Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki Rewrite

by Monster King

This story is a rewrite of Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki with some changes to it for instance Kushina is the Kyubi and a different though similar harem for Naruto for more read on rated for safety god ever knows if lemons will show up in any story though they likely will show up much later in the story after characters have developed. Update: On permanent Hold see announcement

15. Chapter 15

Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki Rewrite

Legends

"Conversation"

'Using an Jutsu'

SHOUTING

'SHOUTING AN JUTSU'

Thoughts/Documents Being Read/Narrative

"Flashback Conversation"

'Flashback using an Jutsu'

FLASHBACK SHOUTING

'FLASHBACK SHOUTING AN JUTSU'

Powerful enough entity or person in transformation speaking

'Powerful enough entity or person in transformation using an Jutsu'

POWERFUL ENOUGH ENTITY OR PERSON IN TRANSFORMATION SHOUTING

'POWERFUL ENOUGH ENTITY OR PERSON IN TRANSFORMATION SHOUTING AN JUTSU'

(Side Notes)

Notes: This is the Third part of a Visit to Suna mini arc to answer a review of a reviewers about chapter three's contents I do not approve of rape in any fashion or manner it is just there to advance the story nothing more nothing less and I fully believe that those bastards whom did that to Karin got what they deserved especially since she was so young at the time.

Arc Two: Genin Days

Chapter Fifthteen: A Visit To Suna Part Three and Evil Plots

Naruto had decided to look for Pakura alone the experienced and well respected Jonin would give him a tour of Suna while he got to know her and hopefully not try to kill him he wouldn't blame her after all whom would want to be engaged to a man whom had multiple lovers already? He found himself eventually facing a five-foot five fair skinned woman she wore a purple sleeveless backless top shirt and light purple short pants with two lapels on the front and back she also wore a white obi around the waist and purple arm warmers that went up to her shoulders and bandages around her tights and ankles. She had pupiless brown eyes and DD cup breasts all in all she looked very attractive and was clearly a older woman she gave him a look over before sighing. "So you're the brat my Clan and Kage has engaged me off to" she said In a contemptuous voice Naruto winced a bit at her tone before composing himself and speaking "Yeah I am Naruto Uzumaki I hope we can get alone well Pakura San" he said.

"Yeah whatever look let's just get this tour over with let me make this perfectly clear I don't like men like you" said Pakura in a blunt tone of voice as possible as she began to take Naruto on a tour of Suna showing him the sites. She had heard a lot about him Kushina Sama's son whom had a harem granted she knew he probably didn't treat them badly because he was Kushina's son but still it irked her to no end that he had a harem. Still Naruto San is perhaps the only decent person that Has a Harem most whom due force their woman to become part of their harems but I still must see what kind of man he is just because he is Kushina Sama's son thought Pakura. Like most woman in the Elemental Nations Pakura looked up to Kushina as a hero and role mode to strive to be and was despite being a serious Kunoichi a bit of a fan girl of Kushina's though those whom called her that would die painfully.

She also knew that he likely didn't have a normal Childhood much like lady Gaara whom she had mixed feelings about on one hand Gaara clearly was a psychopath but on the other hand she knew why her friend was that way. "So how do you like Sunagakure so far" said Pakura striking up a conversation with Naruto "so far I like it a lot despite the heat and how people treat Lady Gaara it is different than Konohagakure that is for sure but there are some good people here" said Naruto. Pakura smiled at what he said as the Scorch release user continued to show Naruto around she did admit to herself that the boy was very attractive than again he did take after his father mostly in looks save for the whiskers on his face which he got from Kushina Sama. "though it does seem like you also have problems with your council we do as well in particular half of our Civilian council is corrupt and looks only after its own interests" said Naruto causing Pakura to sigh as how that sounded like her cities council as well.

As Pakura gave Naruto a Tour of Sunagakure villainous plot were going about elsewhere in the Elemental Nations namely in MBI land where Minaka Hiroto ruled Supreme as the twisted madman walked down one of his hidden labs that he had in the Shinto Teito. These labs did many things from experiments on people, Yokai and Animals to creating and experimenting on Sekirei Androids to experiments with the Cursed Seals he Naraku and Aki develop. In this lab was his chief scientist a Dr, Gero a exiled scientist whom used to work for Kumogakure before his inhuman experiments and crimes caught up to him and Arashi exiled him. "So how are my projects going Gero?" asked Minaka the mad scientist grinned before laughing loudly "Everything is running smoothly boss I especially my refinements on your Zetsu clones, Youma and our Cursed Seal's" said Gero.

Minaka nodded as he gazed at his Chief Scientist with a serious look on his face "Good I was especially impressed with your work on our cursed Seal's of Heaven and Earth you perfected them quite admirably" said Minaka in a gleeful tone of voice. "Yes of course before the power of science even a Biju's power is nothing I am currently working on perfecting that cursed seal of hell as you requested but the prototype requires a test run" said Gero in a deadly calm voice. Minaka nodded "So that's what you sent Kushina's way I hope the test subject preforms well" said Minaka Gero sighed in depression "while the Cursed Seal of Hell grants astonishing power enough to rival or surpass the Cursed Seal of Heaven and Earth there have been some flaws in the seal" said Gero. Minaka raised a eyebrow "explain Gero what you mean by flaws" and Gero did "While it only has one very powerful Transformation state The immense Jaki flooding the users body eats the users Chakra at a alarming rate and puts a immense strain on the users body eventually the user dies from these side effects and is reduced to a dried up mummified husk if they don't turn it off by the time it eats up all their Chakra" said Gero.

Minaka stared at Gero "Good job I trust you will eventually improve the seal and reduce the negative side effects Gero San?" asked Minaka and Gero nodded as Minaka began to leave him behind to do his work. Meanwhile Pakura and Naruto were eating at a local Café in Sunagakure Pakura by then had decided she legitimately enjoyed Naruto's company despite her somewhat disapproval of his harem she had yet to meet her future harem sisters anyways though she had met his Sensei Rangiku san whom had checked up on him. Naruto was not a bad person she decided in fact she truly didn't mind being engaged to him sure she would have to share him but she could see why so many girls liked him he was different from a lot of men. In fact, he hadn't done anything overly perverted during the whole time they spent together beyond calling her beautiful at least once during their time together yes he was alright as far as men go.

He could have been worse much worse in fact and the greenish orange haired woman was grateful that Naruto seemed to be a good person as he could have easily forced her to have sex with him and unless she wanted to become a missing nin she would have had to comply. However, he had during their entire time together merely spent it getting to know her tomorrow he would be doing the same thing with Lady Gaara providing the psychotic teenager didn't kill him first Pakura hoped she didn't because she truly didn't mind Naruto's company or and that she was engaged to him. They could have chosen a much worse fiancée for her that was for certain tomorrow she would be spending time with his other lovers whom were here to get to know them as she would share him with them. She hoped they were real kunoichi like her though she had heard good things about the ones that came with him so far from the reports she had read about them from Suna's Intelligence about Team Rangiku

"It was a pleasure meeting with you Pakura Chan I hope that it was a pleasant experience for you as well I don't want our relationship to be a burden on you or your career this was a unexpected for me as it was you Pakura Chan" said Naruto politely. "This Date was also a pleasant experience for me Naruto Kun I hope our relationship continues to be a pleasant one son of Lady Kushina Sama" said Pakura with a smile as the two left the café they had been eating at and went their separate ways. Naruto returned to his hotel while Pakura went to report to her Kazekage on how her time with Naruto went and her opinion on him though she didn't have a say in being engaged to him Rasa still valued her opinion. Meanwhile Naruto went to inform his other lovers of how his date with Pakura went and they grilled him on it at the same time in the Sabaku clan's compound a certain redhead continued to sleep away peacefully under the careful watch of her siblings.

End of Chapter

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