Hello once again everybody, it's me TheAwesomeCoolJay, and I'm here to give you another chapter in this story of mine. I turned 23 and I feel great, so great that I decided to type this! All right it's about time we finish with the last member of the Magic High Commission, of course there is Lekmet. But that all comes to if I decided to let him live or die. Haha, I'm in charge of things here, enjoy the chapter everybody.


Star vs. the Forces of Evil is owned by Daron Nefcy & Disney


"KIDS, REALLY!" The man with snakes arms shouted furiously as he lifted weights. "All the times I've been called childish, but this stunt of Glossaryck gets a pass?"

"Baa."

"Don't try to defend this Lekmet, we both know this is wrong!"

Rhombulus stood up from his weight bench still holding his weights, but his snake hand's mouth lost it's grip on the left side and caused the weight to fall on Rhombulus' foot. The muscle of the Magic High Commission screamed in pain and as he hopped around holding his injured foot. All of his hopping around would lead to another injury, as Rhombulus' good foot stepped on one his dumbbells and caused him to lose balance and fall to the floor.


TheAwesomeCoolJay: Dang I'm ruthless going in.


"Before you say I told you so, I was going to clean up around here, so don't even say it."

"Baa Baa." Lekmat still said as he shook his head like a disappointed parent.

"I told you not say it!" Rhombulus throwing a small tantrum to his friend and soon turn his attention to his let snake hand. "And you, what the heck man?"

"Being a hand and a living being at the same time is kind of hard dude." The left snake hand replied.

"Yeah you can't expect us to hold stuff that isn't food for that long." The right snake hand defending his other half's actions.

As Rhombulus argued with his hands, a portal was opened into their domain, getting everyone's attention. Appearing from the portal was the other members of the Magic High Commission, Hekapoo and Omnitraxus Prime, the latter was being pushed by Hekapoo on cart in crystal ball form.

"Having a fight with your hands again Rhombulus?" Omni asked in a not surprised tone.

"And you question why we have a time out corner for you." Hekapoo commented.

"Okay that's enough of the insults." He said, getting up walking to them. "So how bad did those kids fail?"

"They passed." Both of them answered.

"Aw looks like Gloss... WHAT!"

"She needs to be instructed more but the young Butterfly's magic potential is something to be amazed at." The master of space and time complimenting Star's power.

"What about tradition, it has always been 14 when the princess gets the wand!"

"Marco's not so bad either, kid's going to be the one of the best warriors across the dimensions." The scissors forger giving credit to the kid she trained.

"But he's just a human, a being from a planet that name literally means dirt!"

"Geez what's got you all cracked up?"

"Don't even make that kind of joke." Rhombulus said, taking great offense to that remark by Hekapoo. "Why aren't you two arguing more about this with Glossaryck?"

"Trust us Rhombulus, we were questioning this as much as you when Glossaryck brought this up." Omni responding to the irritated member. "His methods are strange, but in the end he knows what he's doing."

"This is ridiculous!"

"Okay if you're going to be like this, then we will handle things at the Bureaucracy of Magic without you." Hekapoo said as she cut open a portal to said place.

As the two of them were leaving, Lekmat was about to join but he was stopped when Rhombulus grabbed him by the arm. Lekmat turned to see why he would do that and at the moment Lekmat saw that his friend was giving him the look. The look meant that somebody wanted something and they wanted Lekmat's permission.

"I know I told you I stop doing this, but I need your permission."

"Baa?"

"I think those kids need to be tested by me... ya know, just to see if they are actually ready."

"Baa Baa, Baa Baa."

"You make a good point, I do go a bit overboard, but would a can of that nice Mewni corn change your mind." Rhombulus smoothly beginning his bribe.

Lekmat's mouth was watering of the idea of eating the corn and gnawing at the can. He became so lost in thought that it took the hissing of both of Rhomblus' snake hands to bring him back to reality.

"So is that a yes?"

"Baa Baa." Lekmat giving him the okay, while hiding his face because of the embarrassment.

"Awesome, your the best and I love you!"


TheAwesomeCoolJay: Relationships work like this, bribe your loved ones with things they love.


Back on Earth, more precisely Echo Creek Elementary, the kids were leaving school since classes were over. As usual, Star and Marco were walking home together but instead of talking about the fun they had at school, the two talked about the challenges they were faced with today.

"So you saw your future?" Marco curious about what Star went through. "How was it?"

"It was multiple futures actually and they were... not going to be good if I didn't step up." The princess answered while remembering that Marco spent some time with Jackie when she left. "Sooooooo, how things go with you and Jackie?"

"Things with her went great!" He said happy about the things he and his crush did. "We have a few things in common, we laughed at a few jokes, and Jackie and me will meet at the skatepark and practice skating together."

"A playdate that sounds wonderful." She said trying to be supportive, but her tone and expression seemed off.

"You okay?"

"I'm fine, I'm just hoping for a distraction or something."

Suddenly a portal was open underneath the two kids and both of them immediately fell through it. Coming out of the other side, the kids went up for a moment but gravity brought them down, with Marco landing first and Star landing on top of him.

"Huh, that actually worked."

"Ow, that didn't make sense." The safe boy not liking his current situation. "How did we go down just to fall up?"

"Marco I think we need to ask about that later."

He got what she meant once he saw that they aren't on Earth anymore. Looking around the kids saw that the place they were in was filled with a lot of crystals, big, small, and even some that had people inside of them.

"I got a bad feeling about this place."

"You should." Rhombulus said standing on a crystal above the kids. "Not only does this place hold the most evil beings in the universe, but it will be the place where you have your final test."

"Time-out guy!" Star said recognizing the MHC member.

"Wait what?"

"Oh yeah, short tempered Rhombulus, Hekapoo has told me a lot about this guy."

"Something nice?"

"Well more about how Glossaryck has to discipline you." Marco nervously explained.

"Whatever, test time!" The man angrily said while pointing his snake hands at the kids. "Defeat me in combat to prove if your worthy!"

"Easy." Both kids said as they got ready for battle.

Angered by that remark, Rhombulus jumped down from the crystal and was heading for the kids. They saw him coming and decided to separate from each other when he landed, and once Rhombulus was there he immediately put his attention on Star.

"Don't hate me Queen Moon." Rhombulus said with regret as he began to shoot crystals at the young girl.

The princess ran to avoid the incoming crystals, but Rhombulus was relentless and followed Star with the shooting crystals. When one crystal had grazed across her face, Star decided to go on the attack.

"Dagger Heart Blast!" Star announcing her attack.

Coming out her wand was heart shaped daggers that matched the crystals Rhombulus was shooting. This surprised the MHC member, but soon he would feel a slight pain coming from his side. In the corner of his eye, Rhombulus saw Marco pinching him.

"Hey there, do I have your attention." Marco asked he continued with the pinching.

"Annoying brat!" Rhombulus grunted as he brought one of his snake hands to face Marco. "Deal with this."

The snake quickly tried to end this by grabbing the boy, but Marco was quick to dodge it. Marco and the snake hand did this for a bit until the young boy was able to grab the snake by the throat. Marco then forced the snake to take a bite in Rhombulus' side, which made the man scream in pain. Thinking fast, Rhombulus made a large crystal between him Star to prevent her from hitting him and dropped to a knee.

"Your going to regret that!"

"If you think that hurts, wait till you get a load of this." Diaz told him as the boy cracked his knuckles.

Marco began to punch and kick at his downed opponent, each shot would go the leg and chest to end this fight quicker. At first Marco thought he was doing some damage, but his mind would change when he saw Rhombulus standing up and removing his snake hand from his side.

"But how?" The earthling said not believing what he saw.

"You're only strong in Hekapoo's dimension, anywhere else your just a weak joke." The MHC member chuckled as prepared to crystalize Marco. "Any comments?"

"Well it was a good thing I distracted you."

Confused at what that meant, horror would come to Rhombulus when he saw a light come from behind Marco. It was Star and it looked like her next spell was going to be something serious.

"Supersonic Leech Bomb!"

Marco jumped out of the way and the leeches had stuck themselves on Rhombulus. It seemed harmless at first but then the leeches began to quickly beep, Rhombulus had a bad feeling of what was coming next.

"Aw crud."

The leeches exploded, which sent Rhombulus flying across the Crystal dimension. Star and Marco got back together to celebrate their win, but it was cut short when they heard and saw Rhombulus get back up. He was about to go back and fight the kids again, but the bleating of the high chancellor got his and the kids attention. Looking to left, everyone saw Lekmet appear.

"Baa." Lekmet talking to Rhombulus.

"It can't be over, I can still fight!"

"Baa Baa!"

"Yes sir." Rhombulus recognizing that tone and admitting defeat.

"So did we pass with flying colors?" Star nonchantly asked.

"You two got lucky and that's it."

"Salty."

"Going to need fries with that one." Marco agreeing with Star as he used his dimensional scissors to open a portal back home for both them.

When they left, Rhombulus made up a crystal and smashed it in frustration, Lekmet witness this and simply walked away to let his friend let out all of his anger.

"Stupid kids, embarrassing me like that." He said to himself as he regained some of his composure. "You know what will calm me down?"

"Lifting some weights." The right snake hand answered.

"Eating some pizza." The left snake hand also answered.

"Later, but right now I think I'll go mess with the monster king and his monster loving wife."


And that's the end everybody, hope you all enjoyed it. So how was my interpretation of Rhombulus? Really I want to know, from his actions to beginning and the end, I want to know what do you think of him. Anyway you read the cameos of fan favorites, don't worry they will appear but lets talk about next time.

After an incident on Earth and remembering his older body is only in Hekapoo's dimension, Marco ask Star for way to be stronger in battle. However, results may vary when Marco's new power is just a little too aggressive.

You know what what's coming next so stay tuned and remember to R.F.F. (Review Favorite Follow) PEACE!