Please leave some reviews for this chapter because out of all of them I'm pretty sure I double the size of this one chapter compare to the original one. I'll like you to tell me how I did with the characters in this chapter because I feel like I did more with them than the previous chapters.
So I don't remember why I went with the height I did. I think Job was supposed to be younger and I looked up heights for different ages on google at the time, but anyway, his new height is five-foot-eight. Please tell me if that height sounds good and what's a good website to find heights for people of different ages. Also, I could have sworn at the time Arsenic was some sort of green like color, oh well I change it to Mint Green.
These changes have been added to the previous chapters as well.
Disclaimer, I do not own any of the Hyperdimension Neptunia games, only any OCs I add to it.
Talk "Cheese"
Thought 'Cheese'
Pulled Into a New World~
Chapter 3: Land of Snow
12 Days.
Landmass Planeptune.
Time 11:00 am.
"Come on Brat the transporter is this way." Job said as he walks in the direction of the transporter with Peashy a little way behind him. Job is wearing a white long sleeve shirt, a black jacket, black pants, and black and white shoes.
"I'm not a brat!" Peashy yield while swaging her arms in the air as she catches up to him. "I still hate the color of these clothes." She said while pouting and looking down at clothes.
Peashy is wearing a purple jacket with black lines around the collar, bottom of the jacket, up the zipper, going down each side of the sleeves, and around the end of the sleeves. She is also wearing black pants and a pair of purple and white sneakers.
"When I get the chance, I'll make you some better clothes that you'll like, but for now we're going to Lowee." Job said as he continues walking in the direction of the transporter.
"You can sew?" Peachy asked with a questioning look.
"Yes, he can sew and much more, but we'll keep it at that for now." Said Lily in a mischievous tone as a blue holographic girl appears on the now repeated watch.
"We're almost there so keep up Brat." Job said in a joking tone as he heads up to the transporter.
"It's Peashy!" She said in an angry tone while pouting and catching up to him.
Landmass Lowee.
Time 11:15 am.
"So what are we doing here in Lowee again?" Lily asked looking around the area.
The group was in a snowy forest heading tours the capital of Lowee.
"Well, I heard how you can use magic here and that Lowee is the most advanced in it," Job said with Peachy walking six feet behind him looking around at the scenery. "So if I can learn how to use or at least how it works."
"It can become a pretty useful weapon if needed or knowing how to stop it." Lily finish with a smiling.
"Yep." Job replied still thinking until Peachy pulled on his sleeve to get his tension. "What do you need Brat?"
"Are we almost there?" She said before pouting. "And I'm not a brat."
Job starts petting her head, as she closes her eyes and begins calming down because of it. "We'll be there soon. Then I'll get us a hotel room or something so you can rest." He said as he stops petting Peashy head to her disappointment. "I'm planning on being here for about a week, so I can learn to use as much magic as I can. I'll also need to see what all you know, so when I start teaching you to fight and homeschooling you." Job said as he begins to see the city. "For now I think it's about time we go and get something to eat."
Peashy nods her head as her stomach begin growing. "What would you like Brat?" Job asked looking down at her.
"I don't know you can choose." She said pouting because of the brat comment.
"Well, I'll see what I can get." Job said as he starts to ask around.
Time 11:30 am.
Job and Peashy are sitting in a restaurant having some hamburger. " So Brat, what do you think of the hamburger?"
Peashy left eyebrow twitches a little for a second. "It yummy." She said with a smile appearing on her face.
"Good, now then, I guess I'll get us a room, and you will stay there for the time being while I go to the library to see what I can learn about magic." Job said while starting to stand up.
"I don't want to be stuck in a hotel room all day." Said Peashy while flailing her arms around.
"Well, you'll have to stay there for the time being." Job said making Peashy pout. "But, I'll see about getting you some game to play with, ok Brat?" Job asked while looking at her.
"Fine," Peashy said while crossing her arms. "and stop calling me Brat." She said, but before she could say anything else, Job started walking tours the exit, with Peashy jumping off her seat and runs after him. "Hey, wait for me!"
Time 12:00 pm.
"Okay, so this is where we'll be staying for the time being and tomorrow I'm going to take you to the forest to see how well you can fight." Job said while setting some stuff down and then starts to leave. "Now, I'll be at the library to do some research on magic, so I'll see you later." He said opening the door, until Peachy grads the back of his left pant leg.
"I want to go to." She said while still holding on to his pant leg.
"No your not, you're only going to get bored sitting there and start causing trouble, so you're going to stay here." Job said looking at Peashy. "Got it, Brat?" He said, but she wouldn't let go.
"No, I want to go with you," Peashy said with a determined look. "I won't let you go alone." She said before looking down. "Besides you'll only leave me just like my parents did." She said in a low voice to which Job didn't catch.
Even though he missed what Peashy said he still got the point. "Tell you what, if your good while I'm gone, I'll get us some pizza to eat tonight, sound good?" Job asked, and she started letting go.
"As long as you promise you will come back." Said Peashy as she raises her head to look him.
"I will." Job said and rubbing Peashy head to which she lets go of his pant leg. After he stops rubbing her head job leaves while Peashy goes and sits on the edge of bed closest to the door and stares at the door.
"Peashy seem to be a very lonely girl." Said Lily as Job walks down a set of stairs. "Hey, maybe we should have her go against a group of Dog- ACK!"
Before she could finish her sentence, he pressed a button on the watch to which she is then shocked. "And I think you should stop that sentence before you finish." Job said putting his arm down.
"How did you do that!" Lily asked in an angry voice. "I'm a program you can't hurt me!" She yellow as her hologram appeared with Lily on her back flailing her arms and legs, before another yep come from Lily as she is shocked again.
"I found a few unique items in the junkyard back at Planeptune." Job said with a smirk on his face. "So be prepared to be punishment for now on.
Lily is standing there sticking her tongue out but stop when she saw him hover his finger over the button.
Time 8:00 pm.
Job walks up some stairs holding a few plastic bags in his left hand heading to his room on the second floor. "Ok, I read as much as I could today on magic, and I think I was about to understand most of it, tho using it is a whole other story." He said as Job stands at the top of the stairs. "I got the Brat some fighting gloves to help protect her hands for when we train tomorrow, so we should be good to go." Standing in front of his door.
Lily appears on the watch. "I wonder if Peashy was a good girl while we were gone." She said. "We were gone for quite a while. Wanna bet she got so bored that she was running and jumping all over the places and mi- ACK!" Lily was saying before getting shocked again by Job.
"You should learn when to shut your mouth now that I can punish you." He said with a smirk on his face. " Anyway, we'll see how good she been in a couple of moment." Job said while putting his hand on the doorknob. "Also, I think you are worst than Brat."
"Well, the place may be a little trashed." Said Lily while preparing for a possible shock but he only shrugged his shoulders to her relief. She is scared of being shocked again due to never feeling pain before till now, and she doesn't like it.
After a couple of seconds, Job opens the door and walks into to see Peashy laying down on the edge of the bed with her feet hanging off the edge sleeping. He sits the bags on the counter in the kitchen area. "Hey Brat time to wake up, we're going to get some pizza." Job said as he takes out some books from the Library from one of the bags and puts them on the room's desk.
Peashy starts to wake up after hearing Jobs' voice. "Oh, your back. What time is it?" She asked while looking around the room for a clock.
"It's a little past eight." He said while turning to her. "Now, get ready, we're going out to get a pizza to bring home." Job said as Peashy stands up putting her hands in the air and stretches.
"Why do I have to go with you?" She asked tilting her head to the side.
"I figured you been cooped up in here all day sleeping so I thought you might want to for some fresh air Brat." He said moving some stuff on the table around so they can eat when they come back. "Unless you don't want to come."
"No, I'll come, and it's Peashy." She said standing next to the door.
"Someone seems eager to go." Said Lily in a mischievous tone. "Were you lonely while Master was gone." She said teasing her.
After she said that Peashy checks went redden up some. "No, I wasn't!" She yelled.
"Oh real- ACK!" Lily began teasing her again until Job shock her making Lily fall flat on her face to Peashy's amusement. "Owie."
"We're leaving now." He said heading torses the door. "Come on Brat."
"Ok." She said while smiling but her left eye twitching ever so slightly as they go through the door while Job closes and locks it.
"So what do you want on your half of the pizza?" He asked looking down at her.
They continue talking as they walk.
Void Area.
"Who did this?!" Yelled an angry female voice. "Who messed with my world! I had this all planned out, but then someone had to come and ruin all of my hard work!" She continues yelling into the void like area.
As the voice continues yelling a white glowing slim female figure begin appearing in the void; The glowing figure looks to be five-foot-four, glowing white hair down to her waist C size breast with Mint Green orbs where its eyes would be with white power symbols in them and their arms crossed.
"I bet it was one of the World Goddesses from one of the other universe." The figure said while tilting her head up and putting her left hand on their chin. "Wait a minute." All of a sudden she remembers something as she looks straight up with her arms at their side and hands balled up. "AUTHOR!"
What?
"You know what!" The figure yelled. "I thought we had an agreement that I would have come troll over this world so I can make them have se- I mean to have them do adventure I would make up." The figure was saying with a light shade of pink on its face area and trying to look away from the author which is quite hard since she can't see him before looking straight up again. "Just look at how boring this is." She said trying to hide her mistake.
You mean for your porn stash.
Right after that was said the female figure face area went cherry red while flailing her hands in front of herself, but before she could say anything, the author started talking again.
Anyways, I don't know what is going on I've been locked out of almost everything that has to do with change back to how it was set up. There shouldn't be anyone more powerful than the author when it comes to writing the story.
The female figure brights her head down while putting her right hand on their chin. "Then who messed with my-"
Live porn video.
The glowing figure looks back up with cherry red blush on her cheeks again staring daggers into the void above her. "I was not making a live pron video!" She denied while the top of her head was pushed down a little bit and moving as if someone had their hand on her head. All she could do was look away while grumbling to herself while redness on her face grow and saying. "No good lousy author."
Don't worry I'll try and figure out what's going on, bye for now Zero.
Zero floats there grumbling to herself for a couple of minutes with her cheek goes back to being cherry red. "I hate him so much."
Time 8:30 pm.
Job and Peashy are walking up the stairs to the second floor while he was holding the pizza in his left hand and using the other to dig into his pocket for the key while she had a big smile on her face. "Pizza pizza yummy, yummy pizza." Peashy sang while they stood there in front of their room door.
Job open in the door and Peashy runs in followed by him carrying the pizza in his left hand and the room key in the other. "Come on and set the pizza down already." She said taking a seat at the table. "I'm hungry."
"Ok, ok I'm working on it give me a sec." Job said sitting the pizza on the table, then taking off his watch and putting on the table as well, he then opens up one of the plastic bags from earlier, pulling out a pack of paper plates.
"You two seem to be having fun." Said Lily in a joyful tone.
"Yep." Said Peashy while smiling waiting for Job to give her her plate.
Job pulled out two paper plates and sat down at the table across from Peashy handing her a plate. "Here you go, Brat." He said as she took the plate from his hand.
"Peashy." She said with her left eyebrow twitching little before picking up a couple of slices and then starts eating.
The rest of the meal was pretty uneventful and after they were done eating Peashy sat on the floor watching TV, while Job was sitting down on the couch reading some books he rented out from the library and Lily sitting on the watch screen leaning against an invisible wall next to him watching TV along with Peashy.
Time 10:00 pm.
"Ok, it's time to go to bed Brat go brush your teeth and get change." Job said while getting up and walking next to Peashy.
"Ok." Replied Peashy with a tired voice getting up and grabbing some clothes, heading to the bathroom. After five minutes she came out in her purple pajamas and heads to the bedroom. "Good night." Said Peashy as she heads into the bedroom, gets on the bed before laying down and trying to fall asleep.
Job looks into the bedroom through the door to make sure Peashy is laying down. "Night Brat." then goes back to sitting on the couch and reading his books some more.
"Well, that was fun." Said Lily as her hologram body pops up on the watch. "So, then are you going to bed soon?"
"I'll be heading to bed in a couple of hours so don't worry." Job said while continuing to read his book. "Good night Lily."
"Night Master." Replied Lily before disappearing back into the watch.
As Job is reading, he hears the sound of a heavy object falling over in the bedroom. He gets up and walks and looks inside and what Job saw was the nightstand next to the bed knocked over with Peashy on her stomach with her right foot off the bed where the nightstand was. 'Wow, she fell asleep fast, and Brat has a strong kick even in her sleep.' He thinks while heading back to the couch 'Well, I get a feeling that the days to come are going to be quite fun.' Job thinks as he sits down. 'I wonder how she'll do with the monster in the morning.' He thinks as he starts reading again.
Please leave a review on how you think the story is going. Like how it compares to the original story (now called World Rewrite), how I'm doing with spelling mistakes, if I'm using some action correctly or not, and other stuff.
How did I do with the characters in this chapter?
I'm going to make this story M Rated because I have some ideas for future chapters and I want to make sure that whether it be sexual, gory or just too dark that I can do it and know it's rated correctly and to make sure you all are prepared and not surprised when it happens. I'll be changing it a couple a day after this chapter is out.
A question I still have; How old do you think each character in each Neptunia game, I would like to know how old you think they are, and I already saw a video for how old the CPUs might be, but how old do you think the humans are? Thank you ahead of time if you can help me.
Where you can find me.
My Twitter Dark7Thunder1.
The links to my Discord will be there since can't show them for some reason.
For those who follow me on twitter, I will be putting up URLs to full version of each chapter one or two days after posting it on Fanfiction. What do I mean by that? I mean doesn't let me use all the stuff I for this story, so I'll be posting it here first, and then giving you the URLs to reread them on my twitter.
I'll then put the URLs on my Discord two days after putting them on Twitter.
Have a nice day, bye.
End Chapter 3: Lan-
"HAHAHA!" Laugh a figure cover in the shadows with only his multicolor hair showing. "Oh man, Zero reaction was priceless!"The figure continued to laugh while falling over onto his back as tears started coming out of his eyes.
"Don't you think you're being a little childish with all that laughing (...)?" A female voice asked while walking out of a door of shadows.
The voice is revealed to be a girl that looks to be fifteen years old with fair skin with wristband size tattoo on her right wrist, a flat chest, emerald eyes, and light brown hair down to her waist with bangs that reach down to her eyes. She is wearing a light blue and dark blue bikini with shorty short jeans with pockets on both sides and is also unbuttoned and unzipped, with a pink phone in the left pocket and a black ring on her right ring finger.
"Don't be such a spoilsport Iffy." Said the shadowy figure as he tries to stop laughing while standing up. "You know you liked Zeros' reaction too."
"Yeah, what's your point, I think all World Heart's are a b**ch." Said Iffy while walking up next to him with her hands at her sides.
"How is Twilight going with her universe fusion experiment going?" Asked the figure while stretching his arms.
"She isn't getting much closer." Said Iffy while putting her left hand on her hip. "You should have seen the number of universes that were destroyed by her experiment, hehe!" She said laughing at the end a little. "So how's the world itself doing since you been so instead in it since you started messing with Zero?" Iffy asked looking at the giant light blue orb underneath them.
"It's been quite a lot of fun watch and see what happens." He said looking down then looking back up. "Well time we left, I got some planning to begin." The figure said heading tours the door of shadows with Iffy right behind him.
"So whos lives do I have to ruin this time?" She asked walking behind him and disappearing into the door of shadow.
End Chapter 3: Land of Snow