spine back into its natural S-curve. He had to run all the way back up, or this episode would have been over.
"Team Tennyson... that's who you all are, isn't it?" Asked the Highbreed Commander,. He's never seen Ben in person, but he was unimpressed when he did. And 4 of his Highbreed brothers fell before this vermin? The commander expected more, but those females were new faces... they were still placid to him though. And the energy coming from them, what was it? "All you lesser species look alike to me" he continued.
"Yeah, yeah... your all so pure and everyone else is a maggot. Heard it all before" said Swampfire. "If your so superior, why do you enslave us vermin?" Asked Mizore, mockingly. "Shouldn't you do it yourselves, unless you meanies aren't as strong as you think" Yukari mocked too. "And you can't even regenerate your bodies? How does that make you better than anybody else?" Kurumu mocked as well. "Honestly, you Highbreed are just bullies. Preying on the weak and forcing them to do your jobs... THAT, is a lesser being" finished Inner Moka, completing the taunt.
"Mocking me will get you nowhere. You can either accept your fates with the rest of your race and die quickly... or long and miserable at my hand" said the Highbreed Commander. "How about... neither! Call. It. Off" ordered Swampfire. "Foolish children... destroy them, but Tennyson is mine" said the commander. With 18 hisses, 18 DNAliens charged at the group. Ben's team was froze with fear...
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But the controlled human-aliens went THROUGH the 7 high schoolers and knocked each other out!
"WHAT?!" Shouted the Highbreed Commander. In his book, this was impossible! Were those mongrels fakes, holograms? "Did I mention I absolutely LOVE casting illusions?" Said Kurumu. Whatever she did wore off, as the group of so-called 'parasites' began to move. "Ugh... that felt weird" said Kevin. "A warning would have been nice" said Gwen. Swampfire charged at the commander, but he was pushed aside by one of the other Highbreed. Swampfire slid on the floor toward the feet of the 3rd Highbreed... where his head was stomped in.
"And so it ends, another insect falls... just as your grandfather destroyed himself trying to stop us. As for the rest of you, you will join him soon" said the commander, pointing to the group and the 2 Highbreed officers made beelines to the insects that dared interfere with this worlds imminent destruction. They stopped 10 feet in front of their targets however. "What are you fools doing? I said to..." the commander attempted to say.
2 forms burst with immense power, the 1st ones eyes turned redder than usual and the others human skin evaporated off her person. "You bastards need..." said the 2nd form. "To know your PLAAAACE!" Roared the 1st form. Both Highbreed officers were sent out of opposite windows by either a blast of energy or a bone-shattering kick.
Inner Moka leapped at the commander, but he was well-trained and blocked each of her assaults. Gwen, in her true Anodite form, floated motionless. "So much power... I can defeat the Highbreed alone!" Said Gwen, her voice even scaring Inner Moka, who was still kicking away. Kevin rushed over to her and grabbed her shoulders. "Gwen, you gotta shut it down!" He partially begged. "NO! I have to do this for everyone... for Ben... for you" said Gwen. "Your grandma said it would take 75 years to master this power" Kevin reminded her. "We don't have 75 years... we don't even have 75 minutes! THEY NEED TO BE STOPPED, NOW!" Said the Anodite.
"YOU'LL LOOSE YOUR HUMANITY, IS THAT WHAT YOU WANT?! You won't remember your life, you won't remember Ben... you won't remember me. Come back to me, Gwen... please. I can't loose you" said Kevin, pulling the powered-up human/Anodite hybrid into a hug. After what seemed like 75, painfully long seconds; Gwen returned to her human self, saying Kevin's name and returning the hug. "That was scary, but so romantic!" Beamed Yukari, still shaken up by seeing her idols overwhelming level of power.
"If your all done being lovey-dovey, we're in the middle of a fight here!" Inner Moka reminded them, giving the commander a kick straight into a control panel. But Inner Moka wasn't done yet, she charged at him again only to be grabbed by her foot and thrown into the back wall. The commander wasn't finished either, and got up to continue. "I heard you like things cold... have you tried being freezer burned?" Said Mizore, using her power over ice to trap the Highbreed in a giant block.
They were about to head to where Swampfire laid... but the ice cracked and the commander broke out forcefully from the inside. Mizore was in his reach, so it was her turn to be backhanded into said wall. Yukari used another spell Gwen taught her called Meena Goh, which is a concentrated beam of heat; something the Highbreed are weak to according to Moka, Ben and Kurumu. It shot from the star in her wand and sizzled on the right side of the Highbreed's chest, making him grunt in discomfort.
This didn't stop him however, and she would have been grabbed if not for Kurumu slashing his left side from the air. Yukari also managed to summon her well-known washtub on his head, slightly disorienting him, but he still had good enough vision to grab both monsters' and bang their bodies together, making them groan. He then dropped them to the side like garbage bags. He lifted his hand to fire his fingers at Gwen and Kevin... but a silver-haired blur prevented this and sent him into another control panel, sparks flying. "I'm gonna tear you, APART!" Inner Moka roared, she was really losing her patience with this guy. Not being able to keep someone down for at least 20 seconds was pride-damaging for her...
Ok, the Dravek was down for 19.8 seconds, but still...
She unleashed a barrage of lightning-fast kicks, the same attack she used on Kuyo last year, only this time she was at full strength. Kicking him to the right into yet another panel, the commander struggled to get to his feet. He's never felt such power from a vermin before, it's like she wasn't a human... but a monster... they didn't REALLY exist, did they? He's heard some reports of a kicking vampire and an apparition-casting succubus, he didn't believe them and those Highbreed and DNAliens were relived of duty. But was there some truth behind them? The one called 'Kurumu' seemed to create a mirage of some sort, so was it possible that this 'Moka' was the vampire?
Only one way to find out.
As the vampire lunged at him for another possible round, he opened a drawer-like slot from behind him. One of the DNAliens insisted on drinking bottled water, something to do with its host apparently. Having no idea on how to open the accursed thing, he poked a finger into the top behind his back and swiped the water bottle forward, make it rain straight for...
BUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!
Inner Moka lit up like a neon "OPEN" sign. She tripped over herself, weakened and she was hissing in pain. Kevin would have went to help her, but at some point while Inner Moka was having a superkick party (AN: Another superkick sample for ya), Gwen passed out due to the power she almost unleashed. She is a strong one, but using a technique that would have taken almost 80 years to master left the poor girl exhausted. (AN: Before I'm flamed, think about what you would do in a situation like this. Your girlfriend/boyfriend was attacked, but someone else you know is BEING attacked. You'll say one thing now, but when it DOES happen to you, I guarantee you'll do something else. It's happened to me more than once, human beings just do with they do when the adrenaline starts pumping, and logic is thrown out the window. Like the commissioner said on Blue Bloods: "a guy is holding a gun at you, what would you do... too late, your dead")
Getting up, the Highbreed Commander walked over and picked Inner Moka up by her long silver hair. "It appears the legends are true... your not a regular mongrel... but a vampiric one. You are a worthy opponent, but alas still a poor excuse for a being. Once I destroy this world, perhaps I'll search for yours. Sadly, you won't get to..." said the Highbreed Commander, pulling his free arm back... (AN: Was this good? The original was Inner Moka would be pinned down on the floor)
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It was grabbed... by a headless plant! It began to reform back into Swampfire's pretty face.
"Put. Her. Down." He growled, with his free hand holding a fireball and his emblem glowing dark green. "Why do I always have to save your perfectly-shaped ass?" Asked/Stated 'Ben'. 'Great, you woke me up, now give control back please' thought Swampfire. "Didn't I say I was taking over when you mess up? I'm not a comedian, I don't kid" said 'Ben' to Swampfire. The Methansian's grip was tight as a noose, so much so that the Highbreed holding Inner Moka couldn't move his own arm!
Although it would hurt like a bitch later, Inner Moka used her body as a swing to... well, swing a kick in the grey-torso Highbreed's chin, making him let go of her hair. Now she was thankful for all those commercials that her outer half saw and begged Ben to buy her while living with him, that Dove shampoo really DOES make hair stronger! Now that she was safe from further harm, Swampfire did something that he normally can't do: threw the captain of the invasion across the room... with one hand and VERY little effort.
But he wasn't finished.
The leader was thrown into a wall, where Swampfire blasted him with an odd look in his eye. Was that... pleasure? 'What the hell? Your not supposed to kill him!' Said the human Ben, hoping to stop this crazed vampire self of his. "Look here, ya green-eyed faggot. This red-eyed bag of pot tried to kill you and your friends'... and you wanna just let him live?! Get your priorities straight, dickweed!" 'Ben' practically yelled in his mind to his human self. 'Ok, you got me there. But we NEED him to order the invasion off!' Human Ben yelled back, getting annoyed at his vampire forms lack of thinking.
Ben couldn't help but wonder, now that he's seen himself in a mirror in a sense, was he really this bad when he was younger?
No time to worry about that, he had to take back control somehow. As much as Ben wanted to stomp these Highbreed into the ground, killing the one who literally held the key to freedom wasn't the smartest move. Inner Moka tired to turn Swampfire around, when that didn't work she tried pulling his arms down. No dice, it's like his limbs were locked by rigor mortis! She knew better though, Ben would never deliberately kill someone unless there was no other choice. Something... or rather, someone... was wrong. Nothing a good kick to the weak point couldn't fix, but Inner Moka couldn't bring herself to do it. If it was Ben doing this, then sure he deserved it. The other Ben was in control at the moment, but it was still her Ben's body...
Wait... HER Ben?! Aw geez, now she sounds like her dimwitted counterpart! The Vampire Ben would never let her live this down if he found out...
"Captain, we have extra cargo coming in on the stern. I'll never let her live this down. Oh man, but if this was Kurumu or if Moka had her bust..." crackled the Vampire Ben (AN: No one heard him except Ben, since he's still in the watch). While he was having perverted thoughts of him and Inner Moka/Kurumu doing the... er, no way to sugarcoat it, the nasty; Ben was able to get back control and stop his streaming flames from burning the commander to death... he's alive, but has seen better days. "What the...? Goddammit, I was distracted!" Said 'Ben', annoyed he lost control. 'Look pal, we share a body. So we need to learn how to get along... AND listen to each other, don't do that again' Ben reprimanded. "Or what, you'll cry to mommy? Oh, mommy! My inner vampire is making me do awful things! WAH, WAH, WAH!" Mocked the vampire.
Swampfire smirked. 'I'll never use ya again... and have Azmuth lock ya up.'
"You. Wouldn't. Dare."
'Try me. And find out.'
Swampfire never got a response back, so he approached the downed captain and threw some seeds at him, they grew into large vines and trapped the alien. "Give the order... your invasion's over" he said.
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"hehehehehe, hahahahahaha, HAHAHAHAHAHA!" Laughed the Commander of Breed. "You think he's joking?" Asked Kurumu in an annoyed tone. "Or did Ben burn off your sense of hearing? Pull your ships back, you've lost" said Inner Moka. "The only joke is you lowly inferiors! I don't have the authority to end the attack, only the Highbreed Supreme can and unfortunately for you, he's safe on the home world. You made a valiant effort, but it was all in vain... in less than 1 earth hour, your lives are forfeit."
So that's it? All hope was lost? "Well, this can't get any worse" said Kevin... and 60 DNAliens armed with laser guns ran up to them. "So I COULD have killed him then?" Asked Omnitrix Ben, off topic. "Yup" said Swampfire, but it wasn't clear if he was answering Kevin's question or Vampire Ben's. Just as all the DNAliens raised they're guns to fire...
SMACK!
One went up in the air.
SMACK!
Then two.
SMACK! SMACK! SMACK!
Three, four and five...
"Move over, alien freaks! Ya in my way!" Said a Fourarms-looking teen, knocking away the DNAliens like were hallow pillars. Then, a blue blur swiped all of the blasters from the DNAliens that Fourarms-mini didn't get to, it stopped to reveal an XLR8-like female who dropped the guns in one big pile. That's when another teen that had what looked like quills on his face and elbows appeared, shooting said quills into the guns and destroying them. "Helen?" Asked Gwen. "Pierce?" Asked Swampfire. "And Halloween reject?" Asked Kevin. Inner Moka and Kurumu also recognized them; Helen Wheels, her brother Pierce Wheels and Manny Armstrong. These 3 were last seen in the Null Void trying to settle things down there. "Wait... but that means..." said Swampfire.
SCREECH!
"How's it going, kids?" Asked a voice from outside. The next thing everyone saw was a giant potato-like bat with tentacles flying inside and scaring the DNAliens off, someone was sitting on the creatures back, riding it like a horse. Seeing who it was, Swampfire flashed back into Ben and Gwen ran with him to hug... "Grandpa Max!"
What a nice tender moment :)
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Until the Commander ripped himself free and raised his hand! "BEN! LOOK OUT!" Shouted Inner Moka, failing to hide her emotions. Looking behind them, the 3 humans saw the Highbreed's claws!
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PEW, PEW, PEW!
"ARGH!" Grunted the Highbreed in pain and grabbed his shoulder, which was pierced by thorns. He looked up, and saw his attacker. "YOU! You traitor...!" He tried to say, but he was silenced by more thorns into his chest, knocking him into the controls for at least the 4th time that night... and he passed out. Not dead, just exhausted. Looking at the downed Highbreed, Ben noticed the darts in his chest... strangely familiar GREEN darts. "I believe the human phrase: need a hand... is entirely appropriate" said the attacker, coming out of the shadows with an equally familiar arm.
Ben said one word, "Reiny!"
1) Joshua-Obryan.549: Love that song. Idk if your trolling or not, but I get the feeling your quoting this song as a compliment, so thank you :)
2) Nigel: Ok, this troll is acceptable. I love Doctor Evil! :D
3) Ah Punch: Ooh, ouch. Public Enemy, you just got screwed... and didn't get kissed either. XD
4) Indominous: If you don't like my ideas, don't waste your time reading it then. I mean really, is it MY fault you have to rage on me because YOU had to open this fanfic page? :P
HA! You all thought I forgot to shout-out, didn't ya? I decided to mix it up a little for this chapter. And do you like Reinrassic's return? I personally think its so much better than how he popped out of nowhere at the last second in the canon.
I also think those trollers who say this story is horrible are total liars. If you didn't like this, why do you keep coming back? Why do you feel its necessary to review if you claim to hate it so much? It goes to show, people can't be honest with themselves sometimes. You obviously like this story to an extent if you keep returning to the scene of the crime.
I also love how Nigel and Indominous left reviews at [almost] the same time, so the supposed "multiple trollers" are actually just one person. That or they just happened to review at the same exact time, which is a really big IF. I'll cya all in the next one!
One question for all of you though, would you all like to see more "maturity" down the path or keep it a PG rating? If you don't get what I mean; I'm talking about sexual content/contact, maybe even a sex scene (or Lemon as I think you guys call them). I'm pretty sure the manga had an implied one, didn't it? Sorry, I never located my Rosario+Vampire collection and at this point, I'm thinking perhaps the movers I hired may have stolen them.
Please let me know!