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Chapter 11: You are exiled
"Balto? Sweetheart are you here?" Aniu said when she entered her den. "Your beloved son is not here, but I am here if it interests you," Angela said when lying on her back and looking up. "Since when do you care about my attention?" Aniu asked surprised. "I don't care, I just hope my grounding is over," Angela replied. "Okay, you're free to go, but if you act like that again, I won't be so merciful," Aniu said. "Finally ... thanks mther," Angela said and stretched as she stepped out of the den. "Where are you going?" Aniu asked. "I'm going to Helles, I have to prepare for the moon festival ... I'm going to challenge Lisa to a duel," Angela said and began to leave. "But in the afternoon there is a funeral ..." Aniu said when Angela was getting further away. "Funerals are not parties that I like," Angela shouted and started running. "Did she say she was going to challenge Lisa to a duel? ... ANGELA!" Aniu screamed and noticed that everyone was looking at her and she hid in the den with embarrassment.
At that time, Balto and Daro lay on the hill and watched the Wolf Valley. "I'm glad you're okay, Balto," Daro said as he looked at Balto. "I'd rather be dead ..." Balto said looking straight ahead. "What? why?" Daro asked, surprised by his friend's reply. "If I died, I wouldn't have to leave the Wolf Valley and my mother wouldn't have problems because of me," Balto said, still looking ahead. "I know this is not easy Balto, but when I become Alpha you will be able to come back, I promise you," Daro said and touched Balto to get his attention. "I promise you my friend," Daro said as he sat down. "You'll be a great leader, but I don't know if I want to come back here," Balto said when he looked at Daro.
"That's good! Go away and never come back! Nobody wants you here! You bring nothing but problems and your mother is dead because of you!" Balto said when looking at Kodi. "Emm dad? Is everything okay?" Kodi asked looking at Balto. "NO! MY MOTHER IS DEAD AND THIS IS MY FAULT!" Balto shouted furiously. "Calm down, Dad! It's not your fault," Kodi said, trying to calm his father. Balto looked at Kodi and came close to his face. "How can you know that? You're just the result of the failure that I am!" Balto shouted in anger. "Thats hurts... but you are not a failure, Dad, you are a hero," Kodi said softly. "I-I'm sorry, son. Mentioning my past is not easy for me," Balto said as he calmed down and sat back in his place. "Okay, I understand, but can you continue? I think the last thing Daro said is not true," Kodi said, looking at his father. "Right. He said something different ..."
"Why don't you want to come back here? The Wolf Valley is your home!" Daro said. "A house where nobody wants me," Balto said, looking at Daro with a tear in his eye. "That's not true! Many wolves want you to be here..." "Who?" "...me, Lisa, your mother, Indi... Emm..." Daro stopped when he didn't know who else to mention. "Exactly! These are just the names of my friends, no one else wants me to stay." Balto said when tears began to flow down his nuzzle. "Oh Balto, don't cry, I'm with you. Promise me that when I became Alpha you will come to visit the Wolf Valley," Daro said and hugged Balto. "Okay, I promise," Balto said and wiped his tears with his paw.
"Ha! You promised him that you would come to the Wolf Valley when he became Alpha, and now he is Alpha!" Kodi said with a smile. "I know but ..." Balto began. "You always keep your word, Dad," Kodi said. "Okay fine. I'll go there but only if you come with me," Balto said. "I was hoping you would say that," Kodi said with a smile. "Can I ..." Balto asked. "Yeah sure,"
"I think we should go to the funeral," Daro said as he looked at the sky. "Okay, but let's go to my mother first," Daro nodded at that, and they went in the direction of Aniu's den.
"Hey mom I'm back," Balto said as he entered the den. "It's good that you're here, we have to go now, the funeral has started," Aniu said. "Oh hello Daro," "Hello, Aniu," "I have to warn you ... your dad survived the encounter with the bear, and now he has a great wound on his face..." Aniu said softly. "Is he okay?" Daro asked, though he showed no worries. "I think so," Aniu answered.
"I doubt it was a lesson to him," Daro said. "What do you mean?" Aniu asked. "Dad is a terrible leader, sticking to the rules and stupid traditions ... I will have to fight to death with my own brother just to choose a new Alpha. Cant it be done otherwise?" Daro said looking at Aniu. "I've been trying to convince Damis for several years that the moon festival is a terrible idea and that we have to stop doing it, but your father didn't listen to me even when I was in the highest possible position ..." Aniu said. "This is the reason why I want to become Alpha, I will change the rules to improve life, safety and development of the Wolf Valley." Daro said proudly. "For such a young wolf you speak very wisely," Aniu said with a smile looking at Daro. "Let's go now," Aniu said and three of them left the den and went to the funeral.
When Aniu Balto and Daro arrived at the funeral, Damis spoke. "Jax was our best hunter ... he was always persistent and patient, but as you can see being a hunter is not a safe task ... I have found it out today myself. * Sigh * Being a hunter is not a job, it is service and every service has thier risk. " Damis said when looking at the gathered. "Every great hunter has a story, for some it ends and for others it continues with their children. Fortunately, the story of Jax doesnt end because Indi is pregnant with Jax's puppies," Damis said with a smile, whispers begins. "But what if males are born? Then you will have to banish them," One of the wolves said. "There will be no such a need ... I will train them," Damis said proudly, and everyone began to whisper again. Balto looked at his mother and saw the anger in her eyes. "Are you kidding me?!" Aniu screamed in anger, everyone turned and looked at Aniu. "Shut up Aniu, you thankless dog's bitch!" Damis shouted and began to growl.
"Did you hear that?" Angela said when looking at Helles. "What?" Helles asked. "Come! My mother is arguing with your father again, I have an idea." Angela entered the group of wolves. "In what is Balto worse!?" Aniu snarled at Damis who stood in front of her. "He's not a wolf! He's worse at that!" Damis said growling. "There is no place for such freaks in our valley!" Angela said in a different voice. "That's right ... Aniu, youre questioning my opinion, you oppose me, you don't listen to my orders and you broke the holy tradition of purity of blood! I didn't banish you for it! You should be grateful to me for that! But I'm done now! Aniu, you are exiled with your son Balto from the Wolf Valley! You can stay to see the fight of my sons, but then you have to get out of here ... and never come back!" Damis said and walked away to his den. When Damis passed away everyone was still looking at Aniu and Balto. "Mom, let's go home, please," Balto said looking at his mother. Aniu stood frozen for a moment. "Y-Yes, sure ..." Aniu answered and with Balto she went towards her den.
Lisa watched her mother leave, and began looking around the guests until she noticed Angela smiling. Lisa sped up and ran into Angela, thus turning her over. "What did you do?! Because of you, Alpha banished our mother!" Lisa screamed when standing over Angela. "What do you care, he didn't banish you." Angela said laughing. "I'll kill you bitch!" Lisa screamed and began to growl. "Speaking of which, I'm challenging you to a duel at the moon festival. Lets make a deal...The winner will stay in the Wolf Valley and the loser ... you know ... will die," Angela said, pushed Lisa away and stood up. "So what will it be, little sister?" Angela asked with a smile. "I already told you, I will kill you ..." Lisa said and walked away towards Aniu's den. "Let's go celebrate, mother certainly gonna grounds me again so let's go to the lake." Angela said and went towards the lake followed by Helles.
"Why are you so happy babe?" Helles asked. "You know ... we have a beautiful evening, I made my mother banished and I will kill my own sister. What more can I desire?" Angela said with a laugh. "You are a monster ..." Angela looked surprised at Helles. "... I like this." Helles said and started laughing together with Angela. Their laughter was interrupted by the sound of breaking branches in the trees. "Did you hear that?" Angela asked. "What?" As Helles said, as they heard something hit the ground. "What was that?" Helles asked. After a while, they heard the sound of wings, as if a large bird flew away, and the only thing they saw in the sky was a pair of red eyes.
To be continued...
Okay that's it. As you can see, things have not gone well for Ania, now she has also been banished ... And as Whitewolf1224 predicted, so Aniu was banished with the help of Angela. Unfortunately story is coming to an end ... the next chapter will be about the competition.
Don't worry, after finishing this story I will start with the second part immediately, and I'll start writing a new story with my new friend who gave me a lot of advice for this story and thus made this story even better, you can know him as JustSteveGut. Our story will be about the life of Aleu and her son.
I hope you enjoyed the chapter! See you!From now on I will be answering your reviews, so if you want to ask something, go ahead. Here are the reviews from the last chapter:
JustASteveGut
Pretty good chapter
Thank you! I'm glad you like my story!
Titanflame
my dear Damis, this is the karma. That bear should have hurt you even more for how you behaved with Aniu.
Exactly! Punishment will reach everyone. Initially, the figure of Damis was to be favorable to Ania. He was supposed to be strict against the rules but he was not to be a monster, but he is much more interesting. And so Damis is a scary asshole towards Ania, and this will not change, it will only get worse.
Arika Koski
If this fanfic was a movie would it be rated R?
I understand that you mean blood, Damis's massacred face, that he lost his eye and that he curses so much. I think so, but I think Damis deserved it. But if it was a movie, I'm sure it wouldn't be suitable for children.