Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki Rewrite

by Monster King

This story is a rewrite of Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki with some changes to it for instance Kushina is the Kyubi and a different though similar harem for Naruto for more read on rated for safety god ever knows if lemons will show up in any story though they likely will show up much later in the story after characters have developed. Update: On permanent Hold see announcement

16. Chapter 16

Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki Rewrite

Legends

"Conversation"

'Using an Jutsu'

SHOUTING

'SHOUTING AN JUTSU'

Thoughts/Documents Being Read/Narrative

"Flashback Conversation"

'Flashback using an Jutsu'

FLASHBACK SHOUTING

'FLASHBACK SHOUTING AN JUTSU'

Powerful enough entity or person in transformation speaking

'Powerful enough entity or person in transformation using an Jutsu'

POWERFUL ENOUGH ENTITY OR PERSON IN TRANSFORMATION SHOUTING

'POWERFUL ENOUGH ENTITY OR PERSON IN TRANSFORMATION SHOUTING AN JUTSU'

(Side Notes)

Notes: This is the Fourth part of a Visit to Suna mini arc and in my universe woman outnumber men just enough that Harems both because and not because of the CRA Laws can happen often enough and no I won't pair Naruto with Kushina I am not into incest. The reason for woman outnumbering men will be eventually explained in one of the coming chapters also there are other non humans outside of Yokai in my world and they use Chakra. Doctor Gero is indeed the same Doctor Gero from the Dragonball franchise but modified to fit my story verse just so you know.

Arc Two: Genin Days

Chapter Sixteen: A Visit to Suna Part Four

He had just woken up taken a shower and headed outside planning to head to meet up with Lady Gaara for their date that was scheduled for today he hoped she appreciated what he did for her but would understand otherwise if she didn't. Yesterday after his date with Pakura he had a long discussion with his other lovers about her they were in fact planning on getting to know Pakura themselves today and had arranged to spend a day with her since she was free. He grinned as he saw Gaara standing there waiting for him by herself an impatient look on her face as she stared at him with suspicion clearly written all over her. "While I should kill you, all things considered I won't even if mother is screaming for your blood right now Naruto San" spoke Gaara in a icy tone of voice as she glared at him.

Naruto sighed but shrugged he guessed he couldn't win them all over especially those whom like Gaara didn't end up with him willingly but what was with her addressing Shukaku as mother? The Ichibi rarely assumed a form outside of its Biju one nor did it associate itself with a specific gender like Kushina whom preferred to be a female. Naruto smiled warmly at Gaara determined to at least not have her hate him he knew she was somewhat insane but he could live with that as long as she didn't try to kill him again. "No mother I will not kill Naruto San you saw how powerful he was he will silence us again" she said Naruto raised a eyebrow at this statement as he watched Gaara seemingly mutter to herself but he knew she was talking to Shukaku. "Damn demon slut is talking to itself again we should try to save that boy from…" said a nearby Civilian but he never got the chance to finish his sentence as her still active even as they spoke so called Shield of Sand move on its own.

At first Naruto had thought her sand powers to be a product of Gaara being the Ichibi's Container but now he saw and felt clearly that it was not Shukaku's Yoki moving the sand it was Gaara's Chakra and will moving it. 'Sabaku Kyu' Gaara spoke seemingly encasing the Civilian in a coffin of sand leaving only the man's arms exposed "Gaara there is no..," Naruto never finished his sentence as the psychotic girl smirked a bloodthirsty grin that reminded Naruto of his sister Anko a lot. 'Sabaku Sosu' she spoke coldly with a touch of insanity from the grin on her face as she killed the man caught in her sand coffin a fountain of blood spraying out from the top of it and leaking out from its sides as she apparently liquified the body inside as the arms dangling from the sides of the coffin came off the body falling onto the streets. He understood why she did what she did but he still didn't like it but considering that his mother had done the same for him and his siblings and he had done the same for Karin that time he wasn't bothered as much as he should be.

"Why aren't you bothered Naruto San?" asked Gaara curiosity in her voice "The civilian likely had it coming I take it they made you this way?" he inquired curiously making Gaara blink in surprise but knowing what Naruto was exactly she realized though Naruto wasn't as bloodthirsty and insane as her he understood her actions better than even her father or siblings. Her Shield of sand briefly paused in its hovering around her as she sighed "You also realize that it is you whom is controlling your sand not just the Ichibi as I have mostly cut it off from its former activities with you" said Naruto. Gaara blinked in surprise a look of shock on the redhead's face as she processed what Naruto said to her "I will have to speak with my father now that my mother's thirst for blood has been quenched by this idiot's blood it seems that I have Sand Release" said Gaara softly. They began to walk down the streets of Suna side by side talking as casually as it was possible for them to do so giving that Gaara looked like she wanted to kill somebody during the whole conversation and the stares and pointing the more stupid villagers and Shinobi were giving them didn't help.

He also noted that there was also a good deal of Ninja whom were merely cautious of Gaara which was to be expected giving what he had learned so far of her mental state Gaara Chan could really use a Therapist and Mind Healer good knows how badly she needs it damn civilians unable to tell the difference between a Kunai and scroll thought Naruto bitterly. Gaara looked at him funnily before they continued their walk aka Date through Suna to their intended destination that she wanted to bring Naruto to a little park in Suna. Yes, Suna had a park as hard as it was to believe the Satoshi clan of Mokuton users created and maintained Suna Central Park much to the enjoyment of the locals. From what Naruto knew of Gaara's Clan the Sabaku clan they did have a bloodline a powerful one at that served them well firstly the Sabaku bloodline granted its users larger Chakra reserves about two levels higher than their current Power Rank.

Second there was a good chance that the user had the Advance Release Magnet Release along with the accompanying Basic Releases that formed the basis for it Thirdly they may or may not have the Sand Release Advance Nature as Gaara does and thus Wind and Earth Basic Natures. Fourthly the Sabaku clan's members along with always having larger Chakra reserves have a natural and powerful affinity for Wind Release, Finally Sabaku are known for being born with a natural talent for one particular field in the Adept arts or powers. For Temari that manifested in her natural talent for the usage of Battle Fans' and their associated techniques for Kankuro whom Naruto had yet to meet that manifested in from what he learned of the boy his natural talent for puppetry. For Gaara it likely manifested in her more powerful Sand Release Nature and talent for techniques involving its usage for Rasa himself it manifested in his enhanced form of Magnet Release namely his mastery over his Gold Dust.

For Pakura Chan's bloodline that her family had he knew from conversation with her as well as his knowledge of the known Bloodlines of the Elemental Nations that her clan's first power was their Scorch Release Advance Release that all members of the Kazehi clan had. Secondly and related to their scorch release was the clan's powerful natural affinities for Wind and Fire Basic Releases. Thirdly was the clan's unique hair that he already seen and admired on Pakura, fourthly all members of their clan Hanyo or Human had no pupils in their eyes he found that trait of her clan somehow beautiful as well. Finally, all Kazehi clan members were natural prodigies in the usage of Elemental Techniques building on their bloodline's first two powers it ran in their blood literally to be masters of the techniques though even amongst her kin Pakura was uniquely powerful already Low S rank.

As Gaara and Naruto entered Suna Central Park Gaara found herself admiring Naruto due to how she had started to feel about him lately God I can't be falling for him right? Sure he is Kushina Sama's son and even mother finds him attractive but…her thoughts trailed off as Ichibi Shukaku spoke up in her head. Currently the Ichibi was taking the form of a tall dark skin woman with smooth black hair that fell two feet past her shoulders and dark eyes that had a athletic build and DD cup breasts she was dressed in a white kimono with black pants Shukaku also had pointy ears and a tail made of sand that resembled her tail in her Biju form. He's hot daughter I say take him right now and ride him into the setting sun damn the consequences said Shukaku through their link making Gaara blush in confusion and shock. Gaara knew that Shukaku contrary to what everyone else knew about her preferred to be seen as a female much like her beloved big sister Kyubi.

Ever since Naruto fixed Shukaku's seal the Ichibi had revealed that she did think of Gaara as a daughter despite not truly being Gaara's mother much to Gaara's disappointment and however bloodthirsty she was she did truly care about Gaara. But that's not right and besides I am not a whore despite what those idiot civilians call me thought Gaara back to Shukaku whom laughed loudly before growling a bit. Of course, not daughter you are better than that but he is a man amongst man especially since he is Kushina Sama's son and deserves the best females this world has to offer that includes you since you also deserve the best this world hast to offer and whom better than Naruto Sama said Shukaku through their link. "Gaara Chan are you there oh your talking to Shukaku san sorry" apologized Naruto as he got out of Gaara's face whom blushed at the close quarters as the two sat on the grass side by side as Gaara thought about what Shukaku said and her own options.

After spending some time in Suna central park Naruto walked Gaara back to her home and dropped her off before heading back to his hotel as both teens thought of the pleasant date they had and Naruto's girls got back from their time spent with Pakura and grilled him about Gaara.

End of Chapter

That's it for Chapter Sixteen hoped you enjoyed it a lot please don't flame me I don't flame others and I expect the same treatment if you don't like the story and have actually read it do what I do and don't review it since that is what I would have done for you.