Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki Rewrite

by Monster King

This story is a rewrite of Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki with some changes to it for instance Kushina is the Kyubi and a different though similar harem for Naruto for more read on rated for safety god ever knows if lemons will show up in any story though they likely will show up much later in the story after characters have developed. Update: On permanent Hold see announcement

17. Chapter 17

Chronicles of Naruto Uzumaki Rewrite

Legends

"Conversation"

'Using an Jutsu'

SHOUTING

'SHOUTING AN JUTSU'

Thoughts/Documents Being Read/Narrative

"Flashback Conversation"

'Flashback using an Jutsu'

FLASHBACK SHOUTING

'FLASHBACK SHOUTING AN JUTSU'

Powerful enough entity or person in transformation speaking

'Powerful enough entity or person in transformation using an Jutsu'

POWERFUL ENOUGH ENTITY OR PERSON IN TRANSFORMATION SHOUTING

'POWERFUL ENOUGH ENTITY OR PERSON IN TRANSFORMATION SHOUTING AN JUTSU'

(Side Notes)

Notes: This is the final part of the Visit to Suna mini arc and when Naruto and company returns to Konohagakure as of now the lettered Rankings that measure power in this world are power Ranks as I am now calling them. To show these changes and my two new added power Ranks of SS and X to the mix so far this story has 7 reviews, 9'075 views, 67 favorites and followers and belongs to 2 communities.

Civilian

E Rank

D-Rank

C-Rank

B-Rank

A-Rank

S-Rank

SS-Rank

X-Rank

Arc Two: Genin Days

Chapter Seventeen: A Visit to Suna Finale, the Return, Trouble at home and Lovers coming to visit

Naruto sighed as he got up later than usual he knew his lovers had gotten up a few hours earlier to get to know Gaara like they did Pakura so they could report to his other lovers about them Gaara surprisingly agreed to this. As he got up he saw Rangiku sensei looking at him in amusement as she played chess against herself from the looks of it the game was close "So Naruto san have an eventful few days in Suna?" she said in a teasing voice. Naruto groaned and flushed but nodded "Yeah sensei it was very interesting these last few days" said Naruto with a smile on his face as he spoke to Rangiku. Rangiku nodded as she placed the white king in Checkmate ending her likely long chess game Naruto by now knew how long her games against herself lasted as the like all her kin brilliant Nara woman smiled at him.

"We are leaving for Konohagakure this afternoon hope you are ready Naruto San" said Rangiku a smile on her face as Naruto nodded "Yeah I know it will take three weeks to reach the border from Suna than a month to reach Konoha from the borders of our two countries" said Naruto. "Lets just kill some time before we leave and meet some of the other locals alright? While your girls get to know Gaara before we leave again" said Rangiku a smirk on her face as Naruto hoped nothing happened between Gaara and his current lovers. Naruto escorted by Rangiku spent the whole day walking around Sunagakure getting to know people and he met a lot of people a lot of whom the Half Biju befriended and others not so much. Yokai, Non-Humans, Hybrids and Humans alike he befriended though he did have trouble with certain civilians due to his relationship with Gaara.

After leaving Suna and saying goodbye to Pakura and Gaara plus Gaara's family he only regretted not getting to know Rasa better they began their long track home it at the pace they usually went took three weeks to get to the Land of Wind's border with the Land of Fire. Then it took a full month to get to Konohagakure from the borders they ran into little trouble along the way mostly bandits that hoped to get lucky but found more than they bargained for in Team Rangiku. They were met by the Chunin B ranked Guards Kotetsu and Izumo whom guarded the gates of Konohagakure both friends of Naruto's family had worried looks on their faces "Naruto san I hate to worry you but Kushina Sama was attacked while you were gone don't worry she dealt with the attackers" Said Kotetsu. Naruto and company had alarmed then relieved looks on their faces at Kotetsu's words "However they did give her a good deal of trouble not surprising considering the new Cursed Seals we found on them oh and Naruto the Hokage wants to speak with you" said Izumo.

Naruto and company proceeded to the Hokage's tower though in truth Naruto wanted to check up on his family but couldn't due to the Hokage's request to see him and his team he wondered what Hiruzen wanted to see him about. He saw Hinata and Kikyo there both staring at a group of very familiar looking girls with affection clear in their eyes something that Yoruichi, Ranko, Azula and Satsuki were mimicking in their eyes and he gulped at seeing them wondering what these close friends of his were doing here. Visiting them were Samui and Yugito Nii and Karui Abarai from Kumo and Kurotsuchi Odaki from Iwa whom were some of his lovers he was very happy to see them. He wondered when they got here and how long they had been here regardless he was very happy to see them here right now and wanted to take them out on a few dates through Konoha maybe as a group he wondered how much more powerful they had gotten.

"we are visiting for the day Naruto Kun are parents and Kages gave permission for us to be here" said the Nekomusume and Jinchuriki known as Yugito Nii with as her cat tail swished with excitement behind her like Samui's was as they stared at Naruto with affection in their eyes. Karui it should be noted was the only human amongst these fiancées and lovers from Kumo and Iwa Yugito's and Samui's more demonic features were retractive cat like claws, whiskers on their faces, white furry cat tails and cat ears features both full Nekomusume and Nekomusume Hanyo have in common. Kurotsuchi's more demonic features as a Lava Monkey Yokai were her red monkey tail and claws features both full Lava Monkey Yokai and Hanyo Lava Monkey's had in common with each other. Karui Abarai was of course was fully human though she was a Adept and a member of a bloodline clan that was on Kumo's clan council a lot of Yokai and Hanyo existed in Kumogakure and she also had a Zanpakuto that sat on her right hip in its scabbard in its sealed form.

She inherited it from her recently deceased father Renji whom died mysteriously on a mission it was called Zabimaru and it was a combat type Zanpakuto that's powers only enhanced its combat potential but did little else. From her letters Naruto had found out she had achieved Shikai already and he had in turn confessed about his Zanpakuto Ryujin Jakka which he had yet to use. Zabimaru was a interesting blade its sealed form was that of a standard Katana but when it was released via the Command Roar Zabimaru it transformed into a six segmented blade each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with pick lick protrusions on the front and back of each segment. The ones on the front are much longer than the ones on the back the primary power of Zabimaru's Shikai according to Karui is that these segments can grow and extend virtually without limit the segments are connected by a stretchable thread.

These features make Zabimaru's Shikai according to Karui useful as a sword/whip hybrid of sorts possessing the properties of both however Zabimaru can only do this stretching attack three times before it must enter a resting state and recover for four minutes before it can enter its whip sword hybrid state again. Zabimaru also in this state according to Karui is also more vulnerable than when in its sword state though it is still very tough Zabimaru also has a special attack usable when its Shikai is broken called Hiva Zekko. Karui used her Chakra still running through the Zanpakuto's shard and the Rat and Snake hand signs to levitate the broken shards of Zabimaru and executes a very devastating omni directional attack on her foes with them. Using this attack is very risky however though the Zanpakuto automatically reforms it will not be able to enter its Shikai state again for a hour as it reforms.

Soon after meeting and greeting and after the Konoha based girls left and wished him a good time with his out of town lovers from Kumo and Iwa after kissing him off course and after Hiruzen dismissed him he soon made his way with his girls to the park. Naruto grinned as he took them to the park clearly knowing he was going to have a good time with them there he looked forward to his time with them at it. "So when do we show up at this cool park Harry Kun?" asked Samui a smile on her face as they walked through Konoha towards their destination enjoying their time with their lover. "Not to much longer Samui Chan I take my Konoha girls here a lot I promise you all will enjoy Konoha Central Park I know how much you all appreciate nature" .said Naruto a smile on his face.

Soon they saw it a extremely beautiful and lovely and large park right in the middle of Konohagakure created supposedly by the combined effort of the Yamanaka clan and Shodaime Hokage. Karui. Samui, Yugito and Kurotsuchi were all speechless at seeing it and thinking they were going to spend time here made them rather happy as they all were nature lovers much like their boyfriend was. "Thank you Naruto Kun" they said as they all kissed Naruto at once whom blushed at the kiss and smiled as they all began to enter the park clearly intending on enjoying their time at this famous local.

End of Chapter